Reborn as a Cannon-Fodder NPC: My Rebellious Disciple Is Easy to Flirt With but Hard to Handle

Is this a treasure?!! Don't write too well!!! It is not an exaggeration to say that every word is precious. The novel's language is humorous, witty and natural, easy to understand, and the hot topics are not missing at all. It is a pleasure to read a large novel. The plot has ups and downs, the plot is compact, the foreshadowing is extensive, there are many foreshadowings, and the charm is profound. Gu Sheng must be Chenchen. For the sake of the common people, the gods died, and the souls remained in modern times and recovered again. I don't know what the connection is. I'm looking forward to it, but it can only make the explosion bigger. Finally, I want to complain about Yan Qingqing, step on Chenchen's face, don't go too far, let the dog bite you! I know it's very tiring, but don't rest until you can catch your breath. Please continue to update. I'm relying on it to stay alive.

I actually quite like the protagonist of this book, but the transitions in this book are a bit inconsistent and the writing is a bit messy. It's not that it's messy, it just seems to me that it's not coherent, and it's just not smooth in some aspects. For example, when they were fighting, they kept describing the inner drama and words of the protagonist. There is too little description of action, background, and scenes. I just feel that the description of the characters is not very three-dimensional. What I feel is that only the protagonist is slightly better, and the others are very one-sided and not full of content. But the author's idea is actually quite good. I don't know if it's because I read it too fast, but it definitely prevented me from entering a state of flow. While it is true that the protagonist is the most important thing in writing a book, other people can also play a role in highlighting the protagonist. For example, when he goes down the mountain and when he goes up the mountain, I feel that there is a line between 3 o'clock and 3 o'clock, and the atmosphere is a little weaker. These are my personal opinions. If you don't like it, you can ignore it. I hope that the more you write, the better it will be [sending heartfelt wishes]

If you are not bald, please give me a five-star support first. It's not comprehensive enough, not just because it's a non-bald novel, but as a new novel and a new individual, this novel is very interesting. The protagonist is not like other immortal cultivators. It's like what is said on the Internet: "It is better to go crazy and consume others externally than to consume yourself internally." It's so funny to put it in the article.

Very pretty. I really like this kind of humorous and funny writing style and plot, and there are many twists and turns. I really didn't expect that the plot would go like this. I thought I would see many old routines [please update] Haha, but his character is unusual. Although what Gu Fengchen (Sheng) said sometimes (most of the time) was very embarrassing and... Social cow🐮? Well, it's the first time I've seen such an awesome character! I like it so much, but because the characters are described in a relatively natural way, it's really funny 😂, so I don't feel awkward anymore. The funnyness is real and very interesting. It's a lot better than the previous master-disciple novel (ps: I haven't finished that one) and it feels even funnier [Thoughts] Personal feeling: I don't see any nonsense literature or watery plots in the whole text. I think the pace is quite fast and good, and the whole story is mainly funny. However, the current plot may have some flaws?! I was quite surprised to see that the two of them have less than two years left to live together. Of course, I hope (certainly) that they will survive and look forward to the follow-up development (๑˙ー˙๑) If you like funny articles, you can read it.

It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ But the author, I really don't like that shit yellow button 😢

Although, I still don't understand why they are the same person. Gu Sheng is Gu Sheng, and Fengchen is Fengchen. When I saw Shen Xian Shang, I realized that I had read another book by the author a long time ago [OK]

It's super good-looking 😢😢😢 I recommend you guys to watch it. If you don't like it, just quit. It won't waste your time. It's really good. I've read a lot of articles, but I still like the book Bald Bald Baby very much. As long as you give up this book, I will continue to like it.

This book is a book that I can't put down; never tire of reading it; endless aftertaste; endless admiration; full of praise; refreshing; fascinating; classic; a must-have at the bedside; wonderful; fantastic; significant; suddenly enlightened; incisive; sufficient arguments; clear viewpoints; quotation from classics; groundbreaking; unique; pioneering work; brilliant economics; simple explanations; knowledgeable about the present; and treasure mountain exploration. Summary: Super nice!!!!

I connected it with Xiao Qiyun's book. I really burst into tears after reading the story about Shen Xian's father Shen Lizi. Changque Clan, you guys are so miserable. I love Gu Fengchen so much. I love both Gu Sheng and Gu Fengchen very much.

I thought it was he, but I didn't expect the ending to be oe. But it's very interesting and worth recommending.