One Piece: Born to Rule

It's a slow burn, I don't think I can touch the plot of One Piece without half a million words [laughs awkwardly]

Is this setting of the epee very confusing to people? Why add such a boring setting? Since you are writing a fanfic, you should respect the original work. If the power system is not included in the original work, try not to include it. Shouldn't you feel your breath? What do you mean, your heavy sword is so powerful that it can be split open? If you can change it, change it. It will be a trap later.

Come on, come on, it feels like reading the One Piece Code [Thinking]

Let's improve the protagonist's strength, otherwise it will be too weak now

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The beginning is a bit like the Pirate Code, and the plot after the small town plot is so boring.

Very good, keep up the good work

Very good, come on You are on the recommendation list.

Pity. . . . .

Have you entered the palace? Hey, why was it castrated when it was obviously good? [Anger]