[No Female Lead] [Status Panel] [Beast Taming] [Spirits]
I opened my eyes and discovered that the world I was in had spirits.
A gigantic Sea-Dust Whale, whose tail could stir up towering waves;
Fairies with souls, born from stones, plants, and lakes;
Glowing clouds that shimmered beneath the brilliant stars;
And even legendary gods: the God of Life, the God of Nature, the God of Perfection...
Did I transmigrate?
Of course, a transmigrator needs a System, too.
But why is this world being invaded? This is kind of dangerous!
A war between two worlds. What impact will the arrival of a soul from another world have?
This is a story about the protagonist growing stronger along the way and fighting his enemies.
There will be both sorrow and joy along the way. Sometimes he’ll overpower formidable foes, sometimes he’ll be helpless, but in the end, the protagonist will defeat his enemies... right?
It's pretty good so far. One drawback is that at the current level of the protagonist, is the level of the boss he meets too high? Either a demigod or a training master. I feel like the author could adjust their levels up or down, especially the cultivation master. Because logically speaking, it is more difficult to be promoted in a nurturing profession like this. But there is a cultivation master in the city where the protagonist is, and he became a god just two levels short of it. It feels a bit outrageous.
I am a novice author. The number of words is quite sufficient, but everything is too detailed. Author, your protagonist could actually write less about life. After all, the title of your book looks like a hot-blooded battle. 🤦
At present, there seems to be no poisonous point, but I have a feeling that the elves are promoted too quickly. Unknowingly, I feel that it is a relatively high level, and the rhythm is a bit fast.
Come on, awesome
Author, actually the paragraphs can be shorter, it's so densely packed with words that it's hard to read