Twin sisters. The elder sister is beautiful and excellent, the pride of the whole family, while the younger sister is ugly and unmotivated.
10 Years ago.
City B is located in a second-tier city. An ordinary working-class family welcomed identical twins. The family celebrated happily. The two sisters were identical and very cute.
When the child was three years old, his father, a teacher, was harassed by debt collectors every day because he helped guarantee online credit for a friend. His friend escaped, and debt collectors came to harass him every day. His mother, a nurse, had no choice but to quit her job and start a clothing business. The family cannot take care of two children at one time.
My younger sister is young, and every time someone comes to collect debts, my younger sister will be frightened and cry, but my older sister is calmer.
After deciding, I sent my sister to my hometown to be cared for by relatives and friends. My sister stayed with me.
This decision directly determined the fate of the two sisters.
After several years of hiding here and there, and my mother's clothing business was doing well, I was able to pay off the money. Moreover, the family saved a lot of money and lived in a big house in a first-tier city in City A. My sister got excellent grades and was admitted to the best high school in the city.
My sister was in the countryside, unsupervised, hanging out with gangsters, and contracted a lot of bad habits.
After being taken home, due to the attitude of her family and jealousy of her sister.
Obsessed with obsession, he accidentally obtained a method of body swapping from an old beggar, and cast a spell to allow the two sisters to swap bodies.
From here the story begins.
Reader comments
First of all, I want to express my apologies. I just read the first five chapters and came here to comment (but I will finish them later). I have seen similar themes of exchanges between excellent sisters and mediocre sisters in other novels before, and the endings are quite heartwarming, just the empathy between sisters. I only read the first five chapters. Judging from the beginning of the online article, it is not very successful. I think the main problem lies in the narrative method of the novel, which lacks a sense of substitution and rhythm, and cannot cause ripples in the hearts of online readers. To be more serious, I feel that the first few chapters of "My Sister is a Thief" are like reading the introduction, which means that the story is narrated from a God's perspective that is higher than the third person. Why do you say that? Because "God" always views facts with the equal attitude of all living beings, it is difficult to deliberately show any emotions. For example, there is a scene in the novel where "Linlin" and her sister "Qiqi" swap bodies and feel guilty and self-blame. From the reader's perspective, it will be like someone telling you that Zhang San did something wrong and then he blamed himself. The result of this is that because I am not an insider, I cannot empathize with him. At most, it will arouse some sympathy but not a strong sense of empathy. This is why some readers feel that this novel is a bit dull to read.
Here is my personal suggestion. Generally speaking, the way to enhance the sense of substitution is to describe the details, through environmental rendering, psychological description of the protagonist, side effects of dialogue between characters, etc. For example, in the scene where "Linlin" carries out the body-swapping conspiracy, the author can write, "In the dead night when everyone was asleep, the crows were cackling abnormally. However, Linlin, who was concentrating, could only hear the ticking of the clock. Regardless of the self-blame and guilt, she put the fear behind her, as if she was bound to win! She held the increasingly wet little baby in her hand. The knife trembled and cut my sister's finger, and I put it in the bowl and polished it again and again with the red stone. Finally, I drank the red sinful thing for myself and my sister. The bowl broke, "I'm sorry... Sister... Sorry... Sister...". I ended the night with a cry, "Will I be able to live a new life tomorrow?" "
I won't talk about the appreciation here😅, because maybe my skills are not very good. However, this plot is also the part where I want to complain the most about the character creation that is problematic and too unreal. Even the title of the book "Sister is a Thief" describes the sister as too bad and the sister as too holy. Two months before the Chinese New Year, I already knew how to exchange my life. I wanted to get rid of a life full of scars. After learning this method, it was hard to understand at first. But after two months of calmness, I still look forward to being happy every day. I don't feel any guilt. I was even excited when I cut my sister's blood. I even had the mood to leave something for my sister. A letter told her that we had swapped bodies... Well... Just... I felt... Too bad, and so did my sister. She described it angrily, and even signed an agreement between Party A and Party B with her to help her live a happy life. Alas, when I read this paragraph, I felt an indescribable discomfort in my heart. Maybe I also empathized in some ways. This can no longer be described as a thief, just like, whoever you have seen stealing world-class treasures is called a thief.
What I suggest is that even if the sisters accidentally exchanged bodies, and then the younger sister struggled psychologically and was unwilling to return the body, it would not be an exaggeration to call her a thief.
Well... That's all I have to say after reading the first few chapters. I hope the author can write better and better.
Qiqi and Linlin are jealous and guilty, different people have different souls, they are redemption and forgiveness. This book does not have the violence of online articles, and it is very healing and purifying for your soul. The love of young people is pure and sincere. This book does not distinguish between protagonists and supporting characters. They all lived out their own lives, encountered their own salvation, and found their own light.
When I first started reading it, I felt it was dull at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I got more stamina. It's not much length, it's a short story, and it's pretty good. I finished it quickly.
It mainly tells the story of a pair of twin sisters. The younger sister was abused by her patriarchal grandparents and bullied by gangsters in her hometown. The younger sister was very miserable in the end.
My sister was taken into care by her grandparents. She is beautiful, has excellent grades, and has a lovable personality.
After my sister came back, she was jealous of her sister and took away her body...
I haven't finished reading it yet, so keep reading.
The writing is quite realistic and interesting.
Regarding the matter of sisters swapping bodies, I have quite a lot of emotions: I lamented the calmness shown by my elder sister after exchanging bodies with my younger sister; I lamented that she could accept the reality calmly; I lamented that she did not turn against her sister because of this, but encouraged her to make progress together; although my younger sister was very naughty earlier, she corrected her mistakes. The ending is very, very happy, and it really has the most HE among the novels I have ever read.
How to say it? The subject matter feels very new. My sister is very good, and my sister is getting better later on. Environment changes people. Their endings are also very, very good. I like it very much, I just feel like there are no emotional twists and turns. Some people may not want to pray for blessings. It's very boring. There is something wrong with the input method here, so there will be more data in it. Typos or, uh, inappropriate words. Please understand that I have not skipped a single page of this book. Very nice. [Like][Like][Like]
The article is overall positive, but I feel that the core is not rich enough. After reading the article, I felt it was a bit bland and boring. The core of what I see so far is that friends help each other to fight setbacks and redeem each other.
I think the emotions of the characters need to be improved, and I think the emotions in some places are a bit strange. (You don't need to read this, I can't tell clearly)
In terms of characters, the characters are average. From a type perspective, there are not many facial-shaped characters, and there are no very innovative characters. But these characters are not deep in my heart (maybe because the plot is too bland, or maybe because everyone's plot is very similar)
Let me explain separately the reason why everyone's plot is similar, or it is because the core is relatively single. Although everyone has different experiences, they all develop in the same direction.
However, the article is quite warm overall (I am not very good at commenting. I feel that some parts are unclear and my thinking is not clear. The author will make do with it and hope it will be helpful to you)
Hahaha, I didn't finish it but it was well written. Chapter 9: The younger sister wants the boy to keep a secret, but the younger sister's psychological description, why do you think that if the boy likes her, you have to keep a secret for her, and the boy just likes the appearance and excellence of the older sister. And about Sanmaozi, why is the first thing that comes to my mind is that the younger sister doesn't love herself? I remember my sister was less than 10 years old when she experienced that incident (I think)
The first one, a new book, please bear with me. [Blowing kiss]
Song Siyuan is a Scorpio♏. Can you guess the zodiac signs of other people? [Blowing kiss]
This is the first time I read a book of this type. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like]
The story concept is very strange, but the writing is a bit like a diary, which is of course very good. Many of us can only speak but cannot write. The author is better than most people if he can write out the complete concept. Come on and write more good stories!
It's okay. There was no female rivalry between twins. Both the older sister and younger sister had an unforgettable period. Later, they also studied hard together. Not only did the younger sister have no one to teach her, but she was often abused by the elders in the family. It is understandable to have such emotions. Fortunately, she stopped at the cliff and studied hard.
I originally thought that the ending of the story was that all this was imagined by my sister who suffered from depression, but I guessed it wrong [laughing and crying] reading various novels opened my mind a bit.
[Crying][Crazy] Author, do you know? When I found out that you were the only one to rate this book, I was very excited because I wanted to be the first reader to rate this book. I spent nearly two hours writing a book review (mainly because I typed very slowly), because I could feel that there were some shortcomings in this book, but I couldn't put it into words. I wrote a lot (not too many), revised and added, and finally found out that I seemed to have made a mistake in my review, and ended up deleting them all. I was really [angry] [crazy] [crying]
Oh, by the way, the author suggests that you change the title and cover of the book. Of course, it's just a suggestion.
Appearances don't matter, what's on the inside is the true king. Rebirth, ah, replacement, ah, are not scary. You are the most perfect and beautiful when you are constantly striving for self-improvement.
It's very interesting and well written in every aspect. It's my cup of tea.
I have read too many top-notch articles, and I like to read this kind of non-top-grade ones.
It was the first time I read a novel of this type, and I thought I wouldn't be used to it, but I didn't expect that I finished the whole novel after just reading it. This novel is quite good [heartfelt]
All the suffering is concentrated in a group of people, which is both realistic and absurd.
Is the best outcome for everyone to get married?
Work hard on the next novel
My family, let's just say it's a bit sad at the front, but it's nice at the back.
Ordinary life, positive and inspiring character, content that is in line with the times, no thrills, no ups and downs, just a youth story about a group of teenagers and girls helping each other, come on.
A very nice book
This book is quite short, but it does not prevent it from being readable.
It's pretty good. I read it in one sitting. I thought there would be some kind of revenge, but I didn't expect it to be a happy and perfect ending [laughing and crying]
This is the first time I have seen this type of book! Fine! !
It's so good, I stayed up late to watch it, it's worth it
The subject matter is novel.
Come on.
Born a devil is so scary
It's a very interesting novel. The plot is not protracted, there are not so many unnecessary descriptions, the pace is fast, you can simply enjoy the plot, but it is too short, hahaha
First of all, I want to express my apologies. I just read the first five chapters and came here to comment (but I will finish them later). I have seen similar themes of exchanges between excellent sisters and mediocre sisters in other novels before, and the endings are quite heartwarming, just the empathy between sisters. I only read the first five chapters. Judging from the beginning of the online article, it is not very successful. I think the main problem lies in the narrative method of the novel, which lacks a sense of substitution and rhythm, and cannot cause ripples in the hearts of online readers. To be more serious, I feel that the first few chapters of "My Sister is a Thief" are like reading the introduction, which means that the story is narrated from a God's perspective that is higher than the third person. Why do you say that? Because "God" always views facts with the equal attitude of all living beings, it is difficult to deliberately show any emotions. For example, there is a scene in the novel where "Linlin" and her sister "Qiqi" swap bodies and feel guilty and self-blame. From the reader's perspective, it will be like someone telling you that Zhang San did something wrong and then he blamed himself. The result of this is that because I am not an insider, I cannot empathize with him. At most, it will arouse some sympathy but not a strong sense of empathy. This is why some readers feel that this novel is a bit dull to read. Here is my personal suggestion. Generally speaking, the way to enhance the sense of substitution is to describe the details, through environmental rendering, psychological description of the protagonist, side effects of dialogue between characters, etc. For example, in the scene where "Linlin" carries out the body-swapping conspiracy, the author can write, "In the dead night when everyone was asleep, the crows were cackling abnormally. However, Linlin, who was concentrating, could only hear the ticking of the clock. Regardless of the self-blame and guilt, she put the fear behind her, as if she was bound to win! She held the increasingly wet little baby in her hand. The knife trembled and cut my sister's finger, and I put it in the bowl and polished it again and again with the red stone. Finally, I drank the red sinful thing for myself and my sister. The bowl broke, "I'm sorry... Sister... Sorry... Sister...". I ended the night with a cry, "Will I be able to live a new life tomorrow?" " I won't talk about the appreciation here😅, because maybe my skills are not very good. However, this plot is also the part where I want to complain the most about the character creation that is problematic and too unreal. Even the title of the book "Sister is a Thief" describes the sister as too bad and the sister as too holy. Two months before the Chinese New Year, I already knew how to exchange my life. I wanted to get rid of a life full of scars. After learning this method, it was hard to understand at first. But after two months of calmness, I still look forward to being happy every day. I don't feel any guilt. I was even excited when I cut my sister's blood. I even had the mood to leave something for my sister. A letter told her that we had swapped bodies... Well... Just... I felt... Too bad, and so did my sister. She described it angrily, and even signed an agreement between Party A and Party B with her to help her live a happy life. Alas, when I read this paragraph, I felt an indescribable discomfort in my heart. Maybe I also empathized in some ways. This can no longer be described as a thief, just like, whoever you have seen stealing world-class treasures is called a thief. What I suggest is that even if the sisters accidentally exchanged bodies, and then the younger sister struggled psychologically and was unwilling to return the body, it would not be an exaggeration to call her a thief. Well... That's all I have to say after reading the first few chapters. I hope the author can write better and better.
Qiqi and Linlin are jealous and guilty, different people have different souls, they are redemption and forgiveness. This book does not have the violence of online articles, and it is very healing and purifying for your soul. The love of young people is pure and sincere. This book does not distinguish between protagonists and supporting characters. They all lived out their own lives, encountered their own salvation, and found their own light.
When I first started reading it, I felt it was dull at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I got more stamina. It's not much length, it's a short story, and it's pretty good. I finished it quickly. It mainly tells the story of a pair of twin sisters. The younger sister was abused by her patriarchal grandparents and bullied by gangsters in her hometown. The younger sister was very miserable in the end. My sister was taken into care by her grandparents. She is beautiful, has excellent grades, and has a lovable personality. After my sister came back, she was jealous of her sister and took away her body... I haven't finished reading it yet, so keep reading. The writing is quite realistic and interesting.
Regarding the matter of sisters swapping bodies, I have quite a lot of emotions: I lamented the calmness shown by my elder sister after exchanging bodies with my younger sister; I lamented that she could accept the reality calmly; I lamented that she did not turn against her sister because of this, but encouraged her to make progress together; although my younger sister was very naughty earlier, she corrected her mistakes. The ending is very, very happy, and it really has the most HE among the novels I have ever read.
How to say it? The subject matter feels very new. My sister is very good, and my sister is getting better later on. Environment changes people. Their endings are also very, very good. I like it very much, I just feel like there are no emotional twists and turns. Some people may not want to pray for blessings. It's very boring. There is something wrong with the input method here, so there will be more data in it. Typos or, uh, inappropriate words. Please understand that I have not skipped a single page of this book. Very nice. [Like][Like][Like]
The article is overall positive, but I feel that the core is not rich enough. After reading the article, I felt it was a bit bland and boring. The core of what I see so far is that friends help each other to fight setbacks and redeem each other. I think the emotions of the characters need to be improved, and I think the emotions in some places are a bit strange. (You don't need to read this, I can't tell clearly) In terms of characters, the characters are average. From a type perspective, there are not many facial-shaped characters, and there are no very innovative characters. But these characters are not deep in my heart (maybe because the plot is too bland, or maybe because everyone's plot is very similar) Let me explain separately the reason why everyone's plot is similar, or it is because the core is relatively single. Although everyone has different experiences, they all develop in the same direction. However, the article is quite warm overall (I am not very good at commenting. I feel that some parts are unclear and my thinking is not clear. The author will make do with it and hope it will be helpful to you)
Hahaha, I didn't finish it but it was well written. Chapter 9: The younger sister wants the boy to keep a secret, but the younger sister's psychological description, why do you think that if the boy likes her, you have to keep a secret for her, and the boy just likes the appearance and excellence of the older sister. And about Sanmaozi, why is the first thing that comes to my mind is that the younger sister doesn't love herself? I remember my sister was less than 10 years old when she experienced that incident (I think)
The first one, a new book, please bear with me. [Blowing kiss] Song Siyuan is a Scorpio♏. Can you guess the zodiac signs of other people? [Blowing kiss]
This is the first time I read a book of this type. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like]
The story concept is very strange, but the writing is a bit like a diary, which is of course very good. Many of us can only speak but cannot write. The author is better than most people if he can write out the complete concept. Come on and write more good stories!
It's okay. There was no female rivalry between twins. Both the older sister and younger sister had an unforgettable period. Later, they also studied hard together. Not only did the younger sister have no one to teach her, but she was often abused by the elders in the family. It is understandable to have such emotions. Fortunately, she stopped at the cliff and studied hard.
I originally thought that the ending of the story was that all this was imagined by my sister who suffered from depression, but I guessed it wrong [laughing and crying] reading various novels opened my mind a bit.
[Crying][Crazy] Author, do you know? When I found out that you were the only one to rate this book, I was very excited because I wanted to be the first reader to rate this book. I spent nearly two hours writing a book review (mainly because I typed very slowly), because I could feel that there were some shortcomings in this book, but I couldn't put it into words. I wrote a lot (not too many), revised and added, and finally found out that I seemed to have made a mistake in my review, and ended up deleting them all. I was really [angry] [crazy] [crying] Oh, by the way, the author suggests that you change the title and cover of the book. Of course, it's just a suggestion.
Appearances don't matter, what's on the inside is the true king. Rebirth, ah, replacement, ah, are not scary. You are the most perfect and beautiful when you are constantly striving for self-improvement.
It's very interesting and well written in every aspect. It's my cup of tea. I have read too many top-notch articles, and I like to read this kind of non-top-grade ones.
It was the first time I read a novel of this type, and I thought I wouldn't be used to it, but I didn't expect that I finished the whole novel after just reading it. This novel is quite good [heartfelt]
All the suffering is concentrated in a group of people, which is both realistic and absurd.
Is the best outcome for everyone to get married?
Work hard on the next novel
My family, let's just say it's a bit sad at the front, but it's nice at the back.
Ordinary life, positive and inspiring character, content that is in line with the times, no thrills, no ups and downs, just a youth story about a group of teenagers and girls helping each other, come on.
A very nice book
This book is quite short, but it does not prevent it from being readable.
It's pretty good. I read it in one sitting. I thought there would be some kind of revenge, but I didn't expect it to be a happy and perfect ending [laughing and crying]
This is the first time I have seen this type of book! Fine! !
It's so good, I stayed up late to watch it, it's worth it
The subject matter is novel. Come on.
Born a devil is so scary
It's a very interesting novel. The plot is not protracted, there are not so many unnecessary descriptions, the pace is fast, you can simply enjoy the plot, but it is too short, hahaha