Star Railway: I, the White Moonlight of the Mirror Life

Along the way, the book finally reaches the beginning of the plot. But that lonely soul that went against the times has created countless miracles [The gravitational-stretching Sirius—Jingyuan] [The fairy fox who saves the suffering - Baidu] [The ghost blade that fights injustice—Shadow Wolf] [The lonely king who protects the world——Canggu] [The First King of the Insects of the World——Taizyuros] Personally, this is the best fanfic I've ever written. The 2200th rating is provided by myself!

It's been a long time since I've seen such a delicate writing style. The characters are exquisitely drawn and the events are vividly described. Plus, I'm a mirror chef. This book is really exciting for me. I'll give it five stars. Although the taste has changed as it's written, the writing is indeed very good. I can only talk about the author's current problems here. First of all, it seems that the change from single to multiple is really very unpleasant. When I first started reading the Kagami-ryu chapter, I was really shocked. But later on, when I read the Sora chapter, I felt a bit ambiguous. If you want to change it now, you can only explain that this matter is simulated. After all, the first half still wrote about an experience he had in reality. If he wanted to get a single, he could only write through this point, but I guess readers who support singles will still feel uncomfortable for a while. Oops, folks, the author has changed the introduction. Those who want to read a single female protagonist shouldn't have to think about it (just read the first 19 chapters)

@ Next door I believe that you, the author, want to write a good story, with delicate writing style and rich emotions. Your original intention is to go solo, and you write mock-up prose to better express the characters. Every single article is considered top-notch, and I think the first one is particularly stunning. But can you stop being so emotionally indifferent, don't underestimate the power of time, and don't write paragraphs like "You are perfect to me, but in this life I met another perfect girl ahead of time." It seems that the protagonist is both frivolous and scumbag. I hope it can be seen and improved a little bit Advantages: The writing is good, the description of emotions is good, and many contents are consistent with the simple description background in the game (it is not particularly biased towards the original work, nor is it particularly similar to the original work). Especially the first Kage-ryu chapter, it is the best fan story (not just Star Iron) I have ever seen. Disadvantages: Too light on emotions (I think this is the main point, I will explain it later). It is clearly described so well in the first article. The protagonist has obviously changed the future, but in the changed future, he has not met Jingliu because he has changed his identity and body. If you can accept it because you are not in Luofu when you are a child, and if you grow up and know where Kagiri is in Luofu, but still don't meet because you didn't think about a proper meeting, you can still accept it. But at the wedding of the blade, the protagonist and Kagiri both attended, and the protagonist also saw it, but still just missed it. It even added a touch, and the article wrote: "You are perfect to me, but in this life I met another perfect girl ahead of time." A friendship of dozens of days (sublimated love) is better than the sublimated love of childhood sweethearts who have shared joys and sorrows for hundreds of years? This sentence has made it clear that Yu Kong, who has known each other for dozens of days, is better than Jingliu, who has been in love for hundreds of years. Don't take time for granted. Simulating a harem is normal and acceptable. But don't make the protagonist's emotions so weak and write them in a sleazy and loyal way. There are always people in the comment area who say that the protagonist has changed his physical identity and is afraid that Kage-ryu will not be able to recognize him. However, at the end of the Kage-ryu chapter, the protagonist said in his last words that he would appear with a new appearance many years later, and only Kage-ryu knew that the arrow was not the manifestation of the imperial bow, but the work of Kage-yuan. Planting the seeds no matter what is a secret that only two people know. Why the protagonist suddenly helped Xianzhou is only known by Jingliu and the dead master. In the end, only the protagonist Jingliu and the two of them know the reason for leaving the sea of ​​flowers on the star. So much, not enough? After all, one cannot pretend to be the other. To be honest, at the end of the Kagami-ryu arc, I was preparing to see you again in the next life. Why was the next life so boring? It's a pity that the comment is too late

It's really good-looking. The writing style in Tomato is top-notch, the descriptions are spot-on, and the plot is very good. I feel like many of them were created by the author himself. The poems that appear seem to be written by the author himself. There are knives but not poison. I like this kind of writing. It's very substantial. It feels like I've been reading it for a long time, but when I look at the table of contents, I feel it's still far from the 70th chapter. It's substantial. I discovered this book at around 12 o'clock last night, and stayed up until 2:30 to finish reading the Mirror Chapter. It broke my habit of going to bed before 12 or 30 a. M. Since the summer vacation. It was worth staying up late. It seemed pretty good-looking at first, but then it was just a bunch of useless descriptions. Although it was pretty gorgeous, it was meaningless. I felt like I wasn't following the main line for a long time while watching it. It's a bit boring and there's not much to see. I just skipped through it and it soon became boring.

What can I say? The writing is very good and the quality is very high. This is the reason why I gave it five stars. At the beginning, I was reading it carefully, but after the Jingliu chapter, I was very confused and didn't know whether to continue reading. I was a little confused why the protagonist who was still determined at the beginning suddenly accepted Yukong later. He accepted it. What is Jingliu? He chased Kageryu for so long, experienced so much with Kageryu, and finally told Kageryu the truth and asked Kageryu to wait for him for hundreds of years... I don't know the author's thoughts, but from my perspective, writing it this way, the protagonist's love is too cheap, or it may be my own problem. I really can't stand it, but I want to see what Kageryu and the protagonist will do in the future, ugh😔 After thinking about it, I'll give it 4 stars. Alas, I thought I had finally found a good book, but I found it was not what I wanted to read😔

The Kyōryu arc is an eternal classic. I may never forget the five-star light cone - "Sirius of the Gravity Expansion Bow" in my life. Really, I was shocked, but then the Black Tower arc started to go downhill. After that, I never read this book again, but I saw this book again in Shu Huang Plaza today. I feel that I should still give the author a belated five-star praise, although the overall rating of this book may be a drop in the bucket. In terms of writing, the author's strength cannot be said. In terms of plot, the Mirror Style Chapter and the Silver Wolf Chapter are both chapters where I feel I can become a god, and the Black Tower Chapter is also an average-to-upper-level Tomato chapter. All in all, it's worth a read. If you want to wait and see, you can read the Kyōryū chapter first and then decide whether to stay if it suits your taste [laughs][laughs]

It is a novel with great potential. I believe it will be popular. The protagonist moves towards maturity through simulation after simulation. The process may be bumpy, but the ending will be beautiful. Just like this sentence, what kind of ending is worthy of the bumps along the way? The writing is so good, why is the rating so low?

The tattoos are very good and very delicate. To be honest, this is one of the best Bengtie fanfics I have read.

An excellent simulation of a fanfic, highly recommended The single heroine label has been removed. I'll add it to the five-star bar after it's confirmed that there are multiple heroines [face covering] Ambiguity will offend both sides. I hope the author learns his lesson.

The writing is very good. What shocked me is that it is now in July (7.27 Seems to be), and some plots have been deduced (I only watched it in September), but there are some problems (self-feeling). What about the emotional setting of the protagonist? It feels a bit too sudden. In fact, more words should be spent on it. Describe it (but considering that there is actually no plot in Mirror Stream, and the character description is not very good) and then there is the description of the black tower (what is going on, I can't understand it anymore, maybe it is my own understanding that is wrong) is the destruction of the planet written by the protagonist? Or was it written by Heita? And then why was Black Tower kicked out of the academy? It seems to be written by Heita, but the explanation given is that it was written by the protagonist. I can't understand it. I hope someone can explain it to me. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing. This is one of the few books I have finished reading.

Five-star praise. I gave these five stars to the previous mirror chapter. As the author changed the single heroine to multiple heroines, I felt more and more uncomfortable. I can only say that I am not the audience for this kind of writing. If you like the single heroine, you can quit after reading the mirror chapter. I wish the author will write better and better.

It's very beautiful. It's the best one I've ever read. It's really immersive. I support it and I sincerely recommend everyone to watch it. (I am not a shill, I speak from the bottom of my heart) Finally, the author should update it quickly, it is too short and not enough to read. The score has gone up again, to 7.3. Come on, author, this book is at least around 9.3. (This is one day later) I went and the rating was 7.8 After only one day ⊙∀⊙

It's really good, much better than those embarrassing Star Iron articles. It's a pity that there are too few articles on Xingtie. The writing style of most new authors is very childish and makes them easily embarrassed. The author's writing style is not bad, at least it is not so embarrassing. Come on, author! Come on, author [love] [love] [love]

This book is very good, and the writing is very delicate. However, in the second simulation of the protagonist, when Ying Xing resurrected Bai Yanna, I felt so uncomfortable. Obviously the protagonist wanted to change the tragedy, but he still failed to do it perfectly.

Very good, super good. I looked at the low ratings because the single female protagonist has changed. In fact, it is understandable. After all, part of it is aimed at the single female protagonist. Then author, you should change it more thoroughly and change the name a little bit. Come on, author!

Although it's not my favorite single heroine, the Kage-ryu chapter is really well-written, so I give it five stars (it's because the Kage-ryu chapter is so good that it's weird and embarrassing to see the protagonist with other people later. How can it be fixed!)

Star Railroad is a very good book, and there are no characters in it that have a completely ruined start. Whether describing the heroine or other characters, each has its own emotions and psychological activities, making the whole book come alive. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars And the writing style of this novel is very good. Although there are some flaws: the single female protagonist was changed to multiple female protagonists, but it is also understandable that Star Iron is a newly released game, and there is not much plot about the mirror style. Changing it to multiple female protagonists can better continue writing. Author, don't die, keep updating

This is a book that surpasses all the fans in this series. I am not bragging and I am not a troll. I am sighing from the bottom of my heart about how good this book is. Especially the Kyōryu chapter, it's the best, come on, author! Don't be discouraged because the ratings are still a little low right now. Come on, author!

It is suspected that Bengtie screenwriter went to sea to make a living (Fog) One of the best novels I have read in recent years, thank you to the author [Like][Like][Like]

Each deduction is a brand new world, and the timeline is also added with each deduction. The writing is very good, and there is no brainlessness in simple and refreshing writing. Each deduction object has a different encounter, which is very consistent with the character image, and each character is well portrayed. It is a rare good book. I almost gave up because the book review said that there is no such thing as Jingliu in the back, but if I read it carefully, I realized that there has always been only one main line. In every deduction of Jingliu, the protagonist can be located through the blessing of hunting in the body, and others can basically not hide it, except for Silver Wolf (but in theory, using the hacker's cassette Silver Wolf can locate him).

I can only say that this is the most interesting Bengtie fanfic I have ever read. The guide is not a brainless guide but a step-by-step guide that makes it very clear and clear. And I also like the little slang (poetry) in the article [laughter]

Although the protagonist can be simulated, he is still too weak in some things. The writing is very good and it is a rare good book. But maybe the plot can be made less tragic? After all, reading books is all about pictures. If it's too depressing, it feels like realistic literature. I hope I can be happier without regrets😔

It is really well written and I hope the author can continue writing. Well... Because I want to continue watching, to see how a time traveler makes up for regrets, how to become a salvation, how to become a white moonlight, and then stay together for the rest of his life. As a person like me, the most despised thing is tragedy, so... The author will definitely not end in a eunuch or hastily [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Well... Come on, author, there is a little reader asking you - write hundreds of chapters! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

I feel that the best simulation in this book is definitely Esta's, at least in my opinion so far. It really gets more exciting as you go to the back It's just that I don't understand what the relationship between Esta and the protagonist is? After reading the book reviews, it seems that most of them are dissatisfied with the original single female protagonist but the ending was changed.

The writing is very good, at least it's not like other simulations. The characters are very delicate so far. I hope to write more realistic plots and not focus too much on the simulation. One more thing, is the heroine a mirror?

It's a very good novel, and it's considered excellent among the hundreds of fan fictions I've read. Unfortunately, it's just not enough to read. I want to read it for weeks.

The writing is very good. If you want to see a single heroine in the mirror, just look at the front. There are more heroines in the back.

Good looking, but not perfect. The advantage is that the emotional line is relatively delicate, but the disadvantage is the ratio of simulation to reality, which is a common problem in many simulation novels. A simulation is always a simulation and must serve reality. Either enhance the strength of reality through simulation, or collect real girls through simulation. If there are too many simulations, it will just be useless moaning in the simulation, without the fun.

It's really beautiful, and every story really moved me. It feels really amazing. Each of these stories really moved me. Don't dare to shoot too high, everyone knows the reason, ugh This book will always be on my bookshelf. Even if it eventually disappears, I will not delete it! ! !

It's a good book, but it's not very popular. Friends who have seen it please help support it. Don't delay.