Also known as: The Villainous Master's Guide to Saving His Beloved Disciple
“Wait, where the heck have I ended up? Is this even still China?”
Su Yun stared blankly at the unfamiliar surroundings, his mind full of confusion and bewilderment.
His first transmigration left his head spinning.
All he could do was lie on the bed, looking around in search of something familiar.
Just then, an insect-like creature appeared beside him and explained the situation.
“Oh! So I've transmigrated into a novel and become the villain. No big deal. What? I'm the villainous master who likes to abuse his disciples!”
At first, Su Yun didn't think much of the news. But what he heard next made his blood run cold.
“And my disciple is the female lead! One day, she'll turn me into a human pig!”
Su Yun couldn't help wailing, “It's over! The sky is falling!”
As he wondered how to escape his tragic fate of being turned into a human pig,
the bedroom door suddenly swung open, and Xia Xi, the story's female lead and his own disciple, walked in.
Holding a bowl of medicine, Xia Xi said expressionlessly, “Master, it's time for your medicine.”
Su Yun stared at his beautiful-as-a-fairy disciple, terrified inside, but forced himself to ask calmly, “My dear disciple, tell me, is this medicine legitimate?”
Su Yun knew how awful he had been to his disciples. To change the tragic ending that awaited him, he would have to make a radical change.
From abusing his disciple to doting on her, from hatred to love: an extraordinary journey.
The story of a villainous master and the heroine chosen by fate begins here...
One trial can fill many chapters. What I look at is the love and hatred between master and disciple, not the sect's recruitment.
If Xia tide and Su don't have as many scenes together as Xie Yun, and if Su treats Xie Yun better than Xia tide, you know the author 😠
When I read the title and introduction of the book, I thought it was about the love and hatred between master and disciple. Looking back, I found that Su Yun was portrayed as too handsome. Many female characters had a crush on him. When I got to the headmaster Lin, I thought it might be a harem story... But the further back I found... Oh, this apprentice feels a bit like a yandere and very possessive. There are a lot of emotional descriptions between Xia tide and Su Yun. I have to say that it is really sweet. Damn it🍉, just because of this, I kind of wanted to have a single heroine, because when Xia Xi saw a woman flirting with Su Yun, her jealousy exploded, it really made me jealous🍉... Later, I read the comments and some people were fighting for a single heroine and a harem, and they all had their own suggestions. I personally like this book about the love-hate relationship between master and apprentice, pseudo harem. But I also consider that some people who like harem novels will abandon it because the author has laid out several female characters and there is nothing they can do about it. Now it's the conflict between the master and the apprentice who are too sweet and the previous female characters who have harem tendencies. The author can make sure of it himself... 🍉Don't really accept your name and then get cold feet. I'm quite optimistic about this master-disciple theme. I also read that the author wanted to slow down and write in the long term - I think Xie Yun is still used as a clue throughout the whole text. He writes about the difficulties Xie Yun encountered in the process of growing up as a disciple, and then as a master, he helps, and Su Yun himself also needs to become stronger. This is really "serious" "Point" the author can take his time, and at the same time, the author can also intersperse the branch lines of the demon clan, the story of Master Su Yun and the Demon Sect, and can also trigger conflicts between the other four sects, or conflicts between various big families and dynasties as plot descriptions. Of course, we cannot leave out the main thread of Xie Yun as the main thread that runs through the entire text. After all, it is time travel, and there is an original text. Your system also explains the principles and physics of Tiandao. If the author intends to write a single female protagonist, he can also add Su Yun to take Xia tide to experience and become stronger. After all, the Xia Xi in the original text is still a female protagonist (although this Xie Yun'er and this Xia Xi are Lily in the original world - I really know how to thank...), The strength cannot fall behind, and of course the description of emotions cannot be missing [I learned it] The above are personal evaluations and suggestions for this book. The author's top priority is to deal with the emotional line of the female character. If it is not solved well, it may collapse. After thinking about it, the author can directly label the introduction as "single female protagonist" or "harem novel", which can also let readers understand directly. (It's a bit short and not enough to watch👀) I forgot to mention that Xia tide seems to be out for revenge, don't forget it in love~ The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. 🍉 @ Cool Bar
If you write an admissions program from 28 to 60 chapters and haven't finished it, you will probably have to write about 100 chapters 🙂🙂
I think this type of master story is originally very interesting, but when it comes to the Saints of the Demon Sect, Lu Qingyue, Lin Qingya, etc., It is not so good. The protagonist is not the original Su Yun. Even if he does not inherit the previous memories, he has no feelings for them. Also, the one they like is Su Yun, but the protagonist is no longer the original Su Yun. How are they going to explain it later? Should they tell the truth or continue to lie? Can they accept it after telling the truth? A good article about Master. Why do you write this?
One piece of advice: writing about your first apprentice in the early stage is too long and describes too little about the other female protagonists. This will also lead to some people asking you to switch to a single female protagonist. If you really want to write about the harem later, you need to write out the interactions between the other female protagonists and the male protagonist. Also, how to pick up the first female protagonist. If you accept other female protagonists, you should be careful about becoming Brother Cheng. If you transfer the order, the same principle applies to how to make other female protagonists give up. But I don't recommend that you have to change it before it is too late. Maybe the performance of this book is even worse. There are too many pitfalls. If you can't make up for it later, you can basically declare it dead.
Can! It's just that one regional plot is too long! Just a little less! It's a bit of a plot! Just be sweet and warm your blood, don't lower your IQ, and don't have a harem, otherwise it will collapse!
The plot of "taking on a disciple" is too long.
I feel like the storyline of recruiting a disciple is too long.
Three words, it's too procrastinating, just being manipulated by the apprentice, the protagonist is not tough, and it can be related to many women, such as the part about the protagonist's master, your master also likes you to give an over-concept. Then just water. Looking at me, I feel like a hundred flowers have been bloomed, and not a single leaf touches me. The more I look at it, the less I feel. Personal feeling. I don't understand your point of view. Or not summarized. Anyway, I can't keep chasing.