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It looks good, give me a good torture of Su Yiyi [laughing evilly]

After reading the introduction, I still like Luo Yiyi very much. I hope there will be more storylines about Luo Yiyi, and I hope the author can grasp the emotional scenes and not make a person's liking too abrupt. Mengxi's words don't feel very eye-catching and not outstanding enough. Also, the heroine Su and so on, I personally don't like too violent characters, so I don't pay much attention to this heroine. I hope I don't like him for no reason, and I don't want to be a big stud male protagonist who loves anyone just because he's pretty. Ahem... In short, in short, I still want to see Luo Yiyi's transformation process. That's why I continued reading. I hope the author can grasp this character well. Ahem, I really like the hero's girlfriend Luo Yiyi. Give the author a little support and hope that he will work hard and come on.

It's really good-looking. I wish the heroine's image could be described more fully, so that it would be more interesting to look at. It's best to write it clearly in black and white.

At present, it seems that many heroines love their favorite treasure - Meng Xi, who is so cute; being trained - Luo Yiyi, she should be the one who suffers from Stockholm Syndrome; and Su Yueying, who has low emotional intelligence, her communication with her father is really interesting, and her communication with the protagonist is also interesting; the little girl who leads the family - Xiao Yu, this is to be determined. This female character gives me a feeling of development, but there is not much plot at the moment, so I don't know if she will become one of the heroines. There is also a blonde girl - Eiffel, who described her as having a feeling of being in love with Su Yueying. So far, the character is very three-dimensional and I like it very much. As the main plot, I don't know which path the protagonist wants to develop. From the description, it seems that he may engage in business, engage in gray industries, and become a "death soldier". From this, it can be seen that he is either an arms dealer, a mercenary, or other options? Damn, I like it even more, it's so exciting. Looking forward to it without limit, the author will update soon. Slow-burning, daily, well-structured, with distinctive female characters. I don't know if there are multiple female protagonists, it's too unclear. If it's so Mengxi, Su Yueying, and Luo Yiyi can barely be counted. I don't watch much, because the more I watch, the more bland I feel…

It's a good book. If I change the name, it should become popular. I like Mengxi very much. It has a sense of mystery. The setting is also good.

It's not bad. The protagonist's character has a good outlook on life. The only thing that's a little bit poisonous is that he's broad-minded. He takes advantage of his family members who were enemies in his previous life. The world view seems a bit vague to me. The past life's kindness is repaid, but it depends on how the author solves the problem later, and whether the author feels as if the protagonist is in love. But if you think about it yourself, it's actually a good book.

It's very interesting. It was officially launched after I saw this title. It's a very good routine. This kind of theme routine can occasionally be seen in Nikgaru Japanese comics, but there may be some ideological issues in Japan and there are always big surprises. This book is very boring. Although the update speed is quite reasonable, does the author of this kind of rare work with good reputation in the comment section really not intend to add more Braille? [Sentiment]

How should I put it? Maybe it's because I'm under a lot of academic pressure or I've read a lot of books. It's been a long time since I've been able to read a book from beginning to end without skipping a chapter. So far, I like this book very much. The characters, plot, rhythm, and description are among the best among the books I've read recently. At first, I thought the protagonist would be Long Aotian in the traditional sense, but no, he is more bloody, more courageous, and more loyal, which surprised me. As for Mengxi, she is so cute, from head to toe. Su is also a character that surprises me. She is both similar and different from traditional taciturn female characters. Some of my favorite places are the martial arts contest between two people, the phone call scene, and the Declaration of Independence. It has a very "reasonable" feeling and is not forced to be pretentious. It is very interesting. I don't know if the author has an outline. As far as I can tell, according to the current progress, the book will be completed in about 300 chapters. I can look forward to it. I hope the author can stick to it. This is the first time I write a book review that is so long. It's just a few things I want to say, that's all.

Yes, the perspective will not be overly focused on the protagonist. The supporting characters also have their own distinct images, and there are a few pitfalls that have been buried so far. It depends on whether they can be filled in later. It is easy to forget this if it is written for a long time, but to be honest, it is already very good to have this data when you switch from a fanfic to an original. The rest can only be found through more writing.

I originally wanted to wait until it was truly finished before rating it, but I still didn't expect it to end like this. It's a pity. I also look forward to the rebirth of the work. Rating: Good grass. The work itself has no major pain points and is great to watch. It is worth watching. In terms of character creation, whether it is the image characteristics of the characters in the work or personal growth and enlightenment, they are all done very well. As for the most important emotional narration of pig's feet, I personally think it's great, facing one's own heart. And I'm really looking forward to Chen Luo's candy show.

As of Chapter 43 of Volume 2 (spoiler misreading ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️) The author's writing style is really good, the characters are very vivid, and the progress of the daily main plot is slow. However, the foreshadowing of going to a nightclub to become a death warrior at the beginning has not appeared yet. Is it too late? I feel that the relationship with Su Yueying is a bit far-fetched. Only two hearty fights in three months in the timeline can he be firmly tied to the ship? Let people support the club and work as a thug (could it be her father's instruction? Or is it just a stupid girl who is a martial arts idiot?) Now that Luo Yiyi has opened her heart to Chen Mo, do you think the main plot will accelerate next? Looking forward to what the big rabbit will do next. Revolution is always accompanied by blood. I hope there will be no knife. Big rabbit, please don't end it, oh oh oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, etc. "In the end, the protagonist leads a group of people and screams for liberation, saying we unite! We will win the boss battle with our passion." It's too cliched! (Kneel down) (The author is so good at writing, why not just write sweet stories www, and add some small main lines to set up a western fantasy or something like that. There are so many fans of Maotu. Long live ≧▽≦! Long live ≧▽≦! Don't say anything bad about the author! Wow!

Perfect characterization, the author is really capable of making a character so flesh and blood. It is recommended that those who have just watched it should not read the comment section. Everyone has their own thoughts. I think Luo Yiyi is a very vivid character. It's not as bad as some people who follow the trend say. If you really read it chapter by chapter and appreciate the changes in Luo Yiyi's mood, you wouldn't scold her in the short comments. No one is perfect, and the growth of characters is the most exciting part. Come on, author, this is an excellent novel, but don't be too eunuch.

So far it looks pretty good. Chen Mo (that is, the male protagonist) is not a virgin, he does things in a measured way, and others help when they can, which is in line with my concept of doing things (I just like it, I am a glass-hearted person, if I don't like it, please delete the book voluntarily). The author's writing style is also very good, sometimes beautiful and sometimes humorous. (At least it's better than me who has ideas but can't write anything decent) It's you, the author. Not to mention, sometimes there are typos, which will still degrade the impression a bit. I hope the author will update more often. Also, remember to read it twice and check for typos before posting. Come on! 2023-8-16

"Short and Superb" Good short, good short, good short, good short, good short Unchanged when you see me speak I have read this book several times See the yellow button again The author is so short Always short and slow I hope the author does what I wish Three updates per day and tens of thousands of articles ——A little song is given to the author. If the author does not update it in a day and does not update more than 10,000 times, it will be shortened by 5cm every day (identified by the system and monitored in real time).

A novel that is underestimated due to its title and cover. The current style is funny, relaxed, and everyday. The author's writing style is very good, and he has grasped the degree of the characters. Each character has a distinct personality. The scenes described are like watching anime in my mind.

This kind of article is difficult to write. It has a strong light novel flavor, and the stage setting is biased towards the omnipotent Neon High School. This kind of stage can easily make readers disconnect in Tomato. This book also has similar problems. However, the flaws are not concealed. The emotional advancement of this work is a very fresh model, and the corresponding climax scenes can be written at the key nodes corresponding to the emotions. This is commendable, so I will give you five stars for encouragement. (However, in terms of the world view, there is a feeling that the story is too big and out of touch with the author's writing power. Eunuch Warning, or like what Ji Cha did in the past, his "Asking the Red World" has transformed from a large-scale masterpiece into a monster-fighting fantasy sketch. The author can also transform the super-powerful urban hot-blooded novel into a daily sweet comedy.) (And the main plot of this volume did not give me the feeling that the author can write a long novel - it means that after the main characters are laid out, they use their own habits to complete a task or scene with each memory point. [For example, Noragami's Bishamon Arc, Demon Slayer's Spider Mountain Arc and Mugen Train Arc] In short, it's dangerous.)

Keep your claws ~ I read the first chapter of the second volume, Chapter 139, and I am very happy to see the current evaluation. The interesting content is very exciting. Up to now, every chapter has been worthy of more than 9 points of evaluation. There is no uncomfortable content, which is better than many other books I have read. The premise is to keep it up. Note: I have said important things about the single heroine three times. I regret that I came late and missed many beautiful scenery. It is a pity. It is well written and I give it five stars. Finally, I hope the author does not want eunuchs.

The audience is small, but it is a very exciting work. If you like excitement, you can give it a try.

From Chen Mo's failed attempt, we can see his clear love and hate, Roy Yi's unique arrogance, Meng Xi's mystery and innocence, Su Yueying's fighting prowess but low emotional intelligence, interesting characters, worth watching

It's really good to watch. It made me, a hot-blooded young man, stand up and salute many times. I really like Luo Yiyi's character, but the whole story was about abusing her, which made her uncomfortable, so I stopped reading it. I don't know what happened next, but the abuse continued after more than a hundred chapters.

It feels good, I can read it, and it can surpass most books on Tomato. Don't read the book reviews. You can expect a group of people who read interesting articles on Tomato to write nutritious book reviews. I just read a few half-hearted articles and commented on them

The genre of this book should be a bit like a light novel, which is quite attractive to me, and I immediately saw Chapter 44 of Volume 4, but the plot in the middle was a bit too long. I stopped reading it for a few hours, and when I read it again, I lost the mood and motivation I had at the beginning, so I wrote this book review. The plot is actually pretty good, at least in my opinion. The protagonist, as a commoner class, "revolts" against the aristocratic class on campus. The characters in the play can be said to be of flesh and blood, each with its own merits, including various story reversals, the scheming used by the characters, etc. It is very exciting. Regarding this emotional aspect, it seems that I feel a little stomachache. As a reborn person, the protagonist was insulted, ridiculed, and beaten by nobles and merchants because of his cowardice in the previous life; and one of the heroines, Luo Yiyi, used high-tech products (child-mother rings) to restrict his personal freedom and treated him as an object, subjecting him to various tortures (this is also mentioned in the article). (It was shown that the protagonist would be afraid of some of Luo Yiyi's actions), and in the extra chapter (in Chapter 74 of Volume 4), it was mentioned that someone drugged her. The protagonist found out and stopped it, and was beaten, but afterwards she told the protagonist that "it crossed the line." There is a big discrepancy between the plot settings of this past life and this one. In this life, it is obvious that Luo Yiyi does not need to sacrifice her body to curry favor with these people for her family. Her father loves her very much and would not let her do such a thing. I don't understand this contradiction. Moreover, when the protagonist was reborn, someone wanted to take revenge on Luo Yiyi, so she used the ring to turn against the guest. After putting on the ring, she said she wanted to take revenge on Luo Yiyi for all the things she had done to the protagonist, but she didn't actually do much. Because Luo Yiyi in the past life and this life is not the same person in a strict sense, the protagonist is confused about the act of revenge against Luo Yiyi (the plot is quite cruel, I felt a little stomachache after watching it. I have no choice but to watch this because I am too old). I think these two people have the Stockholm syndrome, otherwise they would not be so confused and confused. Regarding the plot of the protagonist's good brother, the character "Wang Sijia" designed is a bit poisonous to be honest. Because of the aristocratic class and family issues, he is treated as a pawn and exploited in various ways, and is a "busy". It should be, at least not at all. I generally think that the author wanted to write about a poor man who was born due to this aristocratic system and obtained "salvation"? But it's always uncomfortable to watch. Including Eiffel's situation, all the novels these days have plots that abuse readers, which is really embarrassing. 1⭐I will focus on these two aspects.

Sorry, the five stars are late. The plot is rich and continuous. You won't find it boring in the middle of each plot. The protagonist is not invincible, but it is also a fun story.

The writing is great, the characters are written very delicately, the novel and reality are intertwined with each other, highlighting the realism of things, the text has a certain foundation, which suits my taste, the character fighting is also well written, and no major shortcomings have been found yet, so the overall evaluation: 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐[Thinking]

At first I thought it was a step-by-step rebirth and revenge story, but I didn't expect it to be a good masterpiece. I was really surprised. It has a sense of substitution and immersion, and the description is very real. It does not lay out the background of the world that the protagonist does not know from the beginning, but reveals the details bit by bit from the perspective of the protagonist. There is no outrageous collapse of combat power, golden finger cheats, and the main character. Jiao has the scheming and experience to know what to do and put it into action. He perfectly uses the advantages of rebirth. He has an interesting view on things. He is passionate and refreshing at the same time. The character creation is perfect. The treasure girl Mengxi has a feeling of Shen Youchu. They are all well created and make people like it, but they have their own characteristics and will not feel the same or boring. , The mysterious and cute genius rich woman who is afraid of being autistic in society, and Su Yueying, who is a martial arts idiot. There is a big contrast between reality and the Internet. Even Luo Yiyi shows signs of whitewashing. He likes Mengxi very much. Although he is mentally ill, he still has the principles of a businessman. He still cares about the protagonist's words and cares about his family, but he is still very bad and excessive. Everyone's portrayal is still very good. It is vivid and very real. Although there are also low-level conflicts, love rivals, and gangsters, they are still within the acceptable range. It does not feel brainless or abrupt. It has good control over the rhythm and can grasp the readers' thoughts. The plot also has a certain depth and interest. The writing is very delicate, and there are many jokes and jokes. It is very natural and does not violate the harmony. The overall is very good. I just saw the end of the military training and the battle with Su Yueying. After reading the comments, I remembered that I took over the job of a dead soldier at the beginning. I don't know if it was forgotten or it was a big foreshadowing. I have been studying for so long, why haven't I gone yet? It should be easy for the protagonist to make money or find a place to live, and he should not be short of money right now. Including the portrayal of Luo Yiyi, there are still some flaws, but the overall flaws are not concealed, like saving the sister of a friend in the previous life, it is a feeling of rebirth to make up for regrets.

It's very good. It's Tomato after all, but the world view is too vague and makes people a little confused. However, the plot seems to have no bad points and the characters are well-organized. It's best not to leave comments. It's easy to encounter criticism and affect the enjoyment of reading.

I've been reading it for a long time. It's a really good book. But what I want to say is that Yue Ying's scenes should be added too. Woohoo. We, Chef Su Yueying, hold our mobile phones every day, waiting for updates from the author. As a result, I opened my eyes and saw that we, Yueying, had no role to play. Seeing Lao Chen and Luo Yiyi having to eat together, we, Chef Yueying, could only say that we are more sad than heartbroken, woo woo woo. Get rid of it, Yueying, who is full of muscles and has a natural and super figure, really fucks me and pokes me! (Spray lightly, if you are another cook and it makes you uncomfortable, just spray it lightly)

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It's super good-looking. If you look at books of the same type, there are none, not almost all. The character of each character is well shaped and well grasped. The character will not collapse. There are also emotional changes in it. It will not be dead. It's great. Good luck to the author.

It's good-looking, it feels a bit like a real education, but it has more grand, realistic and difficult-to-grasp things than real education, such as class antagonisms, battles between countries, etc. The description of several people in the harem is also very good, but there are no vases. I hope the author will continue to work hard!