The Villain's Apprentice Dressed as a Beautiful Master

How can I put it this way? My first impression of the author is very good. I feel that this article is also very good and sweet. But I wrote it too hastily. Sister, don't be impatient and write slowly. I will definitely make time to read what you write in the future. Don't give up in the face of these setbacks. I believe in you, sister. She is the best.

My family, it's so exciting. Although the content is small and the progress is fast, I am a native dog and I love to read. It would be better if there was more content and the protagonist and supporting characters went through more hardships.

Come on, it's very good, just a little bit lacking.

Well, I can only say that this book is a bit too elementary school written, and the emotional line is too nonsensical. The male protagonist in the original text only appears a few times, the character conflicts are not strong, and the plot is a bit confusing. Finally, I still really hope that the author will listen to your opinions, read more excellent books, and write better stories as soon as possible [Send my heart] (This is just my personal opinion, I don't mean to say that this novel is bad. If you like short stories, you can read it)

Let's put it this way, the writing style is too elementary school, the emotional matters are not handled well at all, and the whole book is really watery. It gives people a very outrageous feeling. In fact, this article is really outrageous and clumsy [laughs]

Although the progress was fast, they fell in love without any special experience, which was a bit awkward, and the character creation was not profound, and the master's character suddenly collapsed. I hope the author will make great efforts to improve his writing style [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] But the whole story is very sweet, and it's very refreshing to watch haha [adoration] [blowing kiss]

Everyone has their own feelings. For me, although this is short, it is quite interesting. The content is very exciting and the characters are quite individual. It is just a bit unreadable [face covering]

Brainless little sweet articles are still sweet sometimes progress too fast Also, the male protagonist was very speechless when he chose friends in front of his friends and master several times. It was so unreasonable and vexatious. It happened several times. In the end, it was okay.

What can I say? In fact, if this book is written with more details as usual, then I think this book will be very good. It's just that the plot is a bit too fast. It often leaves readers unable to react, leading to a decline in reading experience. May I suggest that the author write novels more slowly in the future?

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It's so beautiful, I love it so much [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

It's pretty good, but the plot is a bit rushed

This book is really good, even though it is short.

I really like plots that progress quickly, but I never expected it to progress so quickly. But that's not a problem. It's really super cool! Goo Tian!

It's really good to read. The plot is totally to my liking. I just don't know why such a good-looking book has so few ratings. This book is really nice. I recommend everyone to read it. It won't be a loss if you invest in it.

Emmmm The writing is not very good, like a primary school student. Then the writing seems to be good. The plot is a bit inexplicable and I fell in love with it?/. I hope the author will keep up the good work. This writing style is really not good. The plot concept is emmmmm, come on. All I can say is

According to the newspaper, the main CP's Shou always chooses friends first between Gong and friends, even though he claims that both of them are equally important. The deputy CP's Gong led people to kill many disciples of the Shou sect and the deputy Shou was still able to have sex with him. Maybe the life of the cannon fodder is not as good as the love of the main supporting character.

It's super pretty, and it's a master-student romance. I love it.

It's very interesting. I hope the author can write more novels like this. (You can read both long and short stories.)

How about a side story? The author is great. There are so many millions of little ones [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]