Tired! the Senior Sister Works Hard Every Day to Whiten Her Door

It looks good. The heroine is a senior sister. She has her own responsibilities and must discipline them well. It is impossible to know that the junior brothers and sisters have gone astray in the previous life and just ignore them and stay away from the junior brothers and sisters in this life. Isn't that the behavior of a villain? In this life, my junior brothers and sisters have been directly ruined from the root by their mistakes. And it breaks the villain's layout step by step, which is good-looking and good-looking

Highly recommended - it's rare to see a group of immortal cultivators without time travel, system, heroine and funny style. When encountering a crisis, the characters all play a role and have their own highlights, and it is not just the heroine's credit (the younger brothers and younger sisters do not completely rely on the senior sister, and will solve the problem on their own when the senior sister is not around)... This alone is very rare [I almost cried], not to mention the author's writing style is also great. [Adoration]

It's beautiful, and many of the characters are female. Several of them were female beyond my expectation. I really like it! ! ! ! I'm really fed up with female videos. Apart from the female protagonist, almost all of them are male characters.

The pace is fast and not draggy. The content is relaxed but not brainless. The humor is just right and natural. It doesn't deliberately make the protagonists pretend to be crazy and act silly to create laughter. So far, I really like the portrayal of the women in the team. I really recommend this! I have seen a lot of group portraits. In many articles, the presence of women in the team is just to express the correct position. In fact, it is completely to set off the vase. In the early stage of this article, I thought it was the same. The male characters in the team were highlighted in the early stage, and the female characters were dispensable. But I was very happy to see the transformation of personality growth in the later stage. The writing is very delicate. The growth process of the girl is well written and not particularly abrupt. Our third junior sister is also the third senior sister of others, okay! Be able to make correct leadership and decisions at critical times and not hold back the senior sister (PS: Although the senior sister is trying hard to clear her name, the content seems to be that the juniors and juniors are still made from black sesame glutinous rice balls. But at least the children are still white on the surface. There is still a lot of progress compared with the previous life! Don't be too pushy). The only small drawback may be that the characters in the early stage appear too fast. The ranking order of several juniors is a bit messy. In addition, the sudden change of perspective in some chapters made me suspect that I missed something, but it's okay once I get used to it. Doesn't affect the reading process. I like it! The content and writing style are all above 9.7 Points. It's my first time writing a book review and I can't stop the car. I've written a lot 💦 Well, that's about it. The author's wife should take care of herself and work hard to write (see picture) I really like this world view setting

The Tomato rating of 7.7 Is low. The plot of the book itself is 4 stars, and one more star is given to the author. I really like the character settings of the minor characters. For example, Hua Yue and her daughter were exploited because they cared about each other. For example, in the new update, Shen Zhaoxue understands purity, sincerity, and truth far better than Jiang Yanli. For example, Fu Jiao behaves perversely but is willing to cooperate with Zhuge for objective information. For example, in the early plot, the common belief of mortals helped Meng Bai survive the thunderstorm. Another example is Yu Qing, who has the ability to turn the tide in the other red line. For example, Ruo Xi was deceived by the villain's brainwashing in order to treat Rui Han, and Qin Nuoru came all the way to spit on trash. As for the author, in fact, the gender ratio of the teachers is still unbalanced, but the initial setting is based on the author's 23 years of manuscripts, and the number of female characters in the new characters after a hundred chapters has also increased significantly, such as Gong Chenglan, Ling Weizi, Jing An, Hua Shuying, Shen Zhaoxue... Moreover, the author readily accepts readers' suggestions for word changes and makes progress together with everyone, including the author who scolds her when there is a problem instead of scolding the character. I really like such a female author, rather than some male author who blames all problems on paper girls who cannot control their own destiny. Therefore, the author deserves an extra star. (Of course it would be better if there were more and more female characters!)

From the chapters I have read so far, I can feel that the author has been adding contradictions to the story, one after another. This is one of the reasons why the story is interesting and interesting. The characters have distinct characteristics, each with its own characteristics, and occasionally some interesting self-created jokes make the plot more relaxed. The choice of words and sentences has the characteristics of ancient Chinese, and you can feel that the author is very skilled, making the background of the story more realistic. However, this is also a double-edged sword. On streaming media platforms, this way of writing will also affect the speed of readers' viewing and understanding. If you don't read some content carefully in the early stage, it will be difficult to understand if you read it in a hurry, which may turn off some readers.

Beautiful! It's not very one-sided, all evil or all good. The characters of several juniors, brothers and sisters are very interesting and interesting. The plot is well connected and smooth! I raise the banner for Senior Sister! ! Everyone is conscientious but not stupid, and they are brave and resourceful o(^▽^)o Although everyone separated due to misunderstanding in the previous life, they always feel that they are members of the same sect. Fortunately, the story can be repeated🥹

It looks good, much better than the shit-peeing article. Come on, the author. The more words on cultivating immortality, the more people will read it.

It's really beautiful! ! Many of the tags for the non-CP group portraits of big heroines on Tomato were randomly typed, so I didn't have any hope of seeing them before I clicked on them. I didn't expect that I would actually find a treasure. Family and friendship are all described very well, nothing is focused on love, and there is no description or wording that makes people feel uncomfortable at all. It does not use the banner of loving the daughter. The beautiful sister loves the beautiful woman very much. The supporting characters all inexplicably like the heroine. What makes me feel the most rare is the abandonment of the chastity arch, and not despising people who have "stains" on their chastity. The author gives me the feeling that he respects these characters. He could obviously write more deeply about the misery and pity that is more resonant, but he retains his love for them. He did not do that out of respect, and even the protagonist group has people who were once one of them. This means that the author respects him from the bottom of his heart. He does not think that such characters are not worthy of the stage, and does not feel that women who have been deceived with their bodies and minds are not worthy of the stage and should be ashamed. Moreover, it is a true micro-group portrait. Not all plots revolve around the heroine, but all the characters revolve around the main line of the story. This is also rare. Each character has his or her own strengths and weaknesses. The halo is not focused on the heroine. There are supporting characters who are smarter and more powerful than the heroine. Every character is outstanding. Really recommend, very beautiful! ! !

I've just read Chapter 297, and there are a lot of exciting things in the previous chapters. There are also many types of chapters, so it's not easy to get bored. From fishing for fellow sects, rescuing people, doing good deeds, killing people, and taking revenge, to resolving crises, the emotions are heightened layer by layer to advance the story. Especially when it comes to the confession of heaven, multiple sects speak out together, their efforts are rewarded, and the emotions are well-done. Although the story is a bit scattered, it does not affect the mood. Readers follow their feelings and enjoy reading it. At most, they are a little confused about the logic after reading it. However, I felt dizzy when I saw the sect competition. Almost every novel about cultivating immortals has a competition, and I couldn't read it for the time being.

Very nice! There is nothing wrong with the writing, plot, and logic. There are no uncomfortable female rivalries or inexplicable shark arms. I didn't expect it to be the final chapter of a serialization. I thought I had read it. Woohoo, the author will update soon. It can be seen that every character in it has its own story line, it is not a rigid NPC, it has its own growth, and the heroine is not blindly written to be perfect. Our senior sister has the first strength in terms of intelligence and so on, and there are junior brothers and junior sisters. Zizai Sect is a family🥺Family should help each other and do not allow others to hurt the family🥺

It's a very interesting book. The story and plot are not inferior to those popular books. Everyone is three-dimensional and very novel. They are not a group of protagonists who are brainless and reborn for revenge. The plots are very closely connected. The author has worked hard.

It's rare to see authors with good writing skills on Tomato, so come on. The plot and writing are incomparable, why is the rating so low? I'm not convinced. This, this, this, this is a beautiful novel with a female protagonist, and the author's writing style is not bad. It is different from the mindless and cool novels. The further you read, you can see the author's progress.

I randomly opened a book and didn't expect it to be so good! It made my blood boil OMG. It's a bit counter-conventional. The orthodox cultivating disciples are good and there aren't that many bad guys. They have a super heroine, and many of the highlights are women! All kinds of senior sisters and junior sisters hey hey hey hey so happy ☺️The writing style is light and interesting with many threads buried in it. I haven't finished reading it yet, but how come so few people read it when it's written so well?

I wonder if the author can see it! I really like this novel very much, and it is a rare type of group portrait novel. I really want to get your authorization from the author, and I want to turn this novel into an AI comic series. Because this novel is a rare type of group portrait, and the most important thing is that everyone has their own highlights, and the characters are really three-dimensional. Although I really don't like the villain Xu Liuqi in it, but from his own words and his brother's previous descriptions of him, we can see that he also has dark reasons. Moreover, there are really many female characters in the later plots. I feel that most of the comics on the market are a bit uninteresting. No matter how big the heroine is, she can't escape the emotional drama or is too entangled with the male characters. I really like it very much. Of course, if you think it's not possible as the author, don't worry, I will support it until the end!

I really rarely give ratings, but after seeing more than 200 chapters, it is really good to read, and I enjoyed reading it. Other books may also be humorous, but if the humor is too much, it is not so funny. This book really made me laugh the most. The content and narration are quite compact and not procrastinating. Occasionally, the connection between the previous chapter and the next chapter seems a bit confusing, but it is not a big problem. The content is really rich. Thinking of this, I can make a drama. There are many touching places, and it was very moving to watch. Every character is unique. Why is the rating so low? Who is so ignorant? I hope you will keep up the good work for more updates! [Please update]

So this is the story of how the senior sister raised a bunch of children (no, except for one of the junior sisters and junior brothers who are real teenagers, they are all mentally mature, but they are a little awry and need to be corrected by the protagonist). The beginning is the rebirth of the protagonist. The protagonists in the first week of rebirth were all beaten into bad guys, and the protagonist in the second week of rebirth did good things everywhere and left a name. The micro-group portrait is mainly based on the perspective of the first protagonist. The master in the first sect is still sleeping, the second and fourth (three?) Juniors are still staying in the sect to do good deeds, and the remaining three little ones sometimes join the protagonist and sometimes separate to experience. I just sorted out the general direction of the plot: At first, it was to make a good public voice, but then I found that the main plot surfaced, that is, the devil appeared again, so I started to fight the bad guys while catching the behind-the-scenes. As for the latest updated chapter, the plot line is a bit messy. If you sort it out, you can still read it. The plot is relatively new. , It's not a routine... Sometimes it looks like a dream where I write which sentence. Maybe it's because the protagonist meets someone one thing or another when he meets her. If there are too many separate lines, it will be messy, and the succession of the main characters is not too natural. The content of the story is quite interesting. The protagonist has good abilities and intelligence. The other protagonists have complicated lives. I don't know if they are the protagonists. I'm a little confused. For those who are short of books, you can give it a try and see if it suits your taste. That's it.

She is so beautiful and she is the senior sister in my heart.

It's very nice, the description is not muddled, and there is nothing that makes you want to skip the chapter. In the front, the senior sister saved this and that by herself, and thought that the senior sister was tired physically and mentally. Later, the twins could help, and I felt that without the momentum of the senior sister, the speaking skills had to be taught by the fourth junior brother. Working together is still very group-like. It would be better if the senior sister is more assertive. The senior sister described later is a bit stunned. I look forward to the author's update! [Blowing kiss]

No, the rating for such a beautiful article is only 7.7? If you click on this book, please don't hesitate. Read it, it's a real CP-free article, and it's really good-looking. Anyone who likes CP-free, growth-oriented immortality, and group portraits will be very sad if they don't read this article🥹 Now I am reading the article with great trepidation. Why is the rating only 7.7? ! ! There is definitely more to this article than anything else😫I'm really afraid that my wife will be disappointed and I'll stop updating [crying]

Why is no one watching? Very very very very good book! ! ! Senior Sister, Senior Sister, we love you! ! ! The author's writing skills are very strong, elegant yet humorous, and it is fascinating to read. The plot is also great, with intrigue, chivalry and passion, all in the book. Big cheers for the author! ! ! Congratulations! ! !

It's very beautiful, the author's writing is very good, the plots are interlocking, and the connections are tight. Each character is well-shaped, and there are many excellent female characters in the later period. As the events unfold one by one, the grand world view laid out by the author is slowly unveiled. The protagonist's character is always consistent, and he always puts his sect and junior brothers and sisters first. The junior brothers and sisters have lived up to expectations and grown up slowly. The two junior sisters also shouldered heavy responsibilities in the back, and were particularly outstanding. The occasional small humor in the article is not cliché, and it does not use Internet memes to make it funny. The ancient rhyme poems are also well written. The atmosphere of the big scenes is immersive, and the protagonist can hardly breathe in every life-and-death situation, but the protagonist solves them all with his cleverness, which is really great! The solution is very novel and a new way. The early part was written by the author in the early days. There were more male characters but they were well-characterized. Chapter 70 or 80 was written recently. There are more and more powerful female characters, each with their own charm, and they appear vividly on the page. There are many highlight moments of the senior sister's personal charm, there are also many junior brothers and sisters who help/face difficulties independently, and there are also many highlight moments of the group portraits of other supporting characters. There are also impressive characters from different factions and races. Looking forward to the author's final and complete world view. This kind of mystery is constantly being revealed, and at the same time there are more intriguing new mysteries being spied on. The mysterious feeling is really great. It's super good-looking hahaha

Look! The writing style is really good, and the humor does not make people feel abrupt or dramatic. There are two things I don't like. One is the loop. It overlaps with the routines of many articles. The other is that the characters of the juniors and sisters (and various supporting characters) are good but not full and three-dimensional. Maybe the plot is too fragmented, resulting in the result of wanting to write a group portrait but being fragmented. The names given by the author are quite nice. Come on, teacher, write more books to practice.

It's good-looking and tied overnight. The senior sister is quite funny. The people in the sect also have distinct personalities and strong abilities. They are not the type who just stand and wait for the senior sister to come to rescue. The senior sister has a cold face, but the jokes in her heart are not lost. I like it. Come on, the author, work hard to update! ! !

The characters are vividly drawn, and the basic characters that appear can be remembered. Every character in the teacher's sect is well portrayed, the plot is also very smooth, and the characters are not stereotyped. The only drawback is that there are too few female characters in this book. I have read more than 150 chapters so far. Except for the two junior sisters from the sect who have more scenes, the female characters that I remember are Wang Cuihua at the beginning of the article, a few passers-by, a steward, Yu Linglong, Ying Hentao, and Sheqiu's mother who was mentioned once; And the characters who appear later, whether they are the named beast-controlling master brothers, the Shifangjian master brothers, the two Buddhist sects, or the passers-by who don't have many roles, the elders of various sects, etc., Are almost all male by default, which makes me uncomfortable.

You can read it when you are short of books. The rating of this book is definitely low. It is at least 9.0. It feels comfortable to read this novel. The characters, writing style, and plot all give people a comfortable and smooth feeling.

It's good-looking, the plot is unconventional, and the author's writing is very good and very literary. At the beginning, I felt that the rhythm was not well controlled, and it was a bit difficult to read. However, it became much smoother at the end. Every decent character is quite flesh and blood. This article will not make people feel boring. I am not a professional reader, but I did not have the patience to read most of the articles. Judging by this standard, this book is very good for me.

Dear author, I would like to make some suggestions. I don't know if you can see it when I post it here. That is, why don't we put a comment or something in a later update when a character that does not appear so frequently in the previous article suddenly appears in the later article? I started to follow the updates after more than 100 chapters, and I can be considered an early reader. The time span until now is about half a year. There are some people who appeared in the front and I can't remember who they are just by looking at their names. There are many people who appeared in more than 400 chapters. I am confused and can't remember who is who. The impact on the perception is quite big...

I'm not very good at talking, but the author's writing is really beautiful. The world view is very rich. The characters are very cute. I really like everyone in the book. The author should be a very warm person. The content and plot are very smooth, and the foreshadowing is also filled in. I feel that the thinking and logic are very clear. It's super awesome. I will follow you. The author, come on, come on. I love my daily updates [love] [love] [love] [love]

Super beautiful, really, I hope there will be no CP