Improve Points***********

Many people say that they don't understand the order of this book, but I think this book is very good. First write about the process, then write about it later, then write about the reason, and then finally write about the result. Although this will be counterproductive, it will attract readers a little bit after reading it.

In fact, it's pretty good, but sometimes the plot is not very coherent and can easily make readers confused. The characters could be more vivid and the plot could be more close-up. The subject matter is still good, and I feel like it could be improved upon.

The good reviews are so good

It's pretty good, but why did it take me an hour to read Chapter 11? Don't watch blanching.

Tsk, it's very beautiful. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

It's a very new subject, please give it a try, author