Time Travel, I Make Pancakes in Warhammer

I never write book reviews, but this book is really worth writing. The part about Slaanesh was really amazing. At first, I was thinking about the meaning of selling pancakes in Warhammer, but the more I watched, the more interesting it became. Although the protagonist is weak, the path he chose is his own, and he still maintains his mobility. Secondly, he overcomes one obstacle after another very quickly. And the writing style is indispensable, to be honest. Very good, It has a Jiangnan flavor, likes to make some metaphors, and the details are also very good. It is rare to see such a beautiful book. The quality does decline in the later years, but I am willing to pay for the subsequent stories.

It conforms to the basic setting of Warhammer. Compared with other Warhammer fans, there are less excessive combat descriptions, that is, the combat power setting is more reasonable. Secondly, compared with other Warhammers, this book has less bloody combat descriptions. It is also cerebral, and the writing style is natural and smooth, which is not easy to cause reading fatigue. It is a rare breath of fresh air in the Warhammer literature. The only caution is: the audience's lack of understanding of Warhammer itself may feel missing when reading this book. The solution is to ask directly in the circle, or read relevant military books on your own.

It's fun to watch and quite docile. The protagonist is very content and always happy but not greedy. The female protagonist is temporarily free, but there is a Slaanesh guy, but I want to see it fire the protagonist instead of the protagonist driving a big car, because I don't know how much I weigh if I fire a Slaanesh demon.

The writing is very good, especially the battle sister part, which feels too real. Also, the experience in the Middle Nest. The author spent a lot of pen and ink to describe the acquaintance, familiarity, and final bond between the protagonist and everyone in the Middle Nest, and then suddenly gave such a standard Warhammer-style ending. This is very consistent with my conception of Warhammer fandom.

It's rare to have such good writing, especially the author's metaphors, which are really witty. Even if you haven't read Warhammer, you won't feel confused when reading it. The author will give an introduction. The protagonist's character and plot are also great, and the supporting characters are also well-written. It's worth reading. It's just that updates are so slow… I have to say that it is indeed abusing the main text. Sometimes it is even illogical and just for the sake of abusing... You can abuse, but you have to be logical!

I really like the part about meeting Slaanesh in the early stages. People who don't know anything about the original work can feel the despair and hope in it, and finally struggle to redeem themselves. It's very shocking. In comparison, the back part is surprisingly bland.

I know why this book is not highly rated,,, First of all, I have to admit that among the many cool articles, it can be seen that the author wanted to write a story that is more interesting to people. The subsequent series of stories are quite logical. And it can be seen that the author has a certain understanding of WH40k, and is not completely a cloud hammer. Okay, if what I said above is the advantages, I will talk about the disadvantages next. First of all, the author's portrayal of emotions is too thin, maybe because the author is a novice, which is excusable. However, in the later process, the author likes to end a story with an emotional impact. What does that mean? To put it simply, cutting for the sake of cutting is uncomfortable. There are good knives in literary works. In this case, the death of a character will resonate with the audience and make them feel regretful, such as Ace in One Piece, Sirius in HP, etc. In this case, the reader will also feel sorry, but not uncomfortable. Another kind is the rotten sword. The death of the more famous Eri Ryu from the Dragon Clan is so fatal that it makes readers feel sick, but the author thinks he has written a touching story,,, bullshit. The situation of this book is better. At least the author did not let the character die without dignity, but it was also a knife for the sake of knife, which made people feel uncomfortable, but the author believed that it played a good ending to the story. Of course, some people will retort, "Ah, this is Warhammer, do you understand, despair is the main tone" [awkward laughter]. I dare not call myself a Hammer guy because I have never bought chess pieces to play on the table. I have only bought a few novels and medieval military books. I have played Total War Warhammer 3 on the computer for a long time, and I also have 100 hours of Star Marine 2, so I can only be called a Cloud Hammer. But I know a few Warhammer guys who are quite humble. They would jokingly call themselves Yunhammer after not being on the table for a few months. After reading this novel, I asked them, do you like the dark and incomplete background of Warhammer? I almost made them laugh. They said that only junior high school students would find Warhammer Dark and Dark attractive, to satisfy their niche mentality. Most normal people are just interested in racial settings. I'm not complaining that the protagonist is weak, I want to read a cool novel; nor am I saying that the author's swordsman doesn't fit the background. What I mean is that the author cuts for the sake of cutting, and the person who cuts does not help the story. Overall, this book is okay and can be read. After all, it is not a good book. The author pays attention to a lot of story logic. But the premise is that you can endure the author's lame emotional drama and meaningless knife man in the middle. Let's see if there is any improvement in the future. If so, the rating will go up. Finally, I want to say that if the fandom will only blindly copy the setting background and story tone, then there is no need for it to exist [Thinking]

I've only read chapter 10, and it's surprisingly good. The protagonist is more like a front-facing version of Slaanesh weakened, weakened, and weakened again. More importantly, the phone is called "Ohm Messiah"?

A very orthodox Warhammer novel, showing a grand world view. The protagonist is a very good person, but it is a pity that he really came to the Warhammer world. The fate of an individual is like a tiny speck of dust in this chaotic universe. The protagonist struggled hard to protect the beauty around him and went through many experiences. After many hardships, we finally saw the dawn of hope, but in the end, our former friends, lovers, and the order of the entire world were inadvertently crushed to pieces. Individuals floated and struggled powerlessly in the chaos and disorder. Order and beauty were fragile and unavailable. This is the most authentic Warhammer universe! The taste is pure! This book is like the most authentic Tianjin pancake fruit. The grand world view and settings form a thin and tough crust; the beautiful friendship between the protagonist and his friends and even the desperate efforts to save the entire planet and maintain order are like soul sauce; and in the face of ups and downs of crisis, the characters struggle with all their strength, and they feel a sense of despair when they see the light but are crushed! This creates the crispiest texture! This is the core of pancake fruit! It really makes me so high!

Good book recommendation! This book changed my stereotype of tomatoes!

Well written. It's just that I hope that the protagonist can face Freya [smile][smile][smile][smile] head-on or that Freya can become the protagonist. [Sinister smile]

This is one of the few protagonists with charismatic personality in the Warhammer works that I have seen. The protagonist is witty, brave, full of compassion for the civilians, full of anger against the darkness, and full of affection for his comrades. The plot is compact, reasonable and smooth, and the humorous daily life is interspersed with the author's light of righteousness given to the protagonist. The protagonist's device is a weakened version of the God of All Machines mobile phone, which weakens the expression of combat power, so there is no need to worry about the collapse of combat power so far. A masterpiece of Warhammer fandom, starting from 6.5 To 8.5 Now. Maybe some people like to see Long Aotian at the beginning, but some people like me like the protagonist to gradually grow and become stronger. In short, Warhammer is a masterpiece that cannot be ignored. I felt that the taste changed after seeing the later part. I felt that the taste changed greatly before and after the orc plot. The author wrote Slaanesh as the protagonist's portable grandpa (evil version). I felt that the protagonist wanted to write Slaanesh as the main character. The result was that he wanted to write a positive character to fit the protagonist but was afraid of deviating from the original definition of the original Slaanesh. The result is that Slaanesh is a great demon to the common people (perverted and cruel) and a maid (humble and flattering) to the protagonist. The protagonist's Guangweizheng image is incompatible with the protagonist's image. Therefore, the protagonist's image is greatly separated from the previous hundreds of chapters. He has turned a blind eye to the actions of the Great Demon Slaanesh (even sympathizing with the Great Demon Slaanesh???). The protagonist has also stopped working hard and acted in a non-committal manner. Especially later, the protagonist's adventures have become destiny (meaning that the Great Demon Slaanesh can appear at any time to affect the protagonist. I really hate the character of the Great Demon Slaanesh), so I abandoned the book. But thanks to the author for writing the plot before the orcs in this book. The protagonist can be called a knight in the Warhammer world, and he looks upright and full of hope.

The top Warhammer fan in my heart, with sunshine on the background of despair

Personally, I still like this book very much. The author describes the protagonist very well. He also writes about a pure 3k useless college student who has a brain and is very useful. Someone in the comment area said that the protagonist is a virgin, and I can understand it. But from my personal point of view, there is no problem with this. This is the conscience of our modern society. You can choose or not. This is the instinctive reaction of education in our modern society. It is always good to help one more person. Just like the last sentence of the game Ice Age, is it all worth it? Same. As far as Tomato is concerned, I personally think this book is the best non-refreshing novel that fits Warhammer. It describes the cruelty of Warhammer, but also writes about the conscience of the protagonist, which makes me have a high sense of involvement. The current Warhammer, at a glance, either comes with a system or starts with a super-strength Space Marine. There are not many that the author can narrate from a 3k mortal perspective and be great at it. This is my digression. I really like reading books where the protagonist has a brain and is an ordinary person but also has content related to part of the plot. If you have any, please recommend it.

The best Warhammer fanfic I have seen so far, the protagonist can think and act, although in the trenchant Warhammer universe he does the same thing as Sisyphus. Surviving a desperate situation and trying hard in vain made me feel a little suffocated, and at the same time I sighed: Groove's 40K Universe

Second brush 😇 A very good-looking Hammer novel, nothing like Long Aotian. I like it so much. I glanced at the comments and felt that it should be a favorite for those who liked it, but it was boring for those who didn't like it. Jianbingguozi didn't appear much in the later period, but the plot was very serious, not a complete comedy. The first stage of the Slaanesh dungeon is perfect, sexy and weird, the second stage of the Nurgle dungeon has interesting life in the hive, and the supporting characters are impressive and attractive. The third stage should be the Tzeentch dungeon. The development of the first two is really not attractive enough for me. I thought I would give the orcs pancake fruit and then snatch it (? What about the melee (still looking forward to the follow-up plot [blowing kiss]]

Now that I see it, I feel that this book has many shadows of Faust. There are also demons who sign contracts with each other, and at the end of each story, everyone loses everything and is covered with wounds. Also, after witnessing the dangers of cold human nature in society, he is still unsatisfied with the status quo. Including the protagonist's recent surname is Sisyphus. Goethe once compared himself to Sisyphus, which represented that he would never compromise, never be satisfied, and always pursue beautiful things. I think this may be the reason why the protagonist attracted Slaanesh's attention in the first place. The author has told the story very well so far. Apart from some flaws in details and writing, it is really good. After all, this is Tomato. Give it a five-star encouragement and see if you will be saved by an angel like Faust in the future.

The writing is very good, especially the descriptions are delicate, which well reflects the tragic and tragic struggles of the characters who do not give up hope. What's even better is that when this work describes tragedy, it rarely commits the common problem of such works (not limited to Warhammer fans) that compose new words to express sadness. The joyful and humorous parts that are occasionally inserted in the middle of the main drama are also well described and suit my taste. It's just that the rhythm of the hive part is a bit too slow, especially after the very tight-paced opening, it becomes even more slow. However, the rhythm control of the green skin part after that is pretty good.

If I really had to write it, the review would probably be very long, but when I was struggling with how to write it, I never could give a five-star review. So let's give a simple reason for recommendation first. It's really exciting. There's no particularly heroic fantasy or embarrassing feelings of scratching the floor. It's just trying to live in the context of Warhammer - but the overall impression is relaxing. It's not a text that makes you feel bored when you read it. Every pent-up emotion can be quickly found to be vented. Moreover, the protagonist who unconsciously and gradually becomes epileptic, but is still good at the same time, is very charming. Not found! Substitute! Waiting for the update! Not found! A substitute!

Undoubtedly a masterpiece. The inner portrayal of the protagonist is very real and fully embodies the brilliance of human nature. Even if he faces repeated failures, he still believes in his own path. This is truly unique in the Warhammer world

Chapter 256. The advantage is probably that it is easy to understand, and you can read it without any problem even if you don't know Warhammer. The writing was quite good when I saved the manuscript earlier, and it is worth reading. It won't be good if you start updating later. The desire for passive 4i xp, and the xp aesthetic of impotent men with testosterone and masculinity run through the whole text. The result is that the twist, left and right brain fights make people have frequent dramas. The previous article emphasized the deceptive method of half truth and half truth. It seems to be the king, but suddenly it comes to a complete summer talk, and a bronze game is played. It is probably because the author himself does not know how to deal with some contradictions, so he can only use a writing method similar to deus ex machina. The result was still a mess. There are so many twists and turns that it's unbearable to encounter them every once in a while. If an advantage in a long article is not maintained all the time, it is not an advantage, but a disadvantage. This book is like that. It's still a bit of a pity.

It's beautiful, and I didn't expect it to be resurrected. This is my first comment. It's beautiful. I must keep writing until the end. Don't stop. Don't end it. Please, the author is so grateful.

The ability to catch up with progress (sadness) Generally speaking, the only person who has no purpose, is good to the protagonist without asking for anything in return, and thinks about the protagonist is Ohm Messiah... Oh, praise the great Lord of all opportunities The rhythm is a little off. Wouldn't it be better to describe less meaningless things like battlefield reconnaissance, monster spawning details, treatment, and explanations of things that have been explained before and are clear at a glance? (At least don't treat the wounds for a whole chapter...) Write more about the protagonist, at least write about the interaction with the protagonist, finally bring in a... I don't think beautiful dialogue will become the bottleneck of this novel

What can I say? This novel by the author is more about letting us explore the adventure of the Warhammer 40k universe from a mortal perspective. There's a Warhammer novel next door. "I traveled to the Warhammer world, but I didn't cry. Although this book also takes an adventure in the Warhammer world from a mortal perspective, the author stacked buffs for the protagonist too high, making him invincible at the beginning. So it seems that no mortal would be in danger if he explored Warhammer. Tense and immersive. The author of this book is quite good and gives me a sense of accomplishment. Keep up the good work.

Summary: A chocolate-covered orelli to give. It's funny in the early stage, but it's abusive in the later stage.

The character design and world view construction are all in place. It's just too cruel. When an important supporting character died in more than a hundred pictures, I didn't give up because it was to describe the cruelty of Warhammer. When a female supporting character was described in more than a hundred pictures, I endured it because it might be to promote the story. But you told me that she was killed by another supporting character after a few scenes, and her death had nothing to do with the protagonist. My defense was broken. The protagonist in more than 400 pictures had no hope of defeating his opponent. Apart from the invincible villain, there were no supporting characters with any memorable points. All I can say is that this is very Warhammer but unfortunately it's not for me.

Book review written by seeing the shit yellow button Let me start with the conclusion: Those who play Warhammer but are not followers of Old Man Huang will be fascinated by this book. Writing style: I would rate it 8 out of 10. There are some typos and words, but few. All the characters written by the author have good personalities, but the only one that doesn't stand out is the Mechanical Sage. Plot: I would give it a 9 out of 10. There is no fixed copy, it all depends on triggering. And unlike most Warhammer fanfics, the protagonist of this book is more neutral. Subject matter: I can't say it's very novel, but there are indeed few foreign books about Warhammer 40k and medieval Warhammer. Deduction items: Some places are written a bit too Riddler, which may cause some friends who don't like to use their brains to taste it. Bonus points: the protagonist doesn't destroy the world, nor is it a mindless novel. The characters are well-drawn, and there are constant events that cause the protagonist's personality to change. Small suggestion: In some special places, it is recommended that the author write some popular science in the paragraph comments. Summary: Yang Persimmon is a software for finding gold in 💩. You will see a shitty yellow button in three days. I found your gold in this software, not very pure, but worth refining.

A good book is delayed by its title. This book mainly unfolds the story from the protagonist being pushed by fate to planet after planet in the Warhammer world. If you don't know or know much about Warhammer, then you are more suitable to read this book. Currently, there are no major Warhammer events in the world experienced by the protagonist, and there is no clear plot or plot rewriting. It focuses on the survival status of different worlds and factions in the Warhammer worldview. The protagonist has modern memory and knows about the Warhammer game. He is not completely ignorant of the Warhammer protagonist, so his ideas are closer to the readers' understanding. At the same time, he does not believe in the Emperor. He thinks that 40k is a mess, and the Emperor is just a relatively less bad mess. As someone who knows little about Warhammer, I really felt like I was the protagonist when I read the book. As the plot progressed, I understood why the empire did what it did, and I felt more and more that the world was ruined. He wrote about the despair that seems like you can't get a good ending no matter how hard you try. It feels so Warhammer, welcome to Warhammer 40K.

"The red boss sells magical coke cakes in Warhammer" [laughing evilly], it's so fun.

I have read the first three chapters. It should be a well-written Warhammer novel. I have forgotten the name of the first Warhammer novel I read. It is probably that the protagonist is the son created by the strongest man named the Emperor. He has hundreds of such sons, and he himself is tasked with escorting a witch. But I met another witch on the way. That witch was from Silver Moon Tower. It was an organization exclusively for women. Two people rushed to get her, but the male protagonist didn't want to get involved with the later witch because he felt that the people in Silver Moon Tower were arrogant. That was probably the case, and he didn't see much of it. If anyone knows, please let me know. Closer to home, this book is really well written, but I would like to give you a suggestion. If you have not understood the world view of the game Warhammer, it will be very difficult to read this article. This will raise the threshold a bit and fail to retain people. The author can give a brief introduction during the writing process, which can also be considered as retaining traffic.