Villain: My Campus Belle Maid

It's so perfect. Believe me, if you watch this thing, as long as your brain is strong enough, the picture will be wonderful. How wonderful it is.

It seems to be average so far. There are two points that I think need to be improved. The first point is the sentence in Chapter 5: "nonono, only your sister Ya Nan can call me master. Isn't your father already arrested? From now on, you will call me dad." I think Ya Nan calling master and Geng Jingyi calling dad show that Geng Jingyi has a higher status than Ya Nan. This is not good. If the author can change it, try to change it. Second point, the name of the first character "Han Shuang" in Chapter 2 feels like a man to me. Every time I listen to the book and hear the name and the plot of the heroine, I get goosebumps. If the author can change it, he should change it. After thinking about it, it still takes time to change these two points, so I gave it five stars.

I've finished reading it, and overall it's pretty good. As an urban villain novel, this book is pretty good. I haven't found any toxic points so far. If this book were to be longer, I guess the results would be good. I just need to change the part at the beginning where the first Deadpool is included, otherwise it would be too embarrassing. Although there is not much description, embarrassment is embarrassment. In addition, this book was written so fast that there probably won't be anything left to write later. It just depends on the author's imagination.

Feeling very good at this stage

Very beautiful, very exciting

It's so beautiful, why isn't it popular?

Although, this book is really good

Give me a five-star review and keep updating! 🥰🥰

Is the author's name called "Teacher Hui Ya" or "I need to change my name"

Pretty good, pretty