Honkai*****

Not bad, but the setting of the Mirror World is a bit of a stomachache. It's not easy to write about. Just click here and there. It's also recommended not to dig a big hole, or to fill a hole as soon as you dig it. These pictures are a bit confusing. Too many riddles will reduce the viewing experience (Stacked Armor: I didn't say that I'm not allowed to write riddles. !, I personally have no interest in cool and invincible articles), I don't know how the author will write the mirror world chapter later, after all, the number of words is still too few (so hurry up and update it!!), In short, the female ghost in white should try to be marginalized as much as possible, and be an event NPC to promote the main line. Or put in more information. The motivation of this character is still too confusing. At present, we can only infer that he probably belongs to the protagonist group and has protected the male protagonist for 9 years without interruption. This pit is very big visible to the naked eye. If you don't fix the settings quickly, it may become a poisonous point. Summary: It is recommended that the author update to unlock more settings~~

My evaluation of this book is that if you are as lucky as me to read this book, then I can only say that this thing... Thai pants are hot! Personally, I prefer to read novels with their own settings. After all, settings can really explain a lot of things, especially some tragic settings (such as side effects, represented by "evolutionary trusters") can really make the book more exciting. Of course, I only speak for myself. It seems that most people still don't like books with too many settings. Just treat me like a fart, don't worry about this [face covering]

Just don't stop. I feel pretty good so far.

Not a single player, but also me

There are a lot of secondary settings in this book. If you don't like the extra secondary settings, you can delete them. Also, some of the previous chapters may be confusing to you. If you like to take it slow, you can try it. I know you are in a hurry, but don't be anxious yet. There will be explanations. Just keep reading.

A very good book.

Did something happen to the author?

Not bad, you are better. After a few days of classes in high school, you only have four chapters. Wow, it's really true.

... Very good, nothing to say. Just a little less

The book is good so far, but I have a question, who is the heroine? Or is there a female protagonist? It can't be Mei, right?

The writing is very good, and I look forward to the follow-up and the author not to use the knife! ! ! !

It's a great book. All the elements I like are in it. The scenes are well described, but it's too short. I read it in one night.

I really liked the one who wrote about Kamen Rider in Honkai Impact. Yours is considered to be in the top ten.

Author, how can you sleep? Why don't you just be a ruthless coding machine [laughing evilly]

Not bad, not bad, really good

Big cheers for the author

Should become Hikari's

Suits my taste

Hey, I finished it in a short while

Good luck to the author!

Great, I didn't write about the knife in the early stage

Five-star praise is given.

The book is good, keep going

So what is going on in this world?

The book is good, but I didn't want to read it when I saw ghosts later. Come on.

It looks good, but it's a bit missing. The author will add pictures, but in the comment area

This book is pretty good so far, I hope it doesn't end

Real man, when can the red daddy appear? By the way, there's also Brother E

There are very few themes about knights and Honzo, so it's very difficult to find a good one. I hope I can continue writing [laughs]

It's pretty good among Honkai fanfics.