When He Becomes a Devil

This is much better than Shuangwen [Chigua]

For me, this is a good book. The words are clear and much better than some cool articles. However, there are some things that are not explained, which makes me a little confused. I also need more updates [smile].

Come on, author, if I think it is well received, I will go to major websites and platforms to share links for the later plot. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

The subject matter is good It's the foreshadowing of Tiandao's control. I don't quite understand it. Is it to wash away the three girls and then take them away? In this case, a large number of readers will be lost. But if it wasn't for the purpose of washing the three girls, then the subsequent torture of the three girls would be a bit laborious and boring. Also, the plot between the Nangong sisters and Ning is a bit strange. 1. Highlight the weakness and lack of vigilance of the protagonist. After all, someone who can give you a slave mark, how can you not be on guard against it. 2. I feel that it is a bit unacceptable to abuse Ning. For those of us who cannot accept it from a God's perspective, you might as well not tell me that Ning is fake (can the author please stop abusing Ning, and be gentle if you do [facepalm]). 3. Follow up on the protagonist's position. Righteous way: There are three women who can't forgive too quickly, and can't get in if they don't forgive. The Demonic Way: Being Schemed feels a little difficult to get in and needs to resolve Ning's matter first. However, Nangong Lin died and the staff was reduced immediately (she should be resurrected in the future). The master killed her for the protagonist. Alone: ​​You don't need any force, but you need to destroy the sky. Then the demonic path will come up (it is possible for the righteous path to find out that you have been deceived). Do you want to accept it or not? Anyway, I feel that because of the plot between Nangong and Ning, I feel like the protagonists are incompatible no matter where they go. (After reading the summary of the latest chapter, I want to give the author some thoughts after reading it. By the way, for those who like to read the comments before reading it, it should be a harem story. One of them is currently in a relationship, one of them feels that they are definitely in a relationship, and there are only two of them at the moment.)

Looks good, I hope Ning Qingqing is the number one heroine

Very good book

I'll give it four stars first. It's not a cool novel, but in comparison, it has a lot of true feelings. Personally, I think it's good. It doesn't have too many nested slaps in the face, but it actually lives in the present. The overall rhythm is relatively stable, but I feel that the main conflict and contradictory relationship should be the life and experience of the male protagonist, which can be a little clearer.

There will be no paragraphs in the beginning, and there will be no sentence breaks in the back. Anyway, it looks uncomfortable

I want to see Qingqing use her actions to repair Gu Chen's heart again. The author, you are not a good person. I cried when I read the chapter when Qingqing came back to find Gu Chen. This is the first time I cried while reading a novel [crying]

In my opinion, this is a book with a better look and feel, but it has too many settings and is too confusing to remember, and the update speed is a bit slow, but this is a common problem of the author, so this book is very good in my opinion.

It's very, very beautiful, and I feel comfortable reading it. The author just finished writing the first volume today. As for the problem of sentence fragmentation they mentioned, I didn't quite understand it, because the author and I are of the same mind, and I don't know how to sentence sentence fragmentation, but the uncomfortable part was entering the Shang Mansion. The writing was a bit messy, and I couldn't figure out what happened and who was the subordinate of Sister Ling. By the way, what will happen later? The hero is ready to trust no one, yet you let him go up the mountain. Did the master forcefully tie him back? He was so heartbroken after being kidnapped back. Is he willing to have contact with others? Will this create rivalry? According to the normal villain story, he should win the favor of the heroine step by step, then seize his luck, and kill him in one last blow, but the system there now shows that except for the master, the rest of the heroine has a full affection for Ye Feng. As for the male protagonist, in addition to the master's favorability reaching 100, the favorability of the younger junior sister and his fiancée should remain at 50%. Then I want to ask, the props and the like are all given by the system as mentioned before, and there is no talk about the old man in the ring and getting opportunities elsewhere. If you forcefully attack Ye Feng, he will be counterattacked by the law of heaven. I can't take away his luck, and I can't weaken the law of heaven. If I hit him, he will be counterattacked. So what should I do?

The writing is relatively good As for me, I still want the protagonist to become stronger quickly. At least he needs to have some ability to protect himself now.

Not bad. This book is a new one, and the number of words is a bit small, so I can't comment on it in detail. Also, I personally look forward to the author's description of the people and things he experienced before the male protagonist later met him. After all, the explanations in the first few chapters are for this, and this affects the evaluation of the entire novel. (ง •̀_•́)ง

A very good book. But we came here to watch fantasy romance, but I always felt that it was a bit unsatisfactory. What's interesting about the cruel life and death in the world of immortality? ←_← It would be better to focus on the protagonist's master and several junior sisters. In this way, it feels a bit like trying to sell the dog's meat. How to write the introduction, the main text is a bit... I would like to make a suggestion, I hope the author can write better and better (*^ω^*) [Sending my heart] When can the protagonist meet his master and sisters? Stop wandering outside. It's so worrying. There is no benefit in laying too much groundwork in advance, so meet as soon as possible. Don't keep whetting my appetite. Looking forward to the second volume...

The subject matter is good, but in order to depict the handsomeness of the male protagonist, it is too radical to portray the dependence of other female protagonists on the male protagonist. You can also write a few things about your own sect and recall the previous story lines in the sect. The novel is quite interesting.

The style is very novel, the author's writing is very good, and the author will also consider the readers' thoughts as the plot moves. However, the author has too few updates. These are not enough to read. I read it in half a day. I suggest you increase the amount [laughter]

Compositions written by primary school students are still a bit far away from Le Ziwen.

I hope the pace can be faster Stop writing it. I can't understand what you wrote at the end. Just like Daddy, you have let yourself go since you were brought back to the sect by your master, and your writing is messy.

The heroine is Ning Qingqing. [Smile]

Nice looking but a bit complicated and confusing

Come on, author, the overall plot is okay, quite interesting, and the content is quite detailed, but the protagonist is a bit miserable. After a rough look, I feel very good. I will look at it in detail tomorrow, and when will the protagonist be strengthened? Why do I feel so abused all the time? It's too miserable, too miserable. I strongly request that the protagonist be strengthened. I can't wait to see the protagonist's triumph [almost crying] [eating melon]

After reading for a while, the first question, as many netizens in the comment area said, is that punctuation really affects reading. Second, I feel that the author's writing style should be good, but I don't know why reading this book always makes me feel like reading a running account. The characters in it can't feel the human atmosphere, they all feel like machines. But I still want to encourage you. The author's attitude is still very good. Please give me some support. The author really needs to learn how to make the writing more vivid. I think this article is very good, but it feels like a running account and it is really difficult for me to read it.

When will that Ning Qingqing return [almost crying]

Yes, but isn't this yandere a little too much? When else can she abuse someone?

The character setting of the husband-chasing crematorium is novel, but what we want to see is the story between the male protagonist and those former female protagonists. I think the main plot of the male protagonist becoming stronger and the subplot of recalling the past with the female protagonist are better to open at 55 [Blow Kiss]

I feel that my IQ needs to be improved, but it's still okay. If the follow-up writing is not too brainless, it will be a good book. Hope the update will be soon.

I hope this habit of 2~3 updates a day can be maintained. It's very beautiful, but not enough.

Hahaha, this novel is really awesome. Indeed, the author has a good attitude. I kept dancing and laughing while reading it. When the book collapsed, the author also collapsed. He let himself go. I personally found this plot very funny [face covering] [face covering].

My sister-in-law must be suffering a lot, right?

It's okay. The lack of commas in sentences is really misleading [makes a face] What should I say? When you look at the back, it's like you've eaten a piece of cake and chewing gum🥵🥵🥵