There are no superpowers here who are reborn at the beginning; there are no immortals who dominate the nine realms; there are no overbearing CEOs with huge wealth. There is just the growth path of a young man; there is just the true face of this world; there is just the belief that never gives up! Come, let us make a comeback in adversity and grow in desperate circumstances!
Reader comments
The author is trumpet, and now I will talk about the shortcomings: some characters are not obvious; the plot connection is not perfect and not exciting; the word count does not meet expectations. I leave the rest of the advantages to you readers. I will not brag about it, but I will explain it again, including that this book is a series. After reading it, please pay more attention to the follow-up [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]
The story is smooth, the plots are one after another, and the pace is fast, but the most important thing is the paragraph issue. Break it into paragraphs, so that it is more eye-catching and tidy. The plot should be simple and easy to understand, and don't make it irrelevant. [Eat melon]
To encourage new authors, five-star reviews are given first. The author slowly unfolds a comprehensive world of cultivation + science fiction before the readers' eyes. The setting cannot be considered brand new, but it will test the author's writing skills and how to tell the following story in a dramatic and visual way. Come on, boy!
Author's self-comment, don't follow the trend [laughing][laughing]
Regarding the segmentation issue, the segmentation of Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 may be a little inappropriate because of the rush of time, so please understand that there will not be too few segments in the future [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
Wow, the author's imagination of technology is really good. He describes the specific details very well, and the structure is very clear and clear. It's really great👍🏻, keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like]
The combination of science fiction and fantasy has laid a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning. I am looking forward to seeing the subsequent plot unfold. I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit young when he appears at the beginning, which may affect the performance.
The author is trumpet, and now I will talk about the shortcomings: some characters are not obvious; the plot connection is not perfect and not exciting; the word count does not meet expectations. I leave the rest of the advantages to you readers. I will not brag about it, but I will explain it again, including that this book is a series. After reading it, please pay more attention to the follow-up [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]
The story is smooth, the plots are one after another, and the pace is fast, but the most important thing is the paragraph issue. Break it into paragraphs, so that it is more eye-catching and tidy. The plot should be simple and easy to understand, and don't make it irrelevant. [Eat melon]
To encourage new authors, five-star reviews are given first. The author slowly unfolds a comprehensive world of cultivation + science fiction before the readers' eyes. The setting cannot be considered brand new, but it will test the author's writing skills and how to tell the following story in a dramatic and visual way. Come on, boy!
Author's self-comment, don't follow the trend [laughing][laughing] Regarding the segmentation issue, the segmentation of Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 may be a little inappropriate because of the rush of time, so please understand that there will not be too few segments in the future [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
Wow, the author's imagination of technology is really good. He describes the specific details very well, and the structure is very clear and clear. It's really great👍🏻, keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like]
The combination of science fiction and fantasy has laid a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning. I am looking forward to seeing the subsequent plot unfold. I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit young when he appears at the beginning, which may affect the performance.