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Let me say, it's so good. The plot is good so far, the characters are well described, and the world setting is good. I also like the character of the male protagonist. It's just that it's too short! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wouldn't this be very popular if it were adapted into a comic? There is no problem with the combat power and there is no collapse. To be honest, now that I have seen more than 290, I feel a little bit indifferent the more I look at it, because there are too many foreshadowings, and now I feel a little frustrated, and the author is too slow. I can only say that when writing these foreshadowings, the author should consider whether they can bury them as soon as possible, especially for the future male protagonist. You, the author, buried so many foreshadowings at the same time, and did not combine them with the characters. The plot at that time made the readers confused and a little frustrated. The main reason is that the protagonist's strength is really good. There are many fights that the protagonist does not take personally. Compared with those who have been trained, readers may pay more attention to the male protagonist. Nowadays, there are often many important characters who are not afraid of the protagonist's strength. Although this book is good, I still recommend some readers to read it for a while if they don't want to feel aggrieved. Because the author has buried foreshadowing, the subsequent plot will often not attract your attention as much as those foreshadowings. You can only wait for the author to continue to update and bury the foreshadowing, or wait for the author to finish the orc chapter before reading. Anyway, I have to give up for a while [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I hope the author will not start high and go low

The rating of this book is really low. It is rare to see a work with such a clear outline on Tomato. The author also knows how to create all kinds of interesting points. It will not be like many books that use the gimmick of the introduction to attract people to read, and then the content in the introduction will be boring plot. The way the male protagonists get along with different female protagonists in each volume is also quite interesting. It won't make people feel the same after reading it. Some small expansions in the first two volumes are also well designed. The past in the first volume and the future in the second volume. In short, I think this book deserves a 9.5 On Tomato.

The amazing feeling is hard to get over for a long time The current situation in Tomato is a typical "kingdom prevails" so-called Shuangwen, which is also the hardest hit area in the other world. But let me explain the advantages of this book in detail: 1. The foreshadowing and the answer in the following article are very unexpected and can evoke my feelings as a reader. 2. Don't dwell too much on the character's image, but focus on the narrative. The series of plots before and after also makes the whole novel structurally complete. 3. Original plot style and unique chapter settings. This amazing feeling is hard to get over for a long time To sum up: the writing is complete, the plot is original, the narrative is reasonable, and the language is both elegant and popular. Dear author, I hope you can continue to create such high-quality works. As a reader, facing this kind of book, I give five stars~

After reading it, I can say that it is very interesting. Why does this online article smell like a light novel? Also, I feel that the plot of traveling through history can actually be changed. According to the author's writing, if it has changed a little in the long river of history, the parties involved in the history will definitely know it, and it may be a bit inconvenient to write. In fact, the author could refer to the fairy planting manual and just help the heroine modify this tragic ending in her consciousness. To achieve redemption, not to change history. But I have to say that the author's writing is very good. Even with a lot of Tomato defense, it can be regarded as a small stream of fresh air. Come on, keep it up. Come on, author [like][like][like] It looks good, but why has the author disappeared again? Don't stop updating, I really love this book. There are really very few tomatoes of this style nowadays. I quite like this style, so I told the author not to cut it [almost crying]

I have to say that this is a good book. I just discovered it tonight. I thought I would stop reading it after 1-2 hours, but I found that the content of this book was very attractive to me. I finished reading the updated plot (Elves) in one go. The story background of the book is very good. It is about the knight system in ancient Western times, and it also adds elements such as multiple races and systems. Although it is a system novel, it is not like other System Invincible novels which make people feel stale at the end. This slow development makes people thought-provoking. In terms of plot, it's okay. According to the current plot (elf chapter) and then (the princess chapter), the plots before and after are incoherent according to the updated novel. This also increases the reason why the novel can be written. There may be many different chapters in the follow-up. I am very looking forward to whether the final chapter will have a perfect ending [top post].

It's a very good book. The rating is a bit low. I especially like Wendy. At the beginning, it may be that the author was inexperienced, which led to unsatisfactory characterization. But it got better later on. If it doesn't fall apart in the middle and later stages, the results should be very good. Great support to the author.

Dangdang, evaluate it. As a novice writer, it is very good. The pacing is well controlled and the characterization is okay. At least the protagonist has characteristics. I can imagine what the main character looks like. It looks cool with a hint of warmth. But looking forward to the main plot, what is the secret of the protagonist's ability? Is the protagonist really a businessman later on? What is the connection between the protagonist and the current chaotic world situation? How were those particular slaves found, and what was the secret to their abilities? All in all, it's worth watching and can be lightly recommended. My evaluation is good, you can read it. The main line is somewhat quiet at the moment. Kudos to the author, I will try my best to recommend it.

The writing is very good, but the last dozen or so chapters have been a bit rushed. I don't know whether it's due to the arrangement of the plot or the urgent processing of the outline. For readers, if they have calmed down and experienced the world built by the author. Suddenly the author moves from close to moving, and the brainless atmosphere in the article suddenly appears. Especially after the elf rescue, the protagonist's elegance is no longer seen. The protagonist who is calm and calm in trouble suddenly becomes, okay, okay, get it, a middle-aged social beast with no problems. I don't have any capital at all, so I can only work overtime if my boss says I'm owed wages, so I'm a social beast with arrears of wages. I don't know why the author suddenly became eager. The writing is very good and the plot is full of excitement. It's a pity that the author couldn't hold on. The novel is the same as the novel. You and the eagle must make a compromise. The author's style of writing and the flow of the novel are the same. The final climax of the slow-burning novel is when it explodes. Just like Lelouch who died in the finale, the work was pushed from ordinary to the throne. The author's writing style is very good, and the book looks beautiful. He is a good eagle, but it is a pity that he fell asleep before he could get through it. His writing style changed, and his elegance and personality were gone. The book is still the same book, but the road up the mountain is broken. Personal bias, it's my fault if I'm wrong, please cheers for the author.

I have read more than ninety chapters so far. In the era of Shuangwen, The style of this book is a breath of fresh air, and it is well grasped. The writing style is very good, there is no poisonous point, all the characters are well created, and the foreshadowing is well laid out, making people want to know what happens next. As long as you keep it cool, it's a magical book

It can be said that it is a novel delayed by the title. Unlike other novels, the protagonist of the novel chooses a high-spirited young man as the protagonist. The protagonist of this film, Brett, has a mature temperament like an uncle. He does not change his face when a mountain collapses in front of him, which gives the other protagonists in the story a full sense of security. Although he is not Long Aotian, the look and feel is several times better than Long Aotian.

It's great. The protagonist is very mysterious and seems to be under control (but I personally feel that the protagonist is probably a blockhead, after all, there are too few authors!!!) It should be in the invincible style. The character's psychological process is also very well developed, just like Wendy will not give away a favor immediately, but will gradually get to know the protagonist and finally resolve the grudges. Believe me, keep reading and don't give up in the first few chapters. The rating of this book will definitely be very high in the future. Finally, I hope the author can write more. If it's too little, it won't be enough.

This setting is very suitable for hair scissors This book has nothing to do with the introduction. The content in the introduction should be about 500,000 words. But the plot and writing of this book are very good. I hope that the protagonist's attitude of not being happy with things or sad with himself will continue to be neither sad nor happy, and extremely calm.

This book is not as ugly as everyone said. I was confused when I saw it, but it seems that it does not satisfy some people's authorship. Everything is slowly revealed later. The author's writing skills need to be strengthened, as does the natural feeling of the dialogue, but these are not big problems, and it is interesting. I can tell you clearly that it is not a completely fast-paced book. The story is step-by-step. Some people may think that it is fast-paced because the filling is not delicate enough. It is currently a magic book with a novel beginning, and of course it will not be a copy of the old-fashioned textbook template.

The first few aspects of the writing style should be fine, but the author is constantly changing, and the quality is very high. It stands to reason that at some point, everyone will be somewhat famous.

First of all, this is the best book I have read in the past two months (✪▽✪) The content of the book itself is old-fashioned, but very attractive. For now, the settings are quite reasonable. I hope that the author can ensure that the setting will not collapse, the plot will not be unfinished, and it will be updated steadily. P. S. I feel that the title of this book is inexplicably embarrassing -_-||, and I feel that it is not worthy of the content of this book. . .

The background of the world is grand, the description of the background story is also good, and the characters are flesh-and-blood. This book is not about pure love and love. They are just patriots who fight for their country. The male protagonist is just but not brainless and kind, innocent but not innocent. This book is a slow-burning type, and the protagonist is not a brainless and invincible kind. The male protagonist has a kind of transactional development towards the female protagonist. The only disadvantage is that the author is too slow to update. If you are used to fast food invincibility, it may be boring. You may consider reading this book. It is really good.

It looks good. I hope the protagonist can gradually become stronger. Although he is a slave trader, he can slowly acquire more slaves and protect them so that they can grow up slowly. He can keep one or two by his side so that the protagonist can train them and become effective subordinates [laughter][laughter] The variety can be enriched, here comes the little girl hidden in the dragon's bloodline

It's beautiful, the characters are very detailed, keep up the good work

The two-dimensional masterpiece in my mind! [Shy]

It is a novel subject matter. In addition to being too short, each story line can be a little longer and the characters can be fleshed out a little more. It is very interesting to keep reading. The protagonist is well portrayed and everything is self-explanatory. It is a novel worth watching [laughter]

I have finished watching the first heroine, and I was a little surprised. It tells the story of the hero helping the heroines who are in trouble. According to the current routine, when I saw this title, I thought that the redemption of the heroines by the hero had happened in the past, and the story time should be for the awesome heroines who had been helped by the hero to repay the hero (by the way), and then fill in the past with memories. In this way, the story at the beginning will not be too bad, but the biggest excitement will have to wait until very later.

Very good, I've read Chapter 170 for now, it's non-toxic (you can read it with confidence) The plot is very fast, not dragging at all, and there is no cliché. The character's personality is also pretty good, nothing too wrong. If you keep writing like this, it will be better.

The content is quite good, and the protagonist is well portrayed, but it's too short. I hope it won't end so poorly in the future. After all, I've never read a novel about Tomato that didn't end badly, so I still have high expectations~ [laughs]

It's very well written. Come on, I like the protagonist's character and behavior very much. I see new ideas and creativity in it, and I see a character that is unique to him. The plot is pretty good and belongs to the upper middle range. As for the shortcomings, I' think there are a bit few anchor points, that is, I have no impression of each person's appearance. Hope added. Very good. Come on, please send it more carefully.

It's very well written and I give you a five-star review.

It's a relatively good-looking article, I think it's well written. I have some suggestions that the pace can be faster. If there are many characters and similar types, the same process can be accelerated to enrich the different images of the characters. The protagonist's future development should be more diverse and move to a higher position step by step (small suggestion). I look forward to finishing it. I hope I can maintain the level. Come on, author.

The writing is good. When I read the title at first I thought it was a mindless novel, but unexpectedly the writing is a bit good. The narrative style is very plain and soothing, which is the feeling of telling a story. It makes people want to read it. I think it is a good book.

Okay, this book is quite good, there are no poisonous points, and the logic is quite clear. It looks very good [like] [laughs evilly] but I don't know how fast it will be updated. After reading it, I will update it quickly [crazy]

This is a story about a slave merchant cultivating talented/special status slaves. This setting is not special, but it may not be popular here. At first I thought the writing was quite good, but when it came to the emotional description of the characters, I felt that it was written too hard... Well, or it was written too straightforwardly... For example, when traveling through the dark past of the elves for rescue, the anger of the protagonist was described many times, which was expressed through the coldness of the eyes... The elf's emotional change is also a bit stiff, and he seems anxious... From initial resistance to later acceptance and approval... But it's understandable, after all, it's free. Around Chapter 50, I started writing the paper... The title of the paper may be "Research on the Power System of Another World", or it may be "Feasibility Analysis of the Mysterious Power of Another World"... To put it simply, it is just to make up the settings, and then do a logical analysis to justify it... A more classic hydrological method. Overall, it's pretty good. I personally think the score is above average. Ps: The scene where the protagonist chooses the path for the elf makes me feel like the protagonist is an NPC...

This is a slow-burning novel. I personally don't hate slow-burning novels, but I don't like fast-paced novels. The main line of the story has always been very clear, which is that the protagonist acquires abilities through cultivation so that he can survive in this world. The protagonist has a very good character, not extreme, but able to be decisive. In fact, this is what a normal smart person should look like. If you are too paranoid or crazy, you will definitely lose yourself in this dark and different world. The protagonist's own abilities are not strong. The protagonist's strength comes from the system. This is actually not suitable for creating a calm protagonist, but it doesn't hurt.