Star Dome Railway: Kafka's Boyfriend at the Beginning

Thanks to all the readers for their reminders and suggestions these days, the first half of the book has been revised a lot. I didn't have much experience writing novels before. When I was writing, I found that I always entered a state of obsession with authority. I just couldn't feel many of the poisonous points that may be obvious to readers. Then when someone reminded me, I could feel it again after reading it a few more times. After the modification, various data have also been significantly improved, so I always hope that you can remind me more and scold me more. Thank you for your help despite your busy schedule. [Adoration] Because many people are saying this, I'd better explain it. The "invincible" in the label is because I chose it wrong at the beginning, or I didn't think about it well at the beginning, and I can't change it now. The protagonist is not invincible from the beginning, the protagonist's strength gradually grows. I don't think I'm good enough to write a pure invincible novel. If I throw away the growth route, I feel like I won't be able to write very long... Maybe it will be over in one or two hundred chapters. But I want to keep writing this novel. If the data is good, I will challenge the four-digit chapter.

Hey hey hey that's great! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's really good (it's a pity that the author is a boy, but it's not impossible for boys~ [laughing] [laughing evilly] Guess what I want to say [laughing evilly]

I hope the author can update it soon. Be careful of some people sending razor blades [eating melons]. There was a book that was discontinued before and now readers are sweeping their graves.

Author, you don't want to be raised as a bookkeeper, do you? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It was a bit awkward at first, but then it became more and more natural. Come on, author! [Think]

Not bad, great [take a closer look] Can there be more content about Kafka in the back? What kind of dog food do you like to see the most?

Your Excellency Yoxi (Da Zuoyin)'s work, thank you so much Yoxi, I hope you won't disappoint us readers [laughing]

Not bad, very pretty

I never like five-star reviews in installments [laughing]. After all, if I don't like it, I won't appear here, so please keep updating, Zayu~

Why is it so short? Can you do it? Author OK, the author is indeed not good at it

How can I put it this way? Qi Bao is very cute. I just want the female character to not collapse and become Brother Cheng.

Can the author take away the duck? Aligaduo.

So beautiful, highly recommended

Beautiful, but the author is too short

I found another book that suits me

It's pretty good. It's great to play with Kafka. Don't cut her in the back. I don't want to see her turn into a drop of water [please update]

This book is very suitable to my taste, especially the main character is Beng Bengbeng. Secondly, it has multiple female protagonists. There are no other shortcomings except that the update is slow.

There are really not many Bengtie fans that I can read now, and this is one of them.

The only drawback is that it's too short

Generally speaking, the early plot of this book is okay, but later on it may be due to the author's incomplete construction of the text framework that the textual framework appears. Overall this was a good read! ! !

Send you a blessing

It's really good

It's so cool. It's so cool.

Well, when I watched it before, it was still before I didn't expect it to be over so soon

Sincerely, it's not enough!

Books are society, and a good book is a good world and a good society. It can cultivate people's emotions and temperament and make people noble.

Ending of spreading flowers [laughing evilly] (the ending is quite happy, referring to Zhou Keer's resurrection)

The protagonist is watching and copying each one🐴

Is there an original plot behind it?