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Here comes Dada, Dada's writing is good, the writing is delicate and not laggy, but there are some minor flaws. The paragraphs are too long. At first, I thought Dada was written about a world. I didn't expect Dada. If you like fanciful and comprehensive movies, you can give it a try. Come on Dada, I hope it will get better and better. In addition, I am urging you to update it, Dada.

Why can't I comment on paragraphs? The descriptions in many paragraphs are really good. I have some ideas and want to excerpt them [face covering]. However, some of the paragraphs are too long, which will affect the viewing experience. If you read it on a mobile phone, it usually starts to be a little difficult to read at most four or five lines. If possible, break it into more paragraphs. The writing is great! Just some minor flaws in the format [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Come on come on come on come on

Because I like the 08 version, Ouyang Ke seems to have read this article in the post bar. Thank you to the author. I like it and continue to work hard.