Jun Yan Zhuo Shi

You write a story about Gouba's superpower, and you write a sweet story for me. I'm addicted to it!

It was well written and won my heart. It made me feel the surprise that I felt when I first watched "The Naming of the Night" for a long time. It is calm yet powerful, calm yet passionate. It is a rare masterpiece among Tomatoes.

I'm guessing, author, please update quickly, even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Only two chapters in one day

Bye bye, having a sister and a female cat is not suitable for me.

Is it that short? Sister-in-law, you have worked really hard No, I don't have a sister-in-law [laughs evilly]

I like it very much. Good cheers for the author. This kind of subject matter really pokes me. The emotional line is very touching.

Not bad, I look forward to the heroine pushing the male protagonist in the opposite direction [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Very nice! ! It is very similar to the setting of my novel, which gave me great inspiration, great learning value, and opened up many new ideas for me. Just to avoid suspicion, I have to refine and modify my settings and plot again [face covering] It's really good. Even though I'm a newbie, he's much better than me.

Single female protagonist, female chasing male, watch it carefully [laughs]

Write a love story! This is suitable for you [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] What you wrote before will make many people rush to scold you directly for the title and indirect calls. It is better to just open another book and write a love story [Adoration]

The faults do not hide the faults. I read the low score in the comment section. For example, it makes sense that there are some problems with the character creation. I think the plot is still very good. Two tomatoes plus one are considered old bookworms. How should I put it? I feel that it is quite interesting. It's okay. Come on author.

The author writes very well, the background of the protagonist is detailed, and the plot of the male and female protagonists is not brainless. It feels very novel about a woman chasing a man. It is very interesting, but it is a bit short. I want to make it fatter. The author will continue to work hard. I feel that this kind of background can be written for a long time! Come on, come on, come on! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Strong recommendation [admiration] [admiration]

Although the logic and plot are not as good as the first sequence of Elbow and Nomenclature of Night, it is also a good sequence novel among wasteland novels. I think the rating is a bit low, so I give it a five-star rating. I hope the author will continue to work harder, write faster, and write better and better. But here's the thing, you can also just read a romance novel [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

To be honest, I really like this kind of slow-burning that has a lot of daily articles besides fighting. I just don't know why the rating of this book is a bit low, but I still support the author greatly [blowing kiss] @ BE a Mechanicist

After watching Tomato for so many years, this is the first time I have seen it, which matches my "dream love letter". Come on, come on. After ten years of lurking in the abyss, I finally attained enlightenment. I stepped on the sky and burst into laughter. I hope this good book will get better and better, but it hasn't been discovered by many people yet.

The writing is very good, the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional description of the male and female protagonists is very good. But tell me, it has been more than a hundred chapters, and the female protagonist is so proactive in flirting, why are they still not together? ? Finally, in the early stages of the plot, there are always some people who feel that they will bury the knife. I don't know if it will be really knife-like later on.

Not bad, but it feels like the main focus is wrong? It gives people the impression that it is really interesting to watch, but I just can't stand it. I read it every three seconds and one chapter in the middle, and I feel that I can still keep the plot coherent. It is quite a lot, but I feel it is unnecessary. The dozen or so chapters in the dream of the male protagonist really feel a bit watered down. It is okay to write three or four chapters. There is no need. Considering that the male protagonist's sister is not confusing to me, maybe the author has his own ideas. Come on, it's pretty good

The early writing was okay, and I quite liked the character of the protagonist. Some people can understand if they think the protagonist is too weak, but I think it's good to have such a good foreshadowing in the early stages. The main reason is that the world view of this book is quite large, and it will easily fall apart if the pace is too fast.

No one reads this good book [crying] It's just this little, who can read it?

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

It's pretty, but too short.

Thank you for the author. It's very interesting.

The author's supernatural powers are fake, but his sweet writing is true.

Author, you must persevere and don't lower the quality of this book while publishing it in two formats. This book is really great. 8.3 Is too low.

I can only say that I still find it interesting after seeing it. It's not bad at all, but the plot progress is a little slow. The first part can be regarded as a campus love, and the superpowers will appear later, but it is quite interesting.

It's hard to find this kind of book on Tomato that focuses on love and supplements with supernatural powers. I really like it😍

Very nice, but a bit short.

Very interesting, but the author is so short

It's my type Why can't I raise my points? [Pauses face] I'm worried that the book will get cold

Dude, it turns out this is a supernatural novel. After reading it for a long time, I thought it was a romance novel. It's really cool.