Quickly Retreat Behind You. Brother Zongmen, I Will Protect You.

I am currently reading the early stages of the plot. Overall, the plot is novel and the characters are pretty good. Looking at the details, some content jumps too fast, which makes people feel like they are swallowing a lot (for example: obtaining treasures in a secret realm does not make people feel the real side of the world of immortality, but instead gives people a warm feeling, and it is obtained all at once). The logic and rhythm feel cannot keep up, so I encourage you to improve. [Of course, it may be my personal problem. I may have read too many logical weird stories, but based on my experience of reading novels about cultivating immortals, there is really no plot that is exciting and ups and downs. Naturally, I don't want to continue reading. My personal opinion is that if you don't like it, don't criticize it.] The expectations are quite high, let's give it another look.

Very nice to read, waiting for the update, the author cheers [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], I just want to ask if this book has a cp, I hope not [almost crying][almost crying][almost crying][almost crying][almost crying]

The subject matter is novel and the content is interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

Come on, author

[Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Can the second and third senior brothers of the author be a couple? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I feel very good! Very to my liking! Although the author said there is no traffic, I think it deserves high traffic. If the author hadn't been so busy and rushed to the end, I think this book would have been discovered by beautiful eyes and become a big hit! I like the selfishness of the heroine, and I also like the righteousness of the heroine, because I don't think that sacrificing oneself for others is necessarily the most correct thing. People must first be human beings before they can become anything else. Without selfish desires, what can we say about living people?

Hey, I almost always come across 7.8 Books, all of which are unfinished and in the process of being updated. It's really not enough to read.

It's pretty good, not bad. I haven't finished it yet. I want to ask the author, will Master and Brother travel back to modern times with the heroine? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Send heart][Send heart]

Two worlds running back and forth, you can watch it if you like this type of movie. If you don't like both worlds, you can avoid lightning. There are two worlds without writing in the introduction, so let's talk about it here.

Life is always interesting, even troubles are interesting 🙂

It's beautiful and well written. Cheers to the author [Like]

It's pretty good-looking

That sweet girl is going offline soon

I like it very much. I will probably write a few chapters. I also hope the author will publish more books of this type ❤️❤️❤️

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The author would like to thank you for updating! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

It looks great. Let's get a CP!

Very worth seeing

It's a pretty good book😄

Okay, okay, recommended

I hope there will be a national consciousness Wang Yao

The five stars are because the previous writing was really good, so I couldn't accept the sudden ending that I gave after thinking about it for a long time. After all, the ending was entirely up to the reader's imagination.

Super pretty! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! !

The story is well written, and it would be even better if the ending was written honestly. What a pity!

It looks good, the heroine can run in two time realms, the logic is very clear, the concept is very novel, and the characters are vivid.