Da Qin: I Have Just Unified the Six Kingdoms and Obtained the Portal

It's well written, but it's a bit lacking in reading.

My wife is so pretty! ! ! ! If you are good at writing, write more! ! ! It's too short and not enough to see! It's only what time it is, and I don't even want to sleep. I just want to read something written in big letters. [Cry] [cry] [cry] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Across the screen, I felt the pressure from 007 and 996. It really rolled me around, and the First Emperor was the ceiling in The King of Rolls. It was a bit too exaggerated, but it was still acceptable. It was a cool read.

Although there are logical problems, it is a cool article, the subject matter is not bad, and it is interesting.

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Come and comment in advance. The more you look at it, the better it looks. It's addictive [making faces] The First Emperor is awesome

So pretty. Very beautiful. Very beautiful. So pretty. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Like][Like][Laugh][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

The book is good. It's just that the daily development is boring. The author should write more about war to make it more interesting. Although the development of an empire is inseparable from the people's livelihood economy. But there is no need to be specific in a novel. We want to see Qin Shihuang conquer the stars and the sea. I don't want to see Qin Shihuang engage in economic development. I hope the author can think carefully about how to write the following plot without being boring. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's a good book. I have no words. Anyway, it's good to read.

The writing is exciting, refreshing, and in line with basic tastes. It is impossible for everyone to have exactly the same thoughts. If an article or novel resonates with 50% of the readers, it is very good. If this book reaches 70%, it is great. It's a pity that the situation of the Chinese universe was not mentioned later. When Da Qin entered the spaceship, it was said that China's technology had surpassed that of the Chinese universe. Maybe it was inconvenient to write, or it was not relevant to the plot and was not written. In addition, starting from the unification of the world, the completion of the book has been accelerated. If I write it down later, and then go to the Milky Way, I will probably be able to write another 1 to 2 million words.

It's so beautiful. I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist or a eunuch. I hope the portal can allow a few more people to pass through and allow others to pass through.

Five-star review: This work is very nice, and the setting is also very novel. Although there are some minor flaws in logic, there is a system to fill it in, so you won't feel too uncomfortable. It's better than other novels where you don't even bother to find excuses. Anyway, this novel is highly recommended. The writing style is a bit weak. It should be a new author. I support the author greatly and he will write better and better.

Okay, although it's a little illogical, it's pretty well written.

The subject matter is very good and the meaning is good, but the writing is too hasty and a lot of it is unrealistic and unrealistic.

The description of Qin Shihuang in this book is quite good. Looking forward to the eternal Qin Empire

Finally, there is a story about the First Emperor himself traveling through time and causing trouble [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Ah, it's wonderful. I finished it after reading it for a long time. The author should update it quickly [please update], but the author must also keep a good grasp of the progress of the plot. There are very few novels about Qin Shihuang who can come to the modern era. (A few months ago, I read a novel about Fusu and Ying Zheng who can go to the modern era. It looked good. Then I wrote more than 200 chapters. I went directly to the interstellar and then finished it. I remember it was called Daqin Fusu. I was shocked by the modern era)

It looks good, but my brother Zheng is very busy and tired. He carries things by himself, extracts and compiles excerpts from books, and can also drive an excavator. Brother Zheng is so cool [cool][cool][cool]

Not bad, very pretty, relatively fresh

Very interesting. Xiaozheng is full of desire for new things

The plot is novel, the author's thinking is clear, and the plot arrangement is wonderful. As a picky old bookworm, I read it very interestingly [Cool]

It would be better to add a female protagonist and a cute baby girl to occasionally interact with each other. The content is too monotonous and you will easily get bored after watching it for a long time.

This is not a running story, and there should be no writers ghostwriting it. (The most annoying thing is that a group of people in a studio sometimes write in a messy way.) This is not the case for the time being [I learned it]

Although the ending is rushed, it is still a good book.

It's so beautiful, I hope the author can update it soon [Love] I have read many Da Qin books about Ying Zheng, but if you read a few chapters of a book, it is not so attractive, unlike this one.

It looks good, cheers for the author [upvote][upvote]

Although the content is very fantasy, the writing is very natural, and everyone's character is well and naturally portrayed [Like][Like][Like]

The content is novel, but the span of details is too large. It feels too sci-fi. One hundred years of development has caught up with the time of 2000 and surpassed it! It's really a big leap

Five stars is an encouragement. There are still many shortcomings in the book, but it is still very good for novices. Please work harder.

I have been reading Tomato for almost 10,000 hours. This is my first time reading a book of this type. It is quite interesting, but updates are very slow.

Very good, I feel it looks better than I wore it now. At least the ancient people wearing modern clothes give me the feeling that they are inspiring to start a business.