Cultivating Immortality: I Have the Power to Refine Things

Although the plot is not new, it does not have too many poisonous points. Sure enough, I still like this kind of traditional fantasy compared to systematic writing [I learned it], but the author should pay attention to sentence fragmentation and some typos 🤦 Also, I think the description of the battle scenes needs to be improved, it feels rather bland and not very graphic. The character of the protagonist is the one I like. Come on, author!

Be the first to comment and take up a floor. Although there are female characters, they are not involved, which is very good. The protagonist has a good personality, but can there be more? It is not interesting enough.

It's ok, come on, author

The novel is very spiritual. I like exciting novels very much.

You can see it, I can listen. Listening to books is generally not as careful as reading. Just take a rough look. No poison was found. . . . Slipping away. I originally thought it was average, but just to kill time, it ended up being updated frequently.