Monster*******

I couldn't stand it anymore since the fifth chapter. Don't doubt that I, a bookworm who has read for nearly 4,000 hours, still have a lot of weight in what I say! ! ! Disadvantages: The writing is immature and the protagonist's personality changes too easily. It is a bit too early to enter the horror circle by following the example of many predecessors in horror novels. In addition, as we all know, the title of the book, the first three pictures and the introduction are the golden triangle. If we don't see the heroine in the first three pictures and don't mention the introduction, we can only say that it is average, and the fame is just an exaggeration. The title of the book must match the first three chapters. In the first three chapters, I only saw the ghost but not the heroine. Why do readers click on your book? Isn't it because of the title of your book? However, no matter how good-tempered the heroine is, people will sometimes become impatient, so the first three pictures are so important. Advantages: Can't find it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Summary: The writing style is too immature. The author needs to read more books, accumulate cultural skills, and have smooth sentences. There should be no inconsistency. The pace cannot be too fast. The readers still don't know when the scene changes! The author should take this as a warning and work harder in the next book! ! ! ! ! !

The subject matter is good, the plot is good, and the characterization is good, but the writing technique is a bit immature, and the author should be a novice

Well worth seeing

A very good book