I Became a Rebel in Demacia

It's quite promising. You can consider changing the title and introduction of the book, otherwise it will attract too few people. Not too many people read Tomato lol fanfics. They usually read games. But in the future, I can see that the author will give up like most people because too few people read it. After all, there is no fan base. I just hope to see a scene of who is better between Sword Princess and Guanghui.

It's a pity that the author writes this type of novel. Except for the romance part, which is clearly told very well, the rest of the story is hard to describe. I suggest the author change to another type of novel, there will definitely be more people than now, that's what I'm saying. Also, the romance part of this novel is really the relationship between the protagonist and Fiona. I think it is really well written. It is not greasy or procrastinating, but it makes people feel a little heart-warming. It's really rare, or maybe I haven't read enough pure romance novels recently. But I can clearly feel that in the recent chapters, the author wants to write much better than before. It feels a lot more comfortable to read.

If you have any opinions, you can give them and I will accept them.

It's pretty good-looking, I can tell it's a slow-paced game. [Please update]

Okay, okay, this is how you write it, right? My special code will give you a 5-star rating. Come on, it looks great. I look forward to the follow-up. 👍👍👍

Not bad, to be fair, I can calm down like this and write slowly and little by little. This slow-paced book is not a straight forward read, but it still looks interesting. So far, I've only written about Demacia, which is pretty good. I hope there won't be any big problems after the world view is expanded.

Personally, I feel that the description of LeBlanc's character is a bit strange. After all, in my opinion, LeBlanc should be a shady old silver coin. With such weirdness, the other characters are pretty good. Update soon I remember that Tarik was also from Demacia, and later went to Targon. If you have any knowledge about Targon, you can contact Tarik.

All I can say is, top League of Legends fanfic

The author should change the introduction and title of the book. Besides, this book is so well written!!!

The book is very good, and... Author, I have been waiting for you for four months 😢 😢 😢