Licking the Dog************

Write a book. It's not easy, it's still an early investment.

I feel numb. There are so many five-star reviews and a rating of 5.7. Where do they come from [what] [what] [what]

It looks great. Can you add a character to it? [Laughing] (Character: Di Daoran Ability: Dream creation - can conceive any creature or rule and consume spiritual energy to manifest it Identity: The character created by the protagonist, the protagonist's best friend Personality: Both good and evil, with three personalities: the heavenly soul is good, the human soul is neutral, and the earthly soul is evil. One personality will appear each time, and the personality may be switched midway)

"I have done so much for you! I love you so much!! Why?! Why do you do this to me!!! I am Lin! I am Lin!!" At this moment, Yang Lin seemed to be transformed into a resentful woman, shouting hoarsely, but her expression was a bit aggrieved. Hei Jue wears a mask on his face, so his expression cannot be seen After hearing this, he turned around and stood with his hands behind his back, slowly raised his head, looked at the bright moon and said in a low voice. "You can be Lin, but Lin will never be you!" There was a certain amount of loneliness, a certain amount of lamentation and a certain amount of determination in his tone!

I gave it a high score because it was really well written (see if I can complain more), but it just didn't fit my interest. The virtual world is modeled after Brother Tuzi, and the character is modeled after Brother Tuzi, but the protagonist is a stallion. It is indeed a decisive killing, a typical two-dimensional otaku who travels to the world of dreams. Dddd

A little bit poisonous, but otherwise good

It's okay. Although the setting of the belief level is surprising, it's not unacceptable. It's just that some of the content was confusing. I understood it after reading it a few times (maybe it's because I'm not good at Chinese). In addition, I read this book without thinking. There are also some settings in it that others cannot accept and don't think it looks good, but I think it looks good. It only represents my personal opinion. The themes of this type of novels are novel, and some novels with the same theme have an emotional line emerging as they are written, which I find quite confusing. This book is acceptable in this category. Don't be discouraged, author. Your grades will gradually improve. Come on.

It feels very good-looking. I suggest you create some time-travelers or some anime characters. If the trust level is more than 100% in the later stage, you should be able to create anime characters, right? [Thinking][thinking] In the early stage, I felt that Lin Meiyan's portrayal was not very good, but I just didn't like the character a little bit, because her character was originally designed as a girl who wants to get rich. Later, I felt that it was okay. I look forward to when the female star will turn into a yandere in the future. By the way, I also have some suggestions, such as tickets to other worlds, specialties from other worlds, etc. Now I feel that the protagonist is a bit too strong. Can you add more skills to him? For example, time stops, other gods, JOJO substitutes, etc. [Note]

Can Yang Lin die first, and then start to build a relationship with the protagonist, and then let the protagonist know that everything was planned by him, and that he started all the arrangements because of Lin's death. Just like the novel "Tigui", my present situation is the result of my previous steps, thus changing everything.

It's okay, but it's too short, so I need to take care of it.

The content is pretty good, but the number of people is a bit small. Maybe the plot is almost gone, so I'll give it a try first and see how it's written later. If it's good, I'll give it five stars. I will fulfill my promise. Although the characters are not very good, the plot is still okay. It's also relatively good among tomatoes.

Female celebrities are indeed a big blockage. Others are no problem.

It's very good. I like reading books with complex compositions like this [Like]

Not bad, some parts are a little bit... But it's okay, I can continue reading [Thinking]

Nice! But... Too few [cry][cry][cry] It's not enough to watch at all

The plot is interesting and the characters are fleshed out. I hope the author can keep writing like this, improve through performance, and make progress in writing! Come on! ! ! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am the dividing line ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That one, I personally think the protagonist and Yang Lin go well together. I hope they can form a CP, will it work?

This book is inside a tomato. Definitely at the front. Judging from the performance in the first five chapters, come on, the author, I'm optimistic about you.

It's good that the protagonist's personality is very three-dimensional, but the supporting characters' emotions are a bit emotional. I hope Lin (hopefully not Yang) can increase the role in the future.

Why is the rating so low? The plot is not embarrassing, and to be honest, it is not a brainless novel. I am among the best in this genre.

It's very good. It's a type I haven't seen before. I found that I really like reading books with secondary content. I would like to recommend some books.

It's very good, the best novel of this type I have ever read.

Like the behind-the-scenes stream

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The front is okay, but the back is average. But no matter what, I still wish you success

Hi, the front is good, and the back can be read as well. Can Lin's identity be revealed quickly?

The subject matter is very unique, but it's a bit short [laughs evilly]

Nice! The plot is very interesting, I support the author greatly! [Love][love]

It's well written and imaginative, and the protagonist's character is also great.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why it's 5.9, [What] [what] I don't understand

Oh, very good brothers