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Most of Yi Zhonghai's problems in the book stem from his old age. A person who can do so much for his old age will definitely be very kind to his nephew, but the protagonist doesn't even tell him about his work, which is too distrustful of him. Even for his own old age problem, he will take care of the protagonist no matter what happens. Why should he hide it and find out later? Doesn't Yi Zhonghai have no idea in his heart?

Wrong, too many words

It's not easy to give you five stars for the writing (I can't stand it anymore), it looks uncomfortable. It doesn't look like period writing, it doesn't look like modern writing, and my name is even written ❎. Find a job quickly,,, don't starve to death.

Not good, typo, He Yuyu was changed to He Yuyu, the time is wrong, please change it, the star will rise or fall depending on the situation

There are so many typos that people are missing out on the nine-year compulsory education.

There are too many typos and the content is not smooth.