I, the Divine Lord of the Divine Transformation Realm, Come to Kyushu

So far, it's pretty good. I would like to make some suggestions. You can add a title like (Single Heroine) (Love) in the introduction. Otherwise, I just came here for the background. But after seeing a lot of love plots, I felt that the character design was a little bit broken. Later, I read some, and the writing was okay (after all, I am a cultivator, and I still rarely get emotional towards mortals for no reason. Yes, at least the descriptions at that time were for mortals. After tens of thousands of years, any love at first sight may be a conspiracy, because I have met too many people, and it is impossible to fall in love at first sight. More people will suspect that they are influenced, and then check the soul and true spirit in various ways.) Of course, the above description is limited to the cultivation of immortals. If you add a little title to introduce it, it will be more acceptable.

Not bad, not bad, very good

It's beautiful. The fighting scenes and description scenes are a bit different from what Hong Mao wrote, but they are incomparable. The words are not enough to read, not enough to read. Just write as you like. Everyone has their own preferences. The words are not enough to read. I can only read more.

The language is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be called a relatively successful work. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is accurate and vivid, rich in emotion, and easy for readers to understand, rather than ambiguous. The author has a greater role in the worldview of this book, and I also saw a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages. I hope the author can echo the later chapters instead of being self-reliant. In the end, I couldn't understand them! ! ! ! Fight to death! ! ! Send more sugar! ! !

When I was halfway through reading it, I discovered that another book by the author is also on my bookshelf. These two books by the author are very suitable for me. The writing of this book is still very good and remarkable. Of course, there are some poisonous points, but not many. However, the part between Daozi and Daonu is indeed quite poisonous. It's big, but it's okay after reading it. The author probably realized it and couldn't change it. He also solved this poisonous point later. It feels like a big thing has been reduced to a small thing. It's not a big problem. Finally, I want to ask the author if he has written other books besides the two books above? I want to take a look, I guess it will most likely suit my taste, hahaha.

I can't say it's particularly good. Occasionally there are some small problems, such as bad sentences, but the author corrects them very quickly. There are relatively few books like this that don't have any bad points. I recommend reading it. Moreover, the author often interacts with readers.

To be honest, I think this book has more than 7 stars, I think it must be at least 8.5 Or above. Overall, I didn't find any major bad points, but the pace was a bit fast later on (probably because the book's performance wasn't very good), but overall it was really good.

Eternity is supreme. He sacrificed everything since the last time he sacrificed the golden elixir to save everyone. This time he sacrificed everything and restarted the second book. It needs to gradually fall asleep to restore the eternal power. In the end, it has to fight Weird again to fill all the pits.

Not bad, give me five stars to encourage you. It's getting boring.

It's really beautiful! I have read all kinds of novels, but this novel really got into my heart. There is no intrigue at all! This is the most beautiful world in fantasy! Let's not talk about it anymore, let's change it to Xiaoyu, the cake maker first.

To be honest, this book is my ideal book. After all, I have dreamed about it before, hoping to see a book like this. However, yesterday I was lucky enough to finally find this book. I'll give it ten stars, it's very nice.

It looks good, but why is the rating so low? [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] Muzi, come on, I believe time will give the answer

It looks great, good luck to the author! ⸜₍๑•⌔•๑₎⸝

It's okay. There are a lot of memories. Overall it's good. I hope it's not too harsh.

Ahhhhhhh, the book is really beautiful, and this lovely author is even more attractive [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Come on, the author [laughs]

It's really good-looking. I read it in one sitting after reading it. Mainly because I really like the author's writing style. Come on, author. Fantasy with Cthulhu and cute lolita. Both of these factors I like have. I love it so much, okay?

Ten chapters a day is enough to read

Cthulhu invades heaven

It looks good, but it's too short.

I hope it's not too cruel,

Good author, good writing style

Looks good! Highly recommended! ! !

My evaluation is very good

It's very interesting. I hope the author can keep updating it. It's best to have thousands of photos of the finale, otherwise it won't be enough🙏🙏🙏

Personally I think it is well written and I would like to support the author. There are a lot of memories in the early stage, but the more I write later, the more I feel better.

Wife, give you five stars to encourage you, and I will call you wife. Wife Tie Tie [blowing kiss] [sending heart] [admiration] @Silingmu

It's very interesting and beautiful, and the more you get to the back, the more interesting it becomes. I take back my previous comments. It was sweet at first, with a single female protagonist, but after the return, it started to develop into multiple female protagonists, more like a pseudo-harem. The female protagonist also supported the male protagonist to have a harem, and found various reasons for the male protagonist to have a harem. She did not dare to have any temper, and the male protagonist understood how to get along with other women.

It looks good, I love watching it, I want to watch it

Very good, not bad, not bad.

Come on, author, don't finish it