Step Back, Senior Brother. I’ll Protect the Sect

I am currently reading the early stages of the plot. Overall, the plot is novel and the characters are pretty good. Looking at the details, some content jumps too fast, which makes people feel like they are swallowing a lot (for example: obtaining treasures in a secret realm does not make people feel the real side of the world of immortality, but instead gives people a warm feeling, and it is obtained all at once). The logic and rhythm feel cannot keep up, so I encourage you to improve. [Of course, it may be my personal problem. I may have read too many logical weird stories, but based on my experience of reading novels about cultivating immortals, there is really no plot that is exciting and ups and downs. Naturally, I don't want to continue reading. My personal opinion is that if you don't like it, don't criticize it.] The expectations are quite high, let's give it another look.

Very nice to read, waiting for the update, the author cheers [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], I just want to ask if this book has a cp, I hope not [almost crying][almost crying][almost crying][almost crying][almost crying]

The subject matter is novel and the content is interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

I feel very good! Very to my liking! Although the author said there is no traffic, I think it deserves high traffic. If the author hadn't been so busy and rushed to the end, I think this book would have been discovered by beautiful eyes and become a big hit! I like the selfishness of the heroine, and I also like the righteousness of the heroine, because I don't think that sacrificing oneself for others is necessarily the most correct thing. People must first be human beings before they can become anything else. Without selfish desires, what can we say about living people?

Can the second and third senior brothers of the author be a couple? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's pretty good, not bad. I haven't finished it yet. I want to ask the author, will Master and Brother travel back to modern times with the heroine? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Send heart][Send heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Hey, I almost always come across 7.8 Books, all of which are unfinished and in the process of being updated. It's really not enough to read.

[Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Come on, author