I Turned into a Zombie at the End of the World and Enslaved the School Beauty to Give Birth to My Child.

Can I add more chapters in one day? It's not enough. The writing is okay, but there are some small flaws in the sentences from time to time. Author, why don't you read it yourself after you finish writing? [Thinking], unimportant plots should usually be told within one chapter, otherwise it will affect the smoothness of the text and the enthusiasm for subsequent reading. Does it take the author two hours to write a chapter? If it doesn't work, you can consider adding a few more. This is very important for the early stage data of the novel. Try not to connect the general sections together, which will affect the experience. You can repeat it but don't connect it together. For example, there has been a massacre in this chapter, and it will feel boring if you repeat it. Try to introduce new plots every few chapters to ensure freshness. The most important thing is to say it over and over. Don't waste too much pen and ink on unimportant things. Pay attention to the rhythm during the transition. Some problems cannot be solved and can be explained appropriately, even if they are no longer difficult to correct. Just like the body strengthening a hundred times before, generally speaking, body strengthening is an all-round improvement, but from a plot point of view, only the defense is improved and there are no other changes. Some readers have said that it means the problem is a bit big, but I can still accept it. There is no specific representation of the strength of the character. It is read out during the fight. Simply writing the protagonist's data is not enough, because it is not like a novel about cultivating immortals. You can directly see the gap in the realm and have a rough comparison, so it is not good to control the degree of imaging alone. You can refer to classic novels for reference to the pre-game descriptions of cultivating immortals and games. I read it faster and there was a bit of a lag, but it was okay and acceptable. You can look at the rhythm of your writing, whether it is fast or slow. If it is slow, it can condense the plot. If it is fast, you must pay attention to the coherence of the length and avoid anything that affects the experience. I think those novels with water characters have a certain continuity, and jumping around in the plot has basically no impact. People will focus on the key points, go as fast as they should, and go as slow as they should. There are fewer holes to dig. The process of going to City A was a bit boring. Believe it or not, changing the plot from the beginning and picking up the original plot later had no impact at all. I have a question, what kind of style does the protagonist have? He is neither hesitant nor cunning. He can either kill him directly or pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, which is more fun. As soon as the protagonist arrives in the village, he either takes a strong action and defeats the local snake directly. Either hide it, raise the level of depression, bring out the bully's evil side, and wait until the time is right to come out and subdue him. It may look much better, etc. It's not just limited to these, it's whatever looks good. Otherwise, it's neither exciting nor coherent, and I won't be able to watch it anymore [face covering] Taking in a younger brother (slave)... Simply put the words into the important plot. It can be direct, but it doesn't feel good after all. The reason is that this bridge section appears too often and it is not suppressed. Isn't it better to suppress it directly? After all, it is a mindless reading, and the point of view must be clear. Generally speaking, the subject matter is novel and interesting, so I still give it 5 points. My suggestions are just for reference and don't affect the overall situation.

Thank you brothers for your support. Brothers after reading this, please don't forget to use your little fortune-making hands to give me a five-star reminder. Thank you all, [Learned][Learned][Learned]

It's a pretty good novel, but it's about the fighter jets in the novel. I hate those the most. There are often plots and plots, and all kinds of sadistic scenes where the protagonist is tricked. We, the viewers, are "enjoyed"! Great work, author! Good job anchor! Come on, keep updating! Make everyone happy! [Laughing out loud]

After reading this book, I am very curious about one thing: is there reproductive isolation between zombies and humans? .

Why do you feel like you, the zombie lady, have no role at all and are not as good as these two pets [what]

Please update it, sir. The emperors of the past dynasties were not as enthusiastic as they were. They finally found a good book. Why are they not updated?

It looks good, come on, I support you to continue writing [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, but the 100-fold physical enhancement only strengthens defense, and no other attributes are strengthened. I thought the protagonist would be almost invincible in the early and even middle stages, and sure enough. But it is still better than other apocalyptic texts. If you are short on books, you can read it.

It's okay, but the author can give the protagonist the ability to control zombies, otherwise it will feel like the Lost Corpse King.

It still looks good, but with the army, there aren't many evolved zombies in the early stage. The army can crush them directly, and it's outrageous that humans are so strong just after awakening. They are no longer afraid of missiles just after awakening, and the zombies will be gone long ago.

Not a zombie? I have never seen the protagonist bite or eat anyone [eating melon]

Not bad, very consistent with the reality of the end of the world. Soon I didn't see anything that didn't include Our Lady, unlike some books that didn't mention Our Lady, but within a few chapters there was Our Lady. This book is a bit heavy-handed, so don't read it if you don't like it. [Sinister smile]

This book is very good, I hope the author will not let it suck and continue to update it.

This book is good, support the author

Author, you can do it. You have great ideas. I like it. I have no other requirements, and they are not too high. I don't need tens of millions of words. As long as you can write you down, the requirements are not too high.

It's pretty good👌🏻, but the cousin part is a bit toxic. ~~[Laughing]

It was originally five stars, but I was afraid of being too charming, so I lost one star.

You are awesome, zombie harem,

Give it five stars. I hope there won't be any eunuchs. It's actually not finished yet [face covering]

Come on! Very well written

I really admire the author's imagination But I like it

It's pretty good, but the blood donation is a bit too much, 1 liter per month

It's very well written, and the protagonist is decisive in killing and not a mother-in-law.

I like this

Okay, it's a long journey, and I may never see you again. I leave you a good review as a souvenir. There are more than two hundred novels on the bookshelf that I have not read. Leave today, cherish each other

None of the Cao thieves are as good at playing as you are.

Awesome, five-star review

You are a good author [laughing evilly] The author hopes that you can maintain the excellence of the first 50 chapters, and don't think about chapters 50 to 70.

Although there is a lot of nonsense, it is rare to find a zombie with the right stance. . .

It's so perverted, but I like it [laughs evilly]