The Jin Army Besieged the City and Sat up in Shock. the Magic Stick Was Actually Me.

Very good, except for Zhu Xiaoyou, who is a bit poisonous, everything else is great👍🏻Of course, it is also possible that the author regarded her as a patch ——Because the protagonist has many ideas that were very difficult to implement in ancient times and were easy to see through, and the character Zhu Xiaoyou almost does not have to worry about leaks - she already knows that Guo Jing is pretending, and she has the weakness of Emperor Fu Ning. However, I would like to give the author a small suggestion - everyone comes to Tomato to read cool articles, at least because of all the unsatisfactory life in order to seek mental relaxation. Therefore, the relationship between Guo Jing and Zhu Xiaoyou is destined to be unpopular with readers. I suggest the author change their relationship model (you can use Guo Jing to provide some very touching help or see through his identity as an alien visitor).

The writing may not be that top-notch, but it can be seen that the author has practiced writing or has ideas in mind. It was very interesting to work hard and think about it, and to think about it when I first started the book. After writing a better plot, I tried different ways of connecting it and tried different narrative styles. 1. The writing of the article is smooth and coherent. The author's ideas continue to change as he thinks more deeply, giving it a sense of growth. Due to the plain writing style, the changes do not cause discomfort, which is a coincidence. 2. The exploration of different writing methods not only does not bring confusion in perception, but also brings a kind of vitality? How optimistic is the author himself about his book? ? It's a coincidence that it's so cute that I want to laugh. 3. There are many plots, not to mention the logic, but the story is very rounded. There should be a lot of changes in ideas, and a lot of thinking about the story. It also has a bit of romantic overtones, which is fun to watch. What a coincidence. As the saying goes, the article was made by nature, and a clever hand found it accidentally. What a coincidence. [Laughing evilly][Learned]

The language is quite humorous. The male protagonist does not have a golden finger, but he has a little bit of it. There are many coincidences. It is no coincidence that the book is written. The male protagonist is also quite knowledgeable. He is very good at science. The logic is very smooth. Everyone plays their role normally. It is attractive to keep reading. It is a good book.

The writing is not very rigorous, but the story is not bad. It is easy in the early stage and the plot has some laughs. However, the character creation is still a bit lacking. I hope that the difficulty will be increased later and the image of the magic stick will be more three-dimensional to win the high-end game. Overall, it can be regarded as a semi-refreshing article, but it is not completely brainless.

Very exciting, Guo Jing is also interesting. Please keep up the good work, [laughs] Wonderful! ! ! This old Guo is about to become a master of cross talk, [laughing and crying] [covering face] [covering face] I solemnly recommend good books in two places: It is said that there was a magic stick named Guo Jing in the late Northern Song Dynasty. His story is pleasant to tell. Humorous and witty like De Gang, Exaggeration and magic are different. Friends, come and take a look when you have time, This is a different Northern Song Dynasty, It's different from Jingkang! @ Zero

It's good to watch. The main character is a magic stick who is always on the verge of burping. I've read a lot of stories but I've never seen anyone with this identity. It's very good.

There is no system, every step is carefully considered, and the carelessness is stratagem and calculation. It is really good to watch. If the names of the dynasties were changed, it would be an excellent costume drama script. Come on, author! The male protagonist is so cute, funny and strong-willed! I don't understand why a bad book with a white background can get a score of 9, but this kind of good book can get a score of 9 or less. Really worth a look.

After reading it, after reading it, I will update it quickly. This book is also quite rigorous. There are not many pitfalls. It is the one who makes the gun. I feel that replacing it with a bamboo tube musket or a fire dragon gun is more in line with the forging technology at the time. Going straight to the flintlock gun feels a bit advanced, but it is still satisfactory for time travellers. All in all, it's pretty good. I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued.

Speaking of which, I first read this novel elsewhere. I read more than 30 chapters in a year and it was addictive. It was very enjoyable. Although there are some flaws, fortunately, the author made timely adjustments and they are harmless. Without the system's mechanical deity, the author's writing is already very good. I highly recommend reading it.

It is indeed a good book. If you think about it carefully, the early setting actually has some shortcomings. Because it has never been popular, the author had no choice but to cut a lot of plots to speed up the pace in the later period, but at least it ended successfully. I have never seen this book before when Tomato recommended it to me a few days after the episode ended. If Tomato had supported this book earlier, I believe the author would not have been forced to write it better. My personal score is between 8.7-9.3. Everyone has their own ideas about the specific score, but this book definitely falls into the category of good books that you will not regret after reading. I hope the author's new book can maintain this style. To be honest, it is difficult to innovate in terms of subject matter, but for me, no matter whether the author of new or old subjects can continue to maintain this style, I can read it. As for whether it will be a hit or not, it's hard to give a solid idea even after reading it countless times. It is true that the plot design is not as eye-catching as the ones on the rankings, and the early settings are also a little immature. However, it is rare for this new author to be able to write like this, and I believe that he will have his own place in the future.

Pretty good. There are only a few divisions about the Song Dynasty, and history is inherently unpopular, so there are even fewer high-quality books. I have only read two books about the Song Dynasty. One is about traveling to Zhao Heng, and the other is this one. The description of history in this book is actually quite rough, and I feel that the junior sister is like a universal tool. There is less description, but her role is very important. I hope the author can write more about her. But this is not the core point of this book. The core point of this book is relatively well grasped. I think the psychological description of the emperor is quite accurate, and the inventions are not too outrageous.

As long as the heroine of this story is not the junior sister and the princess, I think it is well written. Also, you can use your kidneys instead of your heart, and don't have any harem. One or no female protagonist is best. Plot-wise, it's pretty good. Above average The writing also makes sense. The only drawback is that there are too few updates. Hurry up and update more than 10,000 times a day.

Good. How wonderful. I like it very much. The content is flesh and blood. It's not as long-winded as other novels. Also exaggerated. This is my favorite article I have ever read. This is also my first book review!

A modern person traveled back to the sinners who suffered the humiliation of Jingkang in the Northern Song Dynasty, changed Guo Jing's life beliefs, and gained feelings for his family and country. Like 👍🏻, the author is also more attentive ❤️, give it 5 points. I hope Guo Jing can reach the peak of his life! The 5 points I just rated are five⭐

Generally speaking, novels about the protagonist going from victory to victory are not good-looking and can easily make readers tired. This novel seems to be about the protagonist being invincible and smart, but it does not make people feel tired and makes them want to give up. The content is quite exciting and the score should be no less than 9.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, imaginary history + Northern Song Dynasty + behind the scenes + fake Dihua. The historical prophet Pig's Feet travels through the Northern Song Dynasty to turn the tide and prop up the building before it collapses (fudge + science + coincidence + Pig's Feet halo). Bonus points for the imagination, the writing is acceptable, and the plot is rounded (barely rounded). If there is a book shortage, I still support the new book and give it a thumbs up.

It's very interesting. There are very few well-written stories that don't involve harems. I really advise some men's stories to write less about women if they can't write about women. Even if they don't write about women, it's better than writing about them. Otherwise, it will really affect the perception.

I've seen a lot about Tang, Three Kingdoms, and Qin, and it's the first time I've seen through Song. It feels very good, mainly because the protagonist has a brain. Although some things are taken for granted and he is lucky (such as performing miracles), it is really difficult to break this situation without good luck and a smart person.

He is also humorous when he should be funny, and decisive when he should kill. Since Pig's Feet enters the stage as a Heavenly Master, the Five Thunder Dharma is missing. [Think]

The writing is very good, each character has his own characteristics, there is no specific villain, just different positions. When Wanyan Zongwang of the Jin Dynasty invaded the Song Dynasty, the people of the Song Dynasty felt that the Jin people were wrong, and after his death, the people of the Jin Dynasty felt that the Song Dynasty was also wrong. It was just a different position. Wanyan Zongwang was hated by the people of the Song Dynasty, but he was loved by the people of the Jin Dynasty.

It's still pretty good. There's no scene like inventing something and all the ministers being surprised. Those things in the front are also very consistent with the character of the magic stick. I haven't read the rest yet, but for now, it's still worth watching.

I suggest you be patient when reading it. It's a little bit off-putting at the beginning, but you'll find that the more you read it, the more you like it (of course, don't come to me if you don't like it [laughs evilly]). Not to mention high-quality, at least I'll knock down many of the Song Dynasty fan novels I've read [top post]

It's beautiful. It's beautiful. It would be nice if there was no female protagonist.

The content of this book is wonderful, please keep writing!

It's very beautiful, the rating should be above 9 points

There are definitely flaws, and there are shortcomings in logic, but for a newcomer, it is already a perfect answer. If it were rated normally, it would get four stars from me, and the last star would be an encouragement to the author. Don't underestimate yourself, you are already great.

After reading more than half of the 600 chapters, I feel that the writing is humorous and smooth. The protagonist uses prophets and coincidences to intersperse historical events and historical figures, creating a successful character of a magic stick. In view of the original life experience and the background of the end of the Song Dynasty, I am fully expecting the protagonist to accumulate strength to replace the weak Song Dynasty, destroy the money and Yuan, conquer all directions and unify the world. As a result, the protagonist is willing to be a powerful minister for the rest of his life. I don't know what the righteousness is, and how the history books of later generations will judge it. It is a waste of time to start over.

The idea is good, the angle is okay, and the language is playful. But it's not enough to be playful, it's quite different from the level of introduction. It was originally positioned as a comedy, but the writing turned out to be more of a drama. There is still room for growth.

This book is the only completed one among the tomato novels that I have read. It is well-founded and historical, and the characterizations are strengthened and thorough. Not much nonsense. Please pay attention to the author and I will support you strongly.

The author writes very well, and the update speed is also very good. I hope you can continue to do so [Like] [Like]