Douluo***

How can I put it this way? It's a novice fanfic, and it's very interesting for a newbie. Although I don't know how the author will write in the future, but based on the six or seven years I have been reading novels (multiple novel software), the slow-paced plot in the early stage is foreshadowing. Judging from the plot at this speed, I want to write a long story. I can also roughly deduce the general framework, so I will wait for the follow-up. In addition, one update a day is a bit slow. Although the early stage is more about polishing the plot and portraying the characters, for some novices, this kind of waiting is quite painful. They usually finish the book without adding it to the bookshelf (the number of words is too small now) or add it to the bookshelf to let the books gather dust. For authors who are just starting to write novels, data is really important (it is recommended to add 2+ updates a day if you have time). Secondly, for Tomato, the number of fields is generally relatively short and there are many paragraphs (you can make more paragraphs to make it easier for Tomato readers to accept it. Of course, everyone has their own ideas and styles, so it depends on the individual). Come on, author, starting out is difficult, but you will get better if you get through it! : Five stars - 10 points, the current three-star rating of this book is 5.7 Points (non-professional reviews, that is, amateur reviews, and are for reference only!!)

The protagonist keeps emphasizing that others have character problems! However, the protagonist starts by manipulating ordinary people for his own benefit, regardless of whether there will be problems if the person is exposed to hypnosis. The protagonist's IQ is not online, which makes people feel stupid! Like a fool! Generally speaking, I don't expect the idiot protagonist to have a good character. It may sound harsh to say it, but if you don't want others to think that the protagonist is a fool, you may want to mention the protagonist's IQ. Start by asking questions. The protagonist can't even think? Keep asking!

Not bad, come on, author

Good looking, great score! ! !

Looks good!

It's okay…

It's supposed to be a good watch, but the main character is smoking in front of a 6-year-old face. What's going on?

Looks good, give it a thumbs up

This novel is indeed quite enjoyable

The content is exciting July 29, 2023