Villain*******

It's so perfect. Believe me, if you watch this thing, as long as your brain is strong enough, the picture will be wonderful. How wonderful it is.

So far, it seems to be average. There are two things I think need to be improved. The first point is the sentence in Chapter 5: "nonono, only your sister Ya Nan can call me master. Isn't your father already arrested? From now on, you can call me dad." I think Ya Nan calling her master and Geng Jingyi calling her dad show that Geng Jingyi has a higher status than Ya Nan. This is not good. If the author can change it, try to change it. Second point, the name of the character "Han Shuang" who debuts in Chapter 2 feels like a man to me. Every time I listen to the book and hear the name and the plot of the heroine, I get goosebumps. If the author can change it, he will change it. After thinking about it, it still takes some time to change these two points, so I gave it five stars.

I've finished reading it, and overall it's pretty good. As an urban villain novel, this book is pretty good. I haven't found any toxic points so far. If this book is longer, I guess it will be good. I just need to change the part at the beginning where the first Deadpool is included, otherwise it will be too embarrassing. Although there is not much description, embarrassment is embarrassment. In addition, this book was written so fast that there probably won't be anything left to write later. It just depends on the author's imagination.

Very beautiful, very exciting

Feeling very good at this stage

It's so beautiful, why isn't it popular?

Although, this book is really good

Give me a five-star review and keep updating! [Adoration][Adoration]

Is the author's name called "Teacher Hui Ya" or "I need to change my name"

Very good highly recommended

Pretty good, pretty

Pretty good novel

Such a beautiful book, why doesn't anyone read it?

I can't accept the attitude of this guy. The protagonist has such a good temper.

Did he jump or was he locked up in a dark room?

Although I don't know what this has to do with the sequel, but overall it's still very good. I still like this kind of plot.

Come on you can do it Come on, you can do it. I will definitely read the book you wrote👀[laugh] By the way, the book you wrote will definitely not be divided into five installments and one star per day [smile][smile]

It's okay, it's not bad, but your book has no plot, no emotional drama, it's just a good read, and there's nothing that makes people want to read it [laughing and crying]

Come on, author! Well written