Hello everyone, I am Chen Min, no, I am Salem, a magic noble born in Demacia. After seeing countless unfair treatments, I decided to become a rebel.
You ask me why I am so brave? Are you crazy?
Don't worry, listen to what the woman behind me has to say
The arrogant daughter of the Laurent family, the most terrifying duelist in Valoran: anyone who stops him... Will die!
A certain blonde girl with elemental magic: I will not let my shimmer dim!
The witch leader of the Black Rose, the most mysterious organization in Noxus: Seren, you really satisfied me last night.
Ahem... It seems like something strange has been mixed in.
It's harmless... It's harmless... Anyway
No need to V me for 50, you can still come in and listen to my rebellion plan!
Reader comments
It's quite promising. You can consider changing the title and introduction of the book, otherwise it will attract too few people. Not too many people read Tomato lol fanfics. They usually read games. But in the future, I can see that the author will give up like most people because too few people read it. After all, there is no fan base. I just hope to see a scene of who is better between Sword Princess and Guanghui.
It's a pity that the author writes this type of novel. Except for the romance part, which is clearly told very well, the rest of the story is hard to describe.
I suggest the author change to another type of novel, there will definitely be more people than now, that's what I'm saying.
Also, the romance part of this novel is really the relationship between the protagonist and Fiona. I think it is really well written. It is not greasy or procrastinating, but it makes people feel a little heart-warming.
It's really rare, or maybe I haven't read enough pure romance novels recently. But I can clearly feel that in the recent chapters, the author wants to write much better than before. It feels a lot more comfortable to read.
It's pretty good-looking, I can tell it's a slow-paced game. [Please update]
If you have any opinions, you can give them and I will accept them.
Okay, okay, this is how you write it, right? My special code will give you a 5-star rating. Come on, it looks great. I look forward to the follow-up. [Like][Like][Like]
The author should change the introduction and title of the book. Besides, this book is so well written! ! !
Personally, I feel that the description of LeBlanc's character is a bit strange. After all, in my opinion, LeBlanc should be a shady old silver coin. With such weirdness, the other characters are pretty good.
Update soon
I remember that Tarik was also from Demacia, and later went to Targon. If you have any knowledge about Targon, you can contact Tarik.
Not bad, to be fair, I can calm down like this and write slowly and little by little. This slow-paced book is not a straight forward read, but it still looks interesting. So far, I've only written about Demacia, which is pretty good. I hope there won't be any big problems after the world view is expanded.
All I can say is, top League of Legends fanfic
The book is very good, and... Author, I have been waiting for you for four months [crying] [crying] [crying]
I will state here that this book is okay;
Okay, well written. Keep up the good work
I wonder if the author will write a plot about Two Cities in the future?
Come on, author! !
Very good, the rhythm is quite suitable
Okay, okay, really good
Not bad, very comfortable to watch
Very pretty, but a bit short
The protagonist is very cowardly when it comes to feelings. If he wants to have a harem, he will have a harem. If he is innocent, he will be innocent. If he is neither good nor low, he will look like a coward. Chasing an assassin and writing more than ten chapters of fighting scenes only have a few dragging ones.
The book is good, but two chapters a day has no future. I suggest the author start with five chapters a day, and ten chapters would be even better.
Every time I read a novel about writing an alliance, it feels like I'm seeing my own fantasy when I was young. I really like this book so far.
Generally speaking, I feel a little frustrated because of my inability.
I can only say that it is very beautiful.
Help every new author who writes well
Come on, author, I finally have a book about Runeterra, come on [top post]
Good book, one of the few alliance articles on Tomato, and good-looking, but I haven't seen the golden finger of the protagonist so far, the progress is too slow and the strength is not enough [face covering]
From now on, it seems that I am planning to write a novel, which is quite interesting.
This emotional line is so beautifully written, but I like Lux better.
It's a pretty good LOL fan time-travel novel, with no clear poisonous points.
It's quite promising. You can consider changing the title and introduction of the book, otherwise it will attract too few people. Not too many people read Tomato lol fanfics. They usually read games. But in the future, I can see that the author will give up like most people because too few people read it. After all, there is no fan base. I just hope to see a scene of who is better between Sword Princess and Guanghui.
It's a pity that the author writes this type of novel. Except for the romance part, which is clearly told very well, the rest of the story is hard to describe. I suggest the author change to another type of novel, there will definitely be more people than now, that's what I'm saying. Also, the romance part of this novel is really the relationship between the protagonist and Fiona. I think it is really well written. It is not greasy or procrastinating, but it makes people feel a little heart-warming. It's really rare, or maybe I haven't read enough pure romance novels recently. But I can clearly feel that in the recent chapters, the author wants to write much better than before. It feels a lot more comfortable to read.
It's pretty good-looking, I can tell it's a slow-paced game. [Please update]
If you have any opinions, you can give them and I will accept them.
Okay, okay, this is how you write it, right? My special code will give you a 5-star rating. Come on, it looks great. I look forward to the follow-up. [Like][Like][Like]
The author should change the introduction and title of the book. Besides, this book is so well written! ! !
Personally, I feel that the description of LeBlanc's character is a bit strange. After all, in my opinion, LeBlanc should be a shady old silver coin. With such weirdness, the other characters are pretty good. Update soon I remember that Tarik was also from Demacia, and later went to Targon. If you have any knowledge about Targon, you can contact Tarik.
Not bad, to be fair, I can calm down like this and write slowly and little by little. This slow-paced book is not a straight forward read, but it still looks interesting. So far, I've only written about Demacia, which is pretty good. I hope there won't be any big problems after the world view is expanded.
All I can say is, top League of Legends fanfic
The book is very good, and... Author, I have been waiting for you for four months [crying] [crying] [crying]
I will state here that this book is okay;
Okay, well written. Keep up the good work
I wonder if the author will write a plot about Two Cities in the future?
Come on, author! !
Very good, the rhythm is quite suitable
Okay, okay, really good
Not bad, very comfortable to watch
Very pretty, but a bit short The protagonist is very cowardly when it comes to feelings. If he wants to have a harem, he will have a harem. If he is innocent, he will be innocent. If he is neither good nor low, he will look like a coward. Chasing an assassin and writing more than ten chapters of fighting scenes only have a few dragging ones.
The book is good, but two chapters a day has no future. I suggest the author start with five chapters a day, and ten chapters would be even better.
Every time I read a novel about writing an alliance, it feels like I'm seeing my own fantasy when I was young. I really like this book so far.
Generally speaking, I feel a little frustrated because of my inability.
I can only say that it is very beautiful.
Help every new author who writes well
Come on, author, I finally have a book about Runeterra, come on [top post]
Good book, one of the few alliance articles on Tomato, and good-looking, but I haven't seen the golden finger of the protagonist so far, the progress is too slow and the strength is not enough [face covering] From now on, it seems that I am planning to write a novel, which is quite interesting.
This emotional line is so beautifully written, but I like Lux better.
It's a pretty good LOL fan time-travel novel, with no clear poisonous points.
Can you make the protagonist stronger?
Very good novel
I really like this kind of emotional route