Comprehensive Comics************

The author's writing style and the male protagonist's name remind me of an old friend [Thinking]

It's great. At first, I thought I was copying the book next door. After reading it, I found out that it was not. I don't know how much better than a certain book that I couldn't understand. I just felt that the author was a little hasty in writing about the heroine. In fact, he didn't say that all heroines must be included in the variety show. This kind of serious heroine Writing for those authors is like being written by someone else who is famous but completely different from others. Of course, it does not mean that the author writes it to give to his daughter, who has a certain connection with it. Of course, some things that have no big connection can be used as the original CP. Please persecute those scumbags like Ru Cheng and Lu, please don't pass by. Bang, if you like to read it all, you can read stallion comics. The female protagonists in the variety comics have their own personalities, and the writing style is difficult to control. It feels weird to force the writing. It is even more troublesome when the male protagonist is an Ultraman. You need a lot of energy to fall in love, and you have to be big. Focus on falling in love. Who fights monsters? If you fight monsters and don't fall in love, the property of comprehensive comics will be broken. Therefore, if the author's writing style cannot keep up, you can appropriately marginalize the ones that are difficult to follow. Don't write too many plots to marginalize them. I suggest that the author just read it. By the way, the book is really good [Like] [Like]

Five-star praise! Emmm The biggest poisonous point of this novel is Chapter 31. When I first saw it, I wanted to stop reading it for a moment, but when I read the back part, I thought the writing was okay. I want to say a big apology to the author for this >Man<, the other writing is very, very, very good, and there are many, many places I need to learn from! Although I don't like studying [face covering], if I want to write a novel, I really need to study hard. Emmm, I'll give it a five-star rating. Please support the author a lot!

The author is a novice, so the writing seems a bit complicated, but there is nothing wrong with the plot. When writing the system, don't be led by the system. The protagonist has more autonomy and choice. The same goes for the equipment given to the heroine. Once the relationship is established or the relationship is confirmed, it will not be too late to give it to her. Most of the people I read in the comments don't like forced things. After all, the reader is introduced to the protagonist [face covering] You can go and take a look at the book written by Aguru. The battle time should not be too long, just write two or three in one battle. Later, you can write a system upgrade to give the protagonist more autonomy and choice. Mainly because you wrote Porchi-chan, I will give you 4 stars. These are my opinions and suggestions. It's up to you to write the later plot. To make it a little more exciting, the protagonist is not required to be invincible, at least semi-invincible. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] After subsequent system upgrades. The rewards are given to other characters through the will of the protagonist, so I think it will be better to accept more.

The biggest problem with this book is giving me my own reasons for writing it this way. Because there is a divine light stick, there is no need to fly a plane to fight. I don't want to be like that kind of plane that flies twice and then parachutes into Tiga. So it comes as a gift

After looking at it, I think it's okay. It's relatively rare to see comprehensive comics and Ultraman stories, and I like this genre very much. Give me a five-star support. By the way, the scene in Chapter 31 about forcibly pulling someone in feels a bit poisonous. After all, you let two immature, untrained female high school students forcefully pilot high-precision weapons... How should I put it? Not easy to describe. But overall it's okay. Support the author!

The parts of campus youth and Ultraman are very clearly divided, and it doesn't feel abrupt, nor does it feel like this part exists for the sake of that part. The two parts do not affect each other, but complement each other. Well worth a look.

The writing of this book is already very good, and it attracted me deeply from the beginning. Yes, human death is not fixed, but I always feel that death is not lonely for a moment. Our youth has passed away, and we should not lament that we have nothing. Then come on, author, I am optimistic about you. Don't let us down!

The writing is good, [laughs][laughs][laughs] Recently, I suddenly thought of the connection between Ultraman and comprehensive comics. I didn't expect someone to write it. Come on, I will write more chapters a day by the way. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The writing is okay, I hope the emotional line is not too hasty

Why doesn't the monster come out? Come on author

Okay, Brother Cheng, it's more expensive for Midori to die early.

I changed Chapter 61. Thank you.

Very good [Like] Come on! [Sinister smile]

Very nice, cheers author

Speed, speed, you should know what I'm talking about, right?

Your literary talent is so good, and your words make me see your tenderness. ? ? ? ? Why is the rating so low?

Very good, very good, okay, okay

Not bad, but one drawback is that the author updates too slowly [angry]

It's really good

Not bad, keep up the good work.

I think it's pretty good

Just think of Tokyo handsome guys as Sigma men

I hope Tiga Sando can appear

Just cut it off, what do you want to do? Come to work!

The plot is relatively smooth, and the five stars are not divided into installments.

The book is good, and the stories of daily life and battle are well connected. I hope those who don't like to read will be kind to themselves. If they don't like to read, they can just quit and affect those who do.

Big cheers for the author! This book is great! !

Stop updating. Intermittent updates are very, very annoying. Come on, author

It's a very good book, but I don't know why the rating is so low.