The Female Villains I Helped Came to My Door

Before I clicked on it, I originally had the intention of reading Liu Bei's book, but after reading more than a dozen chapters, I realized that this book is unpopular and unreasonable. Too short! ! ! Author update soon

This novel is very good. Whether it is the plot, characterization, or writing style, it is a very good product. However, the plot is somewhat lacking. Sometimes it will make readers feel a sense of escape if they do not think carefully. I hope the author can consider this. At the same time, the memory part is important, but the realistic part should also be paid attention to. The content in the memory part is very exciting, relatively speaking. The content of reality is like warm water, tepid, some are tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. More details and foreshadowing can be interspersed with the realistic part, so that the connection between the two parts will not be so pale. Overall, this is a very rare and good novel. Whether it is the content, the rest of it, or even the title, you can see the author's intention. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.

How to put it this way, this book has great potential, and this writing style is very popular. However, this book has one serious shortcoming, that is, the author's writing method requires a lot of updates to ensure the continuity of the two-line narrative. So, author, come on, it is best to update more than a dozen chapters a day.

The author's character description is a plus, especially in the first twenty chapters. It feels a bit rushed later on, but the pace of this book is already quite slow. If the ink is more ink, impatient readers may not buy it [shy] To judge objectively, if this book can be written in this style, it will definitely be the best in Tomato.

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It's very interesting and the whole plot is very attractive. Come on!

When I read this memoir, I felt like I was reading a narrative. The writing is very good, and the emotions of the characters are very rich. It does not have the traditional upgrading and decryption fast-food style of online novels. It is mainly based on memoirs. The pace is relatively slow. It is not recommended for those who want to read traditional online fast-food novels. But I like [note]

The plot arrangement is very substantial and smooth, and the characters are very distinctive and vivid. It was written in the form of memories, more like a light novel. In fact, I feel that if it were written directly as a time travel to another world, it would be a good story, but the style would change a bit. All in all, everything looks good, maybe it deserves a five-star rating.

The writing is very good, especially the memory in the middle. That feeling kept me up for four hours. Although the rest of the book is not as good as the middle, it is still okay. (Confirmation from a ten-year-old bookworm)

Give it four stars. If you are short on books and have nothing to read, you can read this. I think it is still very interesting. The memories are well written, but the reality is a bit stretched, and it feels like it has fallen back into the popular routine. But overall, as far as I can tell, it's not toxic. Taste with confidence

Not enough. I want to keep a few more books to read.

The plot of the story is really good, the logic is clear and there are no loopholes

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The writing is very nice, keep it up.

Good looking, highly recommended

Good, good, good, good

This is really beautiful

There aren't many creative ideas like this anymore [laughter]

The problem is that the recollections are very detailed, which makes me very worried about whether you can finish the novel. After all, this is an era where you are obsessed with writing, and it is common for you to be unable to persevere.

So far everything is fine hope to continue

I only read stories. Write more stories. I have skipped all three realms.

It looks good, but what about the author?

The author is also great. One chapter has 25 pages. Hard to see in tomatoes

The author's writing style is worthy of five stars [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Judging from the current progress, I have to write at least 300 chapters. But at this speed, I can finish it in a year and a month. But I still hope that the author's writing style will get better and better in the future. At present, the writing style is still a little bit weak, but the content is still very good, so I say hurry up and don't finish it and don't interrupt the update.

If written like this, it's a good book. Don't collapse.

Very good book

The subject matter is new and interesting, and the writing is good. [Like][Like][Like]

There are too many memories

Good looking, good luck to the author