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Just like keeping a running account

What you wrote is messy and the main line is vague. If you don't know how to write it, don't write it.

Is this writing a novel or a diary?

There are also typos in the plot, repeated things, and the main line is unclear.

I spent hundreds of top-quality spiritual stones and good rubbish, but I was only promoted to the sixth or seventh level of the warrior.

There are many typos and even more unnecessary words. The chapters have names but lack the content required for the chapter names. It is intermittent.

The writing style is a bit poor. Let's not write in this way of keeping a running account. Is it good or not? It's almost the same as primary school students writing essays.

I was so poor at studying, there were a lot of typos, my sentences were not fluent, and I even wrote wrongly when it came to realm issues.

Lots of typos

How to divide the realm?

There are many typos and it is not fluent.