The Time-Traveling Master Was Taken Advantage of by the General.

Let's warm things up for ourselves. Are there any friends who have strayed in? Come and leave a paw print~

It's great~ The novel is now in a leisurely style. Master Yun has a loving character, that is funny and cute from time to time and gentle as a spring breeze, and then the general feels a bit naive but still stable. There are no bad villagers, they are all simple and enthusiastic, and the story line is really good. I really like this. [Laughing out loud]

The content is very interesting, the characters have their own characteristics, and there is a transitional stage from farming to cultivating immortality that is not abrupt at all. I really like it. That's right, it would be great if I could be more rigorous when writing. Because there are so many typos and omissions, even the character names are frequently wrong. The most obvious and most common ones are "Si" looking north and "Guan" looking north. The finale was very sudden, and it felt like it ended with a lot left unfinished. For example, what is the ending of the big villain? What happened to the two protagonists in the end? Can they be together smoothly? What's going on with Bai Langxing and the Boundary Ark? Did Bai Langxing and the master get together later? There are also junior brothers and sisters who stayed in the small world, and members of the Yue clan. If the drama is going to be supplemented in the future, can you also give the minor characters a clear ending? The ending is rushed and leaves many holes unfilled.

It feels like a very comfortable life. Yun Shu has a good personality and is very cute when she occasionally gets nervous. Feng Qi also likes it when he faces his own heart. At present, it seems that there should be a deputy CP. I look forward to the next plot [Sending Hearts]

"Fun" is my overall feeling about this novel. Whether it is in the small theater where "the author has something to say" or some of the descriptions and dialogues in the text, it is very interesting, especially the way the protagonists meet is very novel. The biggest drawback is that it's not finished

Super Invincible Thunderbolt looks great!

It was quite interesting, but the ending was a little rushed. They should have gone to the world of cultivation, killed everyone, and then broken through space and returned to the Wei Kingdom to rescue Xiao Tiandao and reunite with their brothers. Personally, I felt it was better to write this.

Very good. Can the author change the cover? This seems to be Fang Chengyi from Ni Shuihan (please give me some advice, don't say I'm looking for trouble)

It's so sweet to me. Woohoo. Sisters who like sweet cookies, don't miss this book! I highly recommend this book if you are in a bad mood or bored! The emotional line is very natural and super heartwarming😢The writing and plot are both good! None of the protagonists are weak, and they both grow up. I'm both happy and sad to see it end. These two guys didn't get to the home plate when they finished. I thought they had to wait until the home plate to finish.

It's pretty good. In the end, the kitten is the national master, and he can finally accompany his master all the time. In the end, Yun Shu and Yun Shu haven't hit the home run yet, which is unheard of [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Ahhhhhhhhh, big brother, start the second part, hurry up! Otherwise, I will go crazy. It's not over yet, the CPs haven't been formed yet, and the pits haven't been filled yet. It's over, Laoda, part two! I want to see it! Write quickly! It's so good, I love watching it and I want to watch it again!

It's super beautiful, relaxing, very good. It's rare to see something so beautiful. It's a piece of farming. It's like a relaxing village with green mountains and green water. It's so beautiful. I can't explain it. Go and have a look. It's true. ヽ(゜▽゜)－C<(/;◇;)/~[Drag away]

This chapter is so captivating that I can't help but praise it! Good writing has its own magic power, bringing back memories of childhood. The figures playing wildly in the fields, the smoke from the village, and the crowing of cocks in the morning all appear before our eyes. It also reminds us of the Chinese textbooks of our childhood. The words are also so vivid and lifelike, full of simplicity and warmth.

Gaga looks good! Must be five stars! (Don't stop updating ×N!!! Please!) No, what about the farming article that you promised? I almost burned out my CPU from doing math this week, I just want to relax! I remember it started as a farming article, right? Right? Right?

This novel is so satisfying to me! I just need this kind of novel at this time! In the early stage, daily life in the countryside was fun from time to time, which promoted feelings and made life feel quite comfortable. In the later period, I began to focus on describing the main plot of the battle, which can be regarded as switching from a pastoral novel to a fairy tale (this is the first time I see this kind of transition, usually when someone becomes an official in the imperial court), which is sweet and sad, and more importantly, anxious. This main plot develops very quickly and is huge in scale. I was very anxious while watching it. The ending felt a bit rushed later on, but it was indeed an open HE ending and well written. You have to figure out the world and the unity of the protagonists on your own. Anyway, it will be very sweet, and it is very suitable for fanfic derivatives. Two strong men, rural love → passionate salvation To be honest, I was quite surprised by the author's twist. Some people may not be comfortable with it. It was also my first time reading it. But it didn't crash, it was very well written! So be sure to check it out! ! Blood Book, please make a sequel! Not enough to watch at all! [Grass has been planted][grass has been planted][grass has been planted][grass has been planted]

After two days, I finally finished watching it [face covering]! ! ! The setting is very attractive, and the writing is also good. As the author said in the end, the writing failed in the end. There are many pitfalls🕳️ that have not been filled in, especially the big conspiracy at the end. I can only look forward to the next article. That's all, bye👋🏻

I loved this book so much that I actually read it all in one go. The author would like to work on it. I really like the settings in the book. And the characters are both clean. You can do it even if you have a deputy Cp. The story is really silly, and I like that. Sisters, hurry up and get into the trap! [Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] The author will support you greatly and will always support you!

It's very interesting to watch and I like it very much. There is no sadistic plot. When I saw the second part of "Cultivation to Immortality", I almost forgot that the first part was about farming. I read this book after reading too many stories about the characters fighting each other, physically and emotionally, and I really finished it in one sitting. Very good💙💙💙

In fact, it wasn't very good when I first started watching it. I was attracted mainly by the characters of the pig's feet and the supporting characters, as well as their thoughts that may be different from ordinary people! ! (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ Huge push

I really like this book by the author. I think the ending of this book is good, but it's just a bit regretful. I hope the next book can make up for the regret! Also, have a good New Year, and try your best to write extras after the New Year!

It's very interesting to watch, the world view is huge, the protagonist's outlook on life is also very positive, and it's very comfortable to watch. The shortcoming is that the ending is a bit rushed, many lines are not clear, and the pits are not filled in. The world view is large, but the scope of the protagonist's activities is very small, and the world view is not well utilized. I hope that the author will have time and energy to write in the future [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I still have unfinished thoughts [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It feels like a semi-group portrait. It's very comfortable to watch. Is this the bond? In the early stage of farming, in the middle and later stages of cultivating immortals, the tone is casual, which looks great! But the author has some holes that he hasn't filled in yet. I'd like to know everyone's follow-up. . ! ! There's a side story! Where did the extra episode go! Young lovers are delicious. The senior brother and the second senior brother have been entangled in this life, and they will be like this in the next life. I can't comment on Bai Langxing. It's so complicated. Why did he fall into the trap again? I think it's probably because the master still has a little bit of Bai Langxing in his heart. Alas. The ending is very rushed. The author's other book mentioned Yun Fuzi and the others a little bit. It's great to read it briefly. Everyone should be happy.

[Shocked] When I thought there was still an extra episode, the system said it was over, [face covering] My heart felt so uncomfortable! Anyway, I still like the author's writing style. Keep up the good work [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's really good-looking. Let's talk about it. I really want to see the story behind Master and Bai Langxing. How did Bai Langxing, a sinister boy, finally get hold of the master? There is also the subsequent journey of Yun Shu and Feng Qi to cultivate immortality. I feel that the author did not write enough about this point.

It's really, really super pretty.

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. I hope the author can make up for the mistakes.

Not bad, not bad, good to watch, with reasonable logic and interesting language. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor a pervert. He has good attributes and a lot of room for development. I am looking forward to the follow-up. If I have the energy, I hope the author will make a second part to see how slowly the two of them grow up. The side story is not enough to watch.

It's very interesting, it's about daily life, and there are a lot of silly plots, it's really funny [laughs], but the protagonists are a bit slow together, a bit procrastinated, but it's understandable, anyway it's very interesting [laughs], the villagers are really super loving

It's quite good to watch. The pace is slow at the beginning, and then it gets a little more intense from the back. The plot is more ups and downs, and it gets a little bit sad at the end. Then the ending is good, not bad, I like it very much. I almost thought this book was going to be a BE. Fortunately, the ending is, they went to the world of cultivation. I hope that some extra stories about the world of cultivation can be added by then. I really want to see Bai Yulong and his master. I feel that the master is very powerful٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The family is really great. The author's writing style is really great. Overall, the writing style has a leisurely and carefree feeling, and there are some funny elements in it. I also like Yun Shu and Da Maoer ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зI really hope that everyone, the author, can read this comment of mine. I love you so much, the author｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡