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If Xia tide and Su don't have as many scenes together as Xie Yun, and if Su treats Xie Yun better than Xia tide, you know the author [angry]

When I read the title and introduction of the book, I thought it was about the love and hatred between master and disciple. Looking back, I found that Su Yun was portrayed as too handsome, and many female characters had a crush on him. When I got to the headmaster Lin, I thought it might be a harem story... But the further back, I found... Oh, this apprentice feels a bit like a yandere, very possessive, and there are a lot of emotional descriptions between Xia tide and Su Yun. I have to say that it is really fucking sweet to me. [Chigua], just for this reason, I kind of wanted to have a single heroine, because when Xia Xi saw a woman flirting with Su Yun, her jealousy exploded, it really made me sour. [Chigua]... Later, I read the comments and some people were fighting for a single heroine and a harem, and they all had their own suggestions. I personally like this book about the love-hate relationship between master and apprentice, and the fake harem. But I also consider that some people who like harem novels will abandon it because the author has laid out several female characters and there is nothing they can do about it. Now it's the conflict between the master and the apprentice who are too sweet and the previous female characters who have harem tendencies. The author can make sure of it himself... [Chigua] Don't really respond to your name and then get cold feet. I'm quite optimistic about this master-disciple theme. I also read that the author wanted to slow down and write in the long term - I think Xie Yun is still used as a clue throughout the whole text. He writes about the difficulties Xie Yun encountered in the process of growing up as a disciple, and then as a master, he helps, and Su Yun himself also needs to become stronger. This is really "serious" "Point" the author can take his time, and at the same time, the author can also intersperse the branch lines of the demon clan, the story of Master Su Yun and the Demon Sect, and can also trigger conflicts between the other four sects, or conflicts between various big families and dynasties as plot descriptions. Of course, we cannot leave out the main thread of Xie Yun as the main thread throughout the whole text. After all, it is time travel and there is an original text. Your system also explains the principles and physics of Tiandao. If the author intends to write a single female protagonist, he can also add Su Yun to take Xia tide to experience and become stronger. After all, the Xia Xi in the original text is still a female protagonist (although this Xie Yun'er and this Xia Xi are Lily in the original world - I really know how to thank...), The strength cannot fall behind, and of course the description of emotions cannot be missing [I learned it] The above are personal evaluations and suggestions for this book. The author's top priority is to deal with the emotional line of the female character. If it is not solved well, it may collapse. After thinking about it, the author can directly label the introduction as "single female protagonist" or "harem novel", which can also let readers understand directly. (It's a bit short and not enough to watch👀) I forgot to mention that Xia tide seems to be out for revenge, don't forget it in love~ The above is my personal point of view. If you don't like it, don't spray it [eating melon] @

The plot of "taking on a disciple" is too long.

I feel like the storyline of recruiting a disciple is too long.

From the recommendation list, a book with no ratings actually has more than 90 million views, which is awesome

Is the author a single female protagonist?

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is a bit unsatisfactory [what]

It's nice to watch, but the trial part is too long, which slows down the plot.

The author's writing is pretty good and the content is passable. If you like everyday things, this is a good read.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, generating electricity, generating electricity everywhere [laughing]

However, I am uneducated and can travel all over the world with just one sentence🐮🍺

Still pretty good, recommended by Shuhuang

Okay, worth a look

Committing crimes against the wind and moving forward bravely

It's pretty good, but I don't know if it's a single heroine or multiple heroines.

You can read it when you don't have a book to read. I suggest the protagonist be stronger. Overall it's good.