Apocalypse Dungeon: The Nation Plays for Me, and I Win Big

… The subject matter is good, and the writing style is also okay. However, The author likes to poison, First, I like to act cool, which even old bookworms are particularly taboo on. Second, Pride and Prejudice, you allow your enemies to grow too much. The nuclear bomb hasn't exploded yet. How dare you? Thirdly, the scenes I experienced in the previous life are all confused and unclear in this life. I mentioned in the previous article that due to the location of the exploration? Provide 25% exploration degree later? Forgot, that's probably what it means, Fourth, there are typos. You really need to revamp the input method. The whole world knows that you use pinyin instead of speaking, and also knows that you choose 123456 words without distinction. I am convinced that dead people can be marked as private. At this point I can't help but click on the directory to comment.

It's okay. I didn't explain it clearly in many places at the beginning, and there were also many typos.

Lots of typos

Not to mention the writing style, there are so many typos, it looks so embarrassing 😂

Too many typos.

There are so many typos, and some of them are not even homophonic, but have wrong pinyin. Dude, are you typing even the pinyin?

There are typos throughout the article, and some of the wrong meanings are hard to understand. There are also cases where there are typos in the middle of a sentence and a few more words at the end. I can't read part-time jobs. The author must have lowered his head while typing without raising his head to read it. This is the first time I can write like this.

The theme and plot of your novel are good, but there are many typos in your article, the details are incomplete, and the descriptions are confusing. Sometimes you write in jumps, going from one place to another place, and then from another place to this place all at once. This makes the readers uncomfortable and makes them feel confused.

There are too many typos, which is very affecting.

A novel with many typos makes it difficult to read a novel.