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Reader comments
I have only read 10 pages so far, and the writing of the protagonist from time traveling to school is very poor. First of all, I grew up without a father or a mother. I walked in a different world for more than half a year before I reached the school gate. Will he be scared to death by the mount? You are making trouble. You dare to walk alone in a different world for more than half a year without any strength? I haven't seen Warcraft in half a year and I'm still scared to death? Secondly, the college only recruits for 3 days, and 500 people are interviewed every day. So there is a huge crowd of people and you have to queue up from the bottom of the mountain. How can you still get a seat? Can you get hit in the middle of the road? After all, there are only 1,500 interview quotas, and those after 1,500 will not be accepted no matter how talented they are. If no one is eliminated in the first round of the test, then the crowd will definitely be crowded. There is no threshold, no screening and elimination, but only 3 days to recruit people. So after there are more than 1,500 full-year-olds, those who cannot pass the test will have to wait for a year? Starting to roll up again? It's noisy.
The subject matter is good from a good angle. I give it 2 stars. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. I will edit the comment after I finish writing it!
I have only read 10 pages so far, and the writing of the protagonist from time traveling to school is very poor. First of all, I grew up without a father or a mother. I walked in a different world for more than half a year before I reached the school gate. Will he be scared to death by the mount? You are making trouble. You dare to walk alone in a different world for more than half a year without any strength? I haven't seen Warcraft in half a year and I'm still scared to death? Secondly, the college only recruits for 3 days, and 500 people are interviewed every day. So there is a huge crowd of people and you have to queue up from the bottom of the mountain. How can you still get a seat? Can you get hit in the middle of the road? After all, there are only 1,500 interview quotas, and those after 1,500 will not be accepted no matter how talented they are. If no one is eliminated in the first round of the test, then the crowd will definitely be crowded. There is no threshold, no screening and elimination, but only 3 days to recruit people. So after there are more than 1,500 full-year-olds, those who cannot pass the test will have to wait for a year? Starting to roll up again? It's noisy. The subject matter is good from a good angle. I give it 2 stars. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. I will edit the comment after I finish writing it!