World*******

So far, I haven't seen the system, but I still feel good reading it. The protagonist is so badly tortured, and things will turn against each other in the future. Let's do the best, otherwise, it will be too cruel. Be careful that the protagonist climbs out and hits you on the knee. Author [crying with laughter] Up to now, I am a little disappointed that the protagonist has not become a native of the motherland. The content needs to be more detailed. The protagonist's willingness for all people to practice cultivation is a good idea. It is not the protagonist I imagined who is powerful enough to compete with the country and become a king on his own. There is no feeling of cool writing. Reading is for fun. I hope I hope the author can improve his thinking. What readers like to read is exciting articles. I have always been depressed before, and finally got a chance to turn around. But it turned out to be cooperation. This can't be fun. Catering to readers may go further. After all, if you are not writing a book to make money, why write it? Don't struggle with money. The author's writing skills are obviously better than at the beginning. I hope the author can straighten out his ideas in the future. Come on! I hope you can persevere and don't end up being shocked. I'm quite looking forward to this novel!

The storyline is good

Very well written, cheers

The subject matter is very good. Although there are many Wizards of the World, most of them are either unfinished or relatively short. I hope this author can write a longer novel. Don't mess up, don't block things,

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! .