The Starting System Is Broken, so I Have to Lead Westbrook to Win the Championship

There is very little money for this kind of writing. The author's passion is equal to the writing style. The writing style is quite soft, and the description of the characters' expressions is okay. If I can get some extra money through recommendations, I'll just update and write normally.

This way of writing the proxy game is really novel and good.

It's rare to find a book that doesn't praise James' stinky feet. Other NBA articles are all about James coming down from heaven. The author of this article describes James by combining reality and adding his own speculation. It's very vivid and cannot be said to be exactly the same. Having said that, many deeds about James are written down one by one in words. Why do some people say that the author is James Hei? Oh, I understand. If I don't praise you, James will be James Black [laughing]

Update started again? This is the first time I have seen the way the business league NBA is written. It is very well written and reflects the smoothness and ruthlessness of the businessman LBJ very well. Also, it downplays the protagonist's side story and concentrates on basketball. Most people come to watch basketball. Do you know why your grades were not good before? You wrote too slowly. Maybe you have your own plans and want to write more detailed, rounder, and longer. But if you plan like this, you have to accept the disadvantages of slow writing. If you write faster, you will read a faster book. No one cares about your writing speed. If you write slower, it will require more time to accumulate the book.

Is that okay? So short Can the author write less emotional drama and more about Westbrook😀

I finished reading this book in three days. Unfortunately, it is too short. The difficulty of this type of subject lies in the fact that it is too long, the protagonist's growth curve is too slow, and it is difficult to bring excitement to readers. The content in the competition is too monotonous, and there are not many plots outside the competition. Due to various restrictions, the audience does not have time to follow the protagonist through a long period of growth, resulting in low popularity. But there are many good things in this book, whether it is the detailed description off the scene, or the author's thoughts can be seen in the transition, detailed description, and writing style. I hope to see such good writing on this subject again.

It is a non-mainstream NBA article, but it is better than most mainstream NBA articles. It has stories and plots. It's not written like a running account. Unfortunately, the number of words is too few, so I can only write one first.

There is not a lot written about basketball, it feels more about things outside the game, but the writing style is indeed delicate, this kind of narrative method is rare, and the language is very humorous, and it is not very difficult to read. I finished reading it in one day, and I can only say that the author will update quickly [angry] [angry] [angry]

It's good-looking, the description of James is very realistic, and it makes up for my regrets about Westbrook.

I have read too many basketball novels about players, coaches, general managers, and owners, and it was the first time I saw a trainer. It's obvious that the author knows his stuff.

I really like Westbrook, and I hope the author can stick with it. How many words does the author plan to write? [I understand] [I understand] How many chapters do you plan to write?

Not bad, very good, hope more The ending is so sloppy [laughs awkwardly] [what] [petrified]

I like this type of book very much, and I also like Westbrook very much. All I can say is, keep going.

The author made a good choice in choosing Westbrook as the male protagonist. I said a long time ago that Westbrook's character is very similar to Gai's brother Brigitte. He is a very nice person, very loyal, and very popular. Bridget is almost the team favorite in Brother Overcoming Troubles.

Trade now, really

Zan black will only lower the rating here.

The subject matter is very novel and the writing is fairly fluent. If you like sports writing, you can give it a try. The only problem is that the pace is too slow. It takes almost 400,000 words to complete the transaction. So far, it seems that it is still laying the groundwork. Those who like refreshing writing may feel aggrieved.

It's very beautiful and gives you a sense of immersion.

Come on, come on, work hard

Looks good, I hope it doesn't end badly

One of the best novels I have ever read. Among basketball novels, I think he is number one in my mind. I started to like Westbrook when he was in the Lakers. Although I have not witnessed his peak, I really like him. This novel makes up for the regret in my heart. In the end, it is still the sentence Why not?

I have finished reading it. I have been following up on it since then and it has finally come to an end. I stopped writing for a long time and it made me feel like I was going to be a eunuch. I wrote in a hurry later on, but compared to other basketball novels that speed up the pace, there are still a lot more details. The following words to the author are: I think you have the ability to write a good book that captivates people's hearts. Please write more slowly, and I will also say this when I stop writing in the future [facepalm]

I think this low score may have been given by Jamie.

It's really good. I hope the author doesn't mess up the story.

Very well written, keep it up

Good! ! ! Not watery, but level!

Character descriptions are okay.

It looks good, and the subject matter is good.

I like Westbrook too

The characters are well described, but the pacing is a bit slow.