Just After Unification, My Immortal Qin Was Exposed by Yang Ma

The author is fanciful, there are hundreds of ethnic groups, and it depicts a large number of ancient characters and creations with both ancient and future styles. They are really handsome and the ethnic groups are diverse. There are winged men, sharks, and foxes. There are mainly three types at present. There are martial arts, technology, and immortal cultivation. There are also less expressions of Confucianism and the secret skills of the Human Emperor. It is like the fusion of various ancient dynasties, but it has no shortcomings and is in line with the advantages. It is really handsome.

Very enjoyable! ! ! It's so beautiful. That's why the protagonist hasn't traveled through time, and why don't those people in Blue Star know characters like Li Bai, Huo Qubing... [You taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [laugh awkwardly]

This book feels okay (in my personal opinion), and the writing is pretty good. Currently, it is considered above average among Tomatoes (for specific evaluation, please refer to the plot later) But didn't you, the author, say before that you will have a concubine in one month, and you hope that you can choose a concubine in China instead of a global one? I am used to reading the comments first and then reading the content of the novel. Many Taoist friends in the comments said that when choosing a concubine, you should choose a concubine in your own country, not around the world. I support this, and everyone understands it (everyone knows the moisture content of modern beauties, and there are very few natural ones [face covering]) Otherwise, you will drive away many Taoist friends (readers), and it is basically impossible to get a high score (just pretend I didn't say anything to improve the score). Many readers are basically old-timers except for newbies. They will leave immediately when they see something that is not going well, and they can only stay in the bookshelf to eat dust. Of course, the specific plot depends on how you control it, the author, and whether you can retain readers! It depends on your own ability! (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!)

Very good. The subject matter of the novel is very novel. There might be a fire. Come on, author!

Comfortable, this Daqin is really great. The author also perfectly combined some of the current Internet memes, and there is wind, wind, wind and wind. This whole thing is even more exciting. I look forward to it.

It's super exciting, but did the author forget one thing? I said at the beginning that there are over a hundred chapters of the draft [please read carefully], this is the only one, there is no other way [laughs evilly]

Work harder to update the author. The author is pretty good. Haha, this Daqin novel would be even more perfect if spiritual technology was added later.

It describes the personalities of many people, and then the author also writes about many ethnic groups, which shows that he may take a long time to write this book. Unlike other books that are boring and boring, it is very exciting. Highly recommended.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful, and it satisfies the fantasy of the Immortal Dynasty. There are also things that combine modernity with spiritual cultivation. More importantly, the characters in the article all have their own characteristics. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor too wordy. But there is still something wrong. (The existing Qin Dynasty in the article is called Immortal Qin) Why do the people of the Dragon Kingdom in the article not feel anything when they hear familiar characters. It also did not explain why famous figures in history appeared in Xian Qin. I think this is very poisonous. Xian Qin seems to have nothing to do with the Dragon Kingdom, but it explains that the author traveled from the Dragon Kingdom to Xian Qin. Although I stayed in Xian Qin for ten years, I didn't have any relatives or friends in Dragon Kingdom from birth to ten or twenty years old? Not so much a sense of belonging. I believe these points should be the main reasons for dissuading most people. I was almost poisoned to death when I watched it.

Yes, it's quite interesting. I personally think this book is rated (above average). The reason why I gave it 5 stars is mainly because this question is relatively novel. There are also shortcomings, there is a bit too much nonsense, and the plot is a bit slow.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, say important things three times!

It's so awesome. I especially like to see that every one of his pictures has characters, and each one has a name, so I think he is particularly good at this one, and it implements many historical allusions, which are familiar to everyone. Therefore, my comment is correct, objective, reasonable, clever, incisive, comprehensive, unquestionable, to the point, to the point, incisive, insightful, and enlightening. The sound of gold and jade vibrates, the one who knows what it is and why it is, the one who is unbreakable through the ages.

This theme is quite new. The combination of the modern world with the dynasty of cultivating immortals and the art of mechanism and all races. It means that the whole live broadcast room has to be there to talk about it. The fog disappears. The dynasty appears, discovers the indigenous people, dominates the world, practices day and night, goes to space, discovers space creatures, dominates space, and goes to the universe.

This novel is very interesting. The author has a wonderful idea and combines ancient characters and myths to create Xian Qin. I hope to continue to update according to this idea. I hope that after the draft of this emperor, IQ will be online, and the territory will expand when it needs to be expanded. The more familiar you are, the faster you should fight. Know yourself and the enemy and you will be victorious in every battle! ! !

It's enjoyable, it's enjoyable, it's very enjoyable, it's very enjoyable to watch.

The writing is very good, I hope I can continue to write it and don't write badly again later.

It's good and very creative. This is a novel with a novel plot that I read this year. But there is no end, and there is less. The plot is still okay up to chapter 172. I just don't know if I can keep it up.

It's good to watch. The plot and writing are top-notch in Tomato. The protagonists are all male even if they pick up children. Unlike other authors who wish their pets were all female. There is no woman appearing every now and then. The language is ambiguous and greasy. There is no distinction between men and women who have the same temperament and personality. The protagonists are basically engaged in careers. This must be a five-star review.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. . I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. To you dear readers.

It's really good-looking and very novel. I'm a person who doesn't have the patience to read. I finished it this time. It's really good-looking. I recommend it.

I feel that the writing is very good. The early stage mainly focused on the interaction between the protagonist and the inspection team [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile ][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][micro Laugh][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][ smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][ smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile ][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][micro Laugh][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile] Who can count how many funny things I hide in these smiles?

It's really a bit toxic to endure it all the time, but it looks good overall. However, I can only give it four stars and one star for the sentence "little devil". It satisfied my imagination of Xianqin. The remaining two stars are simply because the overall performance is okay.

Five stars are given to the Earth chapter at the beginning, which is relatively novel, pure and cool, pretentious and cool. Unfortunately, the later chapters are more cliche about the universe and the journey to other worlds. However, the first half of the cool chapters are enough to read [sneaky laugh] It doesn't matter after that~

Not bad, the subject matter is novel, this type of book is good and attractive at first, but after a while you lose interest.

I admire the author's imagination for integrating various elements, such as technology, immortality, Cybertron, etc., Which makes people feel the grandness of the worldview, moving towards interstellar civilization, and actively expanding the world of immortality. The only drawback is that each element doesn't go into much depth, it's a bit like a dragonfly glancing at the water.

A hodgepodge of historical figures, including people from all historical dynasties [laughs][laughs][laughs]

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Very interesting, the subject matter is novel and interesting. Many stories about the Qin Dynasty are about traveling back in time and interacting with big bosses, which is boring. This one is about directly dressing up as the First Emperor and taking the entire country to modern times. It's so interesting. But the coding is so slow, two chapters a day is not enough to read!

I very much approve of the creativity and imagination, but the emotional scenes are a bit weak. Adding some female characters can be used as an adjustment. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Don't criticize.

This is the second time, it feels so good