The Contract with Thunder General at the Beginning Was a Direct Win.

Dear friends, this book is really good. The male protagonist is very likable and the plot is also very good. Although it is a system text, it does not lose three pages after changing a value like other books. The most important thing is that there is no turn-based intervention in the battle, such as the kind of plot where xxx quickly avoids, xxx uses... And so on. One sentence I like very much is, General Raiden needs you to tell her how to fight? Although it is related to Genshin Impact, it is indeed a beast-control text, which is very good. Come on, the author. Recommended rating 9.2

Okay, okay, the silly and cute pictures are very popular with slave girls like me [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The book is okay, but the author obviously didn't control the positioning of the male protagonist's emotional line well. It can be seen that he wanted to imitate Dali's writing method of having many female characters but only getting along with each other for a period of time. However, the single female protagonist mentioned in the introduction, if this single female protagonist is Su Ziwu, her role is a bit too small, and the perception is not as good as that of the princess, but Su Ziwu obviously has feelings for the male protagonist, and she has helped many netizens who are still together to accompany her. If she cannot be the heroine, the evaluation of this book will be greatly reduced. Now you can either follow the trend and change the introduction to open the harem, which is a way of writing, or write Su Ziwu's scenes well and let her appear more. Although Dali has more female characters, the scenes of his two female protagonists are really nothing to say. Su Ziwu is also easy to write. Turn over the card of netizens. After all, it is to accompany the male protagonist when he is the most cowardly and helpless. If he writes well, he will definitely be a king. I look forward to you and come on.

It's so good to watch. I wonder if this is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists.

It's quite good, a brainless and enjoyable article, but it's too short. I finished reading it in just a short time after I added it to the bookshelf. Please keep up the good work, author! ! [Sinister smile]

It's pretty, but it's too short [angry]. I hope there will be dozens of updates a day [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The style is quite suitable. The contract in the back is still from Genshin Impact. Please give me some proper villain plot.

It's good to read, but the author is so short. It took me more than 370 minutes to read more than 180 chapters. I still have time, so I can only read other novels [I'm almost crying] The author will update soon.

It's not bad, but it was a bit unbearable when there were more than 150 pictures, and then it started to be interesting again after 170 chapters. The male protagonist is also very good and he loves movies! ! Come on, author, try to read as many books as possible, because I have already read 4 books and they are still being updated. If there are not more books, then I really have no more books to read [crying]. I hope the author can help me a lot!

This book simply touched my heart. It is very enjoyable to read. The only drawback is that the development of the protagonist is too slow. With 700 chapters, the protagonist is just platinum. If I were to rate it, a minimum of 4.5 Stars is about 5 stars.

It's quite in line with my taste, but can it be a little faster? The main character is not strong enough. I can't wait to see Ah Ying in a larger size (*^ω^*)

I just got into the game a few days ago and I just finished reading it. I feel that the characters are quite realistic. The protagonist is just an ordinary person who grew up normally. Those backgrounds and life experiences did not help him in his growth path. People who grew up like this will have the shadow of common people in their bodies, so whether he is greedy for money or likes to take advantage of small things, it is normal. If he has just awakened and has no shortcomings like a saint, it would be too fake. (Purely personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) (My parents are alive and in good health)

I like it, the writing is good, it can be five stars, the characters are also well drawn, in short, two words, rare After raising it for half a year, who can tell me who the protagonist is contracted to now?

It's really wonderful. It's a cool article, and it's so funny that it makes me feel very happy.

There are more than 900 chapters, which is enough to read in a while, and it is very interesting. And the protagonist is not invincible. The plot is also very good. Five-star praise like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Big cheers for the author! ! Looking forward to the next plot

It's very interesting. The protagonist is really a thug and loves small money. He has a gold-eating beast system and is not invincible. The character's combat power is not broken. As for why Thunder Tyrannosaurus is so strong, the author also told us through the words of the character. But many people don't understand the meaning. There will be further explanations in the next few hundred chapters. I suggest you read them all before making any comments.

It's useless to say more (my big account @ Grass Demon God Nasida, trumpet account @ [Cake Demon God] Funina and trumpet account @ Eternal Demon God Shadow add up to 10000+ reading time) Advantages: Interesting, the protagonist is invincible/semi-invincible, there is usually only one after every 30+ in the check panel Disadvantages: There are many small poisonous points (such as: swallowing settings, a few parts are brainless) and few poisonous points (such as: who is the heroine, the protagonist's parents) and two major poisonous points: 1. The protagonist almost kills himself in order to look cool! ! ! 2. The protagonist only thinks about how generous the reward is and almost commits suicide! ! ! Summary: It's very toxic, but it looked good 1000+ years ago. I have seen 1500+ so far. There are big nodes and big poisons between 1000+ and 1300+. Worth a look Add one Protagonist's parents: pure poison after going to gifted class (before Chapter 1111)

Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, I go, what a good book [crying] [crying] [crying] It's been a long time since I've read a book that's so interesting to me. I finished more than 900 chapters in 1.5 Days [crying] [crying] [crying] Why is it gone? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

First of all, let's not decompress. I have read hundreds of chapters. The poisonous point is obvious. For example, you can go to Tsinghua University and score 700 points easily without thinking. Then someone arranges for you to take a test paper that is ten times more difficult. You rack your brains and scratch your scalp before you get a score of 700 and be placed in a class with others. Secondly, the protagonist basically relies on his personal ability, that is, the system, to achieve his current abilities. If you have to arrange a parental background for the protagonist later, it is too abstract. It is better not to add it. If you have to delve into the forces behind the protagonist, you can arrange other background totems. If there is no nondescript help, you will have to brag about it later? Very strange, okay? The final summary is that it is readable but not beautiful. It can be read if the book is short, but there is a very important point. It is very close to the protagonist. (I have read a book before that has dozens of chapters devoted to other supporting characters. Every now and then, it is said that other characters also need to be extended, so I won't complain.) This is a very good point. The priorities are very clear. Come on, author. Ps: I feel like I have a heart attack [laughs awkwardly]

The descriptions, plots, etc. Of this book are very good, and the subject matter is also quite novel. I feel comfortable reading it, but there is a small flaw. I haven't read much, and I haven't seen the back yet. The previous plots are too seriously stitched together. Chen Pi, Dali, and Da Wang have to forgive me. I feel that there are not many original ones. I will wait and see, hoping that there will be more original plots in the back. The reason for missing one star is because there are too many stitches. To be honest, it is not polite to copy other people's settings without authorization. Moreover, a good author should write more original works. This will not only improve his own level, but also make readers happier. If they are all borrowing settings from other books, etc., Then why don't I read the original book? A little suggestion, this book is generally very good to read, I hope the author can read it, thank you. I'm also looking at the back of the book. There are indeed many original plots in the back. The front can be understood as appropriately borrowing part of the world view. After all, it is free and the author is doing it for love. I can't demand that it be completely original. As long as the plot is innovative and exciting, it is a very good book. It's good to read it. I don't want a bicycle. Apologies for the previous four stars, five stars added.

Nbnb is the most enjoyable beast-control novel I have ever read in my life. The content is very exciting. Every time it is updated, I can't wait to open the novel. I can't read it at all. It's so addictive. I read it for four or five hours, but the plot progress is a bit slow. I hope the author can update more, 20 chapters a day is not too much [laughing]

How can I put it, reading this book is really addictive, and many of the plots are very enjoyable to watch. Although there are some places that seem a bit brainless, reading a pleasant article means reading without brains. Besides, the plots in many places are not brainless. For example, the method of breaking through to the emperor level that I saw in the latest chapter, the plot is very good. Unknowingly, I read the latest chapter. I felt that the content of one chapter was a bit small at that time. Later, I read it and found that it was not too small. The main reason is that the plot is very good. I became addicted to reading without knowing it, and then I read it very quickly. I highly recommend this book [Like]

It feels pretty good-looking and has a powerful feel, but the heroine is a bit unexpected, Xiaobai, Lilia and Su Ziwu. When I thought the heroine was Lilia, I thought it was Xiaobai, but it turned out to be Su Ziwu, but it was indeed expected. At present, it seems that writing 1500 pages of this book is not a big problem (currently there are more than 1500 chapters). I hope the author can write the subsequent plot more completely, and hope this book can be better [Like][Like][Like]

OK OK! This is so pretty!

A good book, it's better to abduct the five gods [laughing evilly]

The writing is not bad, so you can take a look, but of course there are a lot of shortcomings. The most important thing is that the reference is too obvious. In fact, the writing style is not bad. It would be better if I could make it better myself or if the reference is not too obvious. Writing is not easy, support and encourage [send heartfelt]

Before traveling through time and space, this book could still be regarded as a good book with a score of 9.5 Or above. Books like Tomato are rare, but the fandom and beast control are still very good. However, in fact, the fandom part is very small, and it is a bit of a trick. However, the writing style in the early and middle stages is really not bad. If it can be improved, I will give it a 9.3 Now.

It looks good, I love watching it, I still want to watch it The plot is very exciting and it is a good book, but the shortcomings are also here. Some details in the novel are not handled well, which makes it a bit headache to read. Moreover, the author's ambition is a bit too big. A certain two-word game seems to be only an add-on in this book. If you are here for a certain two-word game, it may be difficult to accept it, but if not, then I think you will be attracted by the excellent plot of this book. That's all, author, hurry up and update („ಡωಡ„)

Emmm...... First of all, the author's wife's writing skills are very good and she can control the basic rhythm. Secondly, in my opinion, the combat power is relatively clear, and there is no collapse power as some people say. Finally, this book is very interesting and has a lot of updates. When can Ye Ye recognize her relatives? In addition, I wish the author to write better and better! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing] Also, let me ask weakly, what is the group number [laughing][laughing][laughing][pout]