[Male channel + No female protagonist + Kendo] After Lin Tian lost his parents, he lived alone. When he was picking wild fruits in the mountains, he was accidentally struck by a colorful lightning. From then on, he discovered that he could purify substances. Relying on this ability, he slowly rose in the world of immortality.
Reader comments
Although the plot is not new, it does not have too many poisonous points. Sure enough, I still like this kind of traditional fantasy compared to systematic writing [I learned it], but the author should pay attention to sentence fragmentation and some typos [face covering]
Also, I think the description of the battle scenes needs to be improved, it feels rather bland and not very graphic. The character of the protagonist is the one I like. Come on, author!
Be the first to comment and take up a floor. Although there are female characters, they are not involved, which is very good. The protagonist has a good personality, but can there be more? It is not interesting enough.
It's ok, come on, author
The novel is very spiritual. I like exciting novels very much.
You can see it, I can listen. Listening to books is generally not as careful as reading. Just take a rough look. No poison was found.
. . . Slipping away. I originally thought it was average, but just to kill time, it ended up being updated frequently.
Although the plot is not new, it does not have too many poisonous points. Sure enough, I still like this kind of traditional fantasy compared to systematic writing [I learned it], but the author should pay attention to sentence fragmentation and some typos [face covering] Also, I think the description of the battle scenes needs to be improved, it feels rather bland and not very graphic. The character of the protagonist is the one I like. Come on, author!
Be the first to comment and take up a floor. Although there are female characters, they are not involved, which is very good. The protagonist has a good personality, but can there be more? It is not interesting enough.
It's ok, come on, author
The novel is very spiritual. I like exciting novels very much.
You can see it, I can listen. Listening to books is generally not as careful as reading. Just take a rough look. No poison was found. . . . Slipping away. I originally thought it was average, but just to kill time, it ended up being updated frequently.