Water Sword**

I haven't read it but I'd like to give the author some suggestions. 1. There is a golden rule in most novels. Generally, the main text is entered in about three chapters and written from the perspective of the protagonist. However, in the second chapter of this book, it reaches 1.10,000 Words. The next one or three chapters add up to more than 10,000 words. From chapter zero to chapter two, it is about 2.50,000 Words. In the general 2000-word small chapter and 4000-word large chapter, your first three chapters are equivalent to 12 chapters of an ordinary 2000-word chapter. And I did not see the protagonist in these three chapters. This is undoubtedly fatal. 2. There is a principle issue regarding the length of paragraphs when writing articles. Everything is focused on viewing. Online articles are about getting to the point quickly. Try not to make a long paragraph in one paragraph. On the contrary, the author has a paragraph with normal fonts that can last two pages on your mobile phone. The viewing experience is really poor. 3. The chapter arrangement should not be long or short, but should be evenly distributed as much as possible. It is very comfortable to see that a chapter of 10,000 words explains everything that needs to be explained, but it is too lengthy and cannot capture the core focus of the chapter. Summary (the three suggestions are all based on the most basic viewing experience. If the author wants to achieve results, the most basic reader viewing experience must be implemented. Personally, when I read a book, I will quit after reading a lot of long chapters, and judging from the reviews and the number of readers, the performance of this book should not be particularly ideal. The author should be using love to generate electricity)

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I'm very curious how the author managed to write 60 chapters into more than 300,000 words [laughing]

At first, it may be because of the character of the protagonist that it's not very interesting, but the following chapters are okay.

This white dew is what I imagined. It has awakened my memory of seeking longevity. It feels like it's borrowed a bit from the setting of Seeking Changsheng.

It would be better if the protagonist's transformation process could be written out [Chigua] Reading the comments, I thought the two heroines were Shuangshuang and Shen Qingqiu, but later I found out they were Shuangshuang and the purple-haired brat [eating melon]

You haven't changed back, hehe

It's very beautiful, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

No, who is the protagonist when you write this?