My Sister Is a Thief

First of all, I want to express my apologies. I just read the first five chapters and came here to comment (but I will finish them later). I have seen similar themes of exchanges between excellent sisters and mediocre sisters in other novels before, and the endings are quite heartwarming, just the empathy between sisters. I only read the first five chapters. Judging from the beginning of the online article, it is not very successful. I think the main problem lies in the narrative method of the novel, which lacks a sense of substitution and rhythm, and cannot cause ripples in the hearts of online readers. To be more serious, I feel that the first few chapters of "My Sister is a Thief" are like reading the introduction, which means that the story is narrated from a God's perspective that is higher than the third person. Why do you say that? Because "God" always views facts with the equal attitude of all living beings, it is difficult to deliberately show any emotions. For example, there is a scene in the novel where "Linlin" and her sister "Qiqi" swap bodies and feel guilty and self-blame. From the reader's perspective, it will be like someone telling you that Zhang San did something wrong and then he blamed himself. The result of this is that because I am not an insider, I cannot empathize with him. At most, it will arouse some sympathy but not a strong sense of empathy. This is why some readers feel that this novel is a bit dull to read. Here is my personal suggestion. Generally speaking, the way to enhance the sense of substitution is to describe the details, through environmental rendering, psychological description of the protagonist, side effects of dialogue between characters, etc. For example, in the scene where "Linlin" carries out the body-swapping conspiracy, the author can write, "In the dead night when everyone was asleep, the crows were cackling abnormally. However, Linlin, who was concentrating, could only hear the ticking of the clock. Regardless of the self-blame and guilt, she put the fear behind her, as if she was bound to win! She held the increasingly wet little baby in her hand. The knife trembled and cut my sister's finger, and I put it in the bowl and polished it again and again with the red stone. Finally, I drank the red sinful thing for myself and my sister. The bowl broke, "I'm sorry... Sister... Sorry... Sister...". I ended the night with a cry, "Will I be able to live a new life tomorrow?" " I won't talk about the appreciation here😅, because maybe my skills are not very good. However, this plot is also the part where I want to complain the most about the character creation that is problematic and too unreal. Even the title of the book "Sister is a Thief" describes the sister as too bad and the sister as too holy. Two months before the Chinese New Year, I already knew how to exchange my life. I wanted to get rid of a life full of scars. After learning this method, it was hard to understand at first. But after two months of calmness, I still look forward to being happy every day. I don't feel any guilt. I was even excited when I cut my sister's blood. I even had the mood to leave something for my sister. A letter told her that we had swapped bodies... Well... Just... I felt... Too bad, and so did my sister. She described it angrily, and even signed an agreement between Party A and Party B with her to help her live a happy life. Alas, when I read this paragraph, I felt an indescribable discomfort in my heart. Maybe I also empathized in some ways. This can no longer be described as a thief, just like, whoever you have seen stealing world-class treasures is called a thief. What I suggest is that even if the sisters accidentally exchanged bodies, and then the younger sister struggled psychologically and was unwilling to return the body, it would not be an exaggeration to call her a thief. Well... That's all I have to say after reading the first few chapters. I hope the author can write better and better.

Qiqi and Linlin are jealous and guilty, different people have different souls, they are redemption and forgiveness. This book does not have the violence of online articles, and it is very healing and purifying for your soul. The love of young people is pure and sincere. This book does not distinguish between protagonists and supporting characters. They all lived out their own lives, encountered their own salvation, and found their own light.

Regarding the matter of sisters swapping bodies, I have quite a lot of emotions: I lamented the calmness shown by my elder sister after exchanging bodies with my younger sister; I lamented that she could accept the reality calmly; I lamented that she did not turn against her sister because of this, but encouraged her to make progress together; although my younger sister was very naughty earlier, she corrected her mistakes. The ending is very, very happy, and it really has the most HE among the novels I have ever read.

When I first started reading it, I felt it was dull at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I got more stamina. It's not much length, it's a short story, and it's pretty good. I finished it quickly. It mainly tells the story of a pair of twin sisters. The younger sister was abused by her patriarchal grandparents and bullied by gangsters in her hometown. The younger sister was very miserable in the end. My sister was taken into care by her grandparents. She is beautiful, has excellent grades, and has a lovable personality. After my sister came back, she was jealous of her sister and took away her body... I haven't finished reading it yet, so keep reading. The writing is quite realistic and interesting.

The article is overall positive, but I feel that the core is not rich enough. After reading the article, I felt it was a bit bland and boring. The core of what I see so far is that friends help each other to fight setbacks and redeem each other. I think the emotions of the characters need to be improved, and I think the emotions in some places are a bit strange. (You don't need to read this, I can't tell clearly) In terms of characters, the characters are average. From a type perspective, there are not many facial-shaped characters, and there are no very innovative characters. But these characters are not deep in my heart (maybe because the plot is too bland, or maybe because everyone's plot is very similar) Let me explain separately the reason why everyone's plot is similar, or it is because the core is relatively single. Although everyone has different experiences, they all develop in the same direction. However, the article is quite warm overall (I am not very good at commenting. I feel that some parts are unclear and my thinking is not clear. The author will make do with it and hope it will be helpful to you)

How to say it? The subject matter feels very new. My sister is very good, and my sister is getting better later on. Environment changes people. Their endings are also very, very good. I like it very much, I just feel like there are no emotional twists and turns. Some people may not want to pray for blessings. It's very boring. There is something wrong with the input method here, so there will be more data in it. Typos or, uh, inappropriate words. Please understand that I have not skipped a single page of this book. Very nice. 👍👍👍

Hahaha, I didn't finish it but it was well written. Chapter 9: The younger sister wants the boy to keep a secret, but the younger sister's psychological description, why do you think that if the boy likes her, you have to keep a secret for her, and the boy just likes the appearance and excellence of the older sister. And about Sanmaozi, why is the first thing that comes to my mind is that the younger sister doesn't love herself? I remember my sister was less than 10 years old when she experienced that incident (I think)

The story concept is very strange, but the writing is a bit like a diary, which is of course very good. Many of us can only speak but cannot write. The author is better than most people if he can write out the complete concept. Come on and write more good stories!

This is the first time I read a book of this type. I hope the author will continue to work hard 👍

The first one, a new book, please bear with me. 😘 Song Siyuan is a Scorpio♏. Can you guess the zodiac signs of other people? 😘