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[Single world] [No harem] [No same-sex orientation] [The first female is Aning] [More original designs]
[Not a cool article, this is just a story to make up for Aning's regrets and fill in the pitfalls of the original work]
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"My name is Bai Chuan. I plunged into the world of Tomb Raider Notes and was hung in the air by the Ghost Hand Vine at the beginning."
"Aning is my team leader and Judekao is my boss. Considering the casualty rate of every company operation, I am panicking now."
"I swear, as long as I can escape from Qixinglu Palace, I will never go to the grave again!"
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Wu Xie: Lao Bai knows everything. If you have any questions, just ask him!
Fatty: In the next fight, look for Dachuan!
Menyouping: Don't say anything, but feel free to give your back to Bai Chuan.
Aning: Humph, although this guy is getting more and more powerful, don't forget that I was the team leader at the beginning!
Reader comments
Hanikezi is super pretty and handsome, and the plot is very appetizing.
Just don't get the experience card, it's worthless
Sigh:-(There really isn't anything good to read about Tomato's books these days.
This is the best Tomb Raider fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato, and it's also the only one I've seen on Tomato that respects the original work of the novel, and the most important thing is that it finally stops engaging in homosexuality. I couldn't stand the gay stuff before, and I didn't read anything else. I just said a few words and a lot of people who didn't know what kind of mentality they liked came to troll me.
All I can say is support it, it's not good for me, not that good, but it's not bad either. I gave it 4 stars because I finally found a tomb robbing novel that is not gay. As long as I keep updating it and it doesn't have any serious negative points, I will definitely read it.
You can see it all at once, and it's hard to imagine that this is a trap created by newcomers. Generally speaking, the characters of most fan fiction characters are inconsistent with the original works, and their behavior is somewhat unnatural. But Aning in this book is a bit softer, but his behavior is natural and his personal character is also portrayed more deeply.
Personally, I prefer the setting of the protagonist. I know the plot, but my personal strength is not invincible. After all, this is a suspense adventure novel. What's the point of being omniscient and omnipotent? At present, it seems that the author has a relatively good grasp of the current rhythm. You can also dig holes in holes. But the hole has not been filled yet, it remains to be seen.
But there are still some shortcomings, and the protagonist Goldfinger is too obvious. It's obvious that you get what you want, so it's not unacceptable for villains to be directly sanctioned by cheaters. However, this kind of store just refreshes the enemy's Noble Phantasm. I feel that the author can think about it.
Okay, okay, now the tomb robbers are all the same kind of people. Finally, an ordinary person like me can watch it [laughs evilly]
I think it has the flavor of the original work. You don't have to chew the stuff up and feed it into your mouth to be an easy-to-understand book. If it looks appetizing, it can also allow people to taste its taste in their minds.
It's good to watch, don't expect to update five or ten chapters a day, just don't update it constantly.
It's good to watch, although the title is a bit bad, but the content is okay, and finally there is someone who is not gay.
In fact, I discovered this book a few days ago. The introduction was not very satisfying, so I put it on the bookshelf. I opened it yesterday. After reading it in one sitting, I felt that it was too little. It seemed to be following the plot, but after the protagonist's butterfly, the Iron Triangle was full of crises and the process was thrilling. I hope the author can update it more.
I don't read much Tomb Raider fan fiction, but this book is more to my liking. It's not invincible, it grows with the protagonists, and it makes up for Aning's regrets.
It's a pity that the eunuch is a fictitious fan on Tomato.
The disadvantage is that the author is a newcomer,
In the interaction in the tomb at the beginning, Aning's little girl appearance appeared too urgently. Life and death were at stake. Aning was also a rich man, so he was at least very familiar with this game.
The second one is the golden finger. The experience card is already an obsolete version.
As for those who commented that they were so aggrieved that they couldn't wait to watch it for a second, I can only say that they read the cool article.
To be honest, it is very difficult to write a serious Tomb Raiders fan novel, and you have to fill in the pits. There are complicated power relations, various conspiracies, and it is very brain-consuming. I hope the author can get through it [laughing]
The emotional drama is not good, but it's written by a newbie and I'll give it 4 stars.
As long as it's not gay, it doesn't matter if it's well written or not. Five-star praise!
Wow, it's really beautiful\(//∇//)\
I watched it in one sitting, it was really not enough! The author greatly cheers for the update (ง•̀_•́)ง[Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
To be honest, I can't stand the first part, but the later writing is very attractive. I hope the author will stop updating. But obviously you have stopped updating for a long time [grievance]. I wish you a happy new year🎆. I hope you can update good content this year. I also wish you good luck and prosperity.
@Pizza without pineapple The author would like to ask what does it mean to modify the plot? I don't understand a bit. What does void all mean? I think it's well written, but I didn't understand that point. Maybe my understanding ability is not very strong. I really enjoy watching the author come on!
Although I am slightly dissatisfied with the character design, it is generally good and I support it with five stars.
Don't let your hard work for so long go to waste.
I have read a lot of tomb-robbing novels in recent years, but there are not many that I can read. This one is pretty good [Chigua]
It's a very good book. Although it doesn't have many chapters, it's very good. I hope the author will update it soon, with more than 60 chapters a day [laughing]
Very exciting, very good tomb robbing fanfic
Faster, faster, even more, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, and besides, you don't want your life, the writing is so good [pouts]
Although it is not a cool article, it is well written. It is not easy to survive in a chaotic organization.
It's nice but too short, I could finish it in one night [shy]
I gave you 4 stars because you updated it too slowly. According to this update, this book can be ranked in the top ten among tomb robbers. I only have two requests: don't let it be unfinished and don't be a eunuch.
Not bad, keep up the good work
The author might as well consider a permanent card in the future.'
Five-star support, it is in line with my personal taste. The update is a bit slow. I hope there will be more updates [laughter]
Hanikezi is super pretty and handsome, and the plot is very appetizing. Just don't get the experience card, it's worthless
Sigh:-(There really isn't anything good to read about Tomato's books these days.
This is the best Tomb Raider fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato, and it's also the only one I've seen on Tomato that respects the original work of the novel, and the most important thing is that it finally stops engaging in homosexuality. I couldn't stand the gay stuff before, and I didn't read anything else. I just said a few words and a lot of people who didn't know what kind of mentality they liked came to troll me.
All I can say is support it, it's not good for me, not that good, but it's not bad either. I gave it 4 stars because I finally found a tomb robbing novel that is not gay. As long as I keep updating it and it doesn't have any serious negative points, I will definitely read it.
You can see it all at once, and it's hard to imagine that this is a trap created by newcomers. Generally speaking, the characters of most fan fiction characters are inconsistent with the original works, and their behavior is somewhat unnatural. But Aning in this book is a bit softer, but his behavior is natural and his personal character is also portrayed more deeply. Personally, I prefer the setting of the protagonist. I know the plot, but my personal strength is not invincible. After all, this is a suspense adventure novel. What's the point of being omniscient and omnipotent? At present, it seems that the author has a relatively good grasp of the current rhythm. You can also dig holes in holes. But the hole has not been filled yet, it remains to be seen. But there are still some shortcomings, and the protagonist Goldfinger is too obvious. It's obvious that you get what you want, so it's not unacceptable for villains to be directly sanctioned by cheaters. However, this kind of store just refreshes the enemy's Noble Phantasm. I feel that the author can think about it.
Okay, okay, now the tomb robbers are all the same kind of people. Finally, an ordinary person like me can watch it [laughs evilly]
I think it has the flavor of the original work. You don't have to chew the stuff up and feed it into your mouth to be an easy-to-understand book. If it looks appetizing, it can also allow people to taste its taste in their minds.
It's good to watch, don't expect to update five or ten chapters a day, just don't update it constantly.
It's good to watch, although the title is a bit bad, but the content is okay, and finally there is someone who is not gay.
In fact, I discovered this book a few days ago. The introduction was not very satisfying, so I put it on the bookshelf. I opened it yesterday. After reading it in one sitting, I felt that it was too little. It seemed to be following the plot, but after the protagonist's butterfly, the Iron Triangle was full of crises and the process was thrilling. I hope the author can update it more.
I don't read much Tomb Raider fan fiction, but this book is more to my liking. It's not invincible, it grows with the protagonists, and it makes up for Aning's regrets.
It's a pity that the eunuch is a fictitious fan on Tomato. The disadvantage is that the author is a newcomer, In the interaction in the tomb at the beginning, Aning's little girl appearance appeared too urgently. Life and death were at stake. Aning was also a rich man, so he was at least very familiar with this game. The second one is the golden finger. The experience card is already an obsolete version. As for those who commented that they were so aggrieved that they couldn't wait to watch it for a second, I can only say that they read the cool article.
To be honest, it is very difficult to write a serious Tomb Raiders fan novel, and you have to fill in the pits. There are complicated power relations, various conspiracies, and it is very brain-consuming. I hope the author can get through it [laughing]
The emotional drama is not good, but it's written by a newbie and I'll give it 4 stars.
As long as it's not gay, it doesn't matter if it's well written or not. Five-star praise!
Wow, it's really beautiful\(//∇//)\ I watched it in one sitting, it was really not enough! The author greatly cheers for the update (ง•̀_•́)ง[Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
To be honest, I can't stand the first part, but the later writing is very attractive. I hope the author will stop updating. But obviously you have stopped updating for a long time [grievance]. I wish you a happy new year🎆. I hope you can update good content this year. I also wish you good luck and prosperity.
@Pizza without pineapple The author would like to ask what does it mean to modify the plot? I don't understand a bit. What does void all mean? I think it's well written, but I didn't understand that point. Maybe my understanding ability is not very strong. I really enjoy watching the author come on!
Although I am slightly dissatisfied with the character design, it is generally good and I support it with five stars.
Don't let your hard work for so long go to waste.
I have read a lot of tomb-robbing novels in recent years, but there are not many that I can read. This one is pretty good [Chigua]
It's a very good book. Although it doesn't have many chapters, it's very good. I hope the author will update it soon, with more than 60 chapters a day [laughing]
Very exciting, very good tomb robbing fanfic
Faster, faster, even more, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, and besides, you don't want your life, the writing is so good [pouts]
Although it is not a cool article, it is well written. It is not easy to survive in a chaotic organization.
It's nice but too short, I could finish it in one night [shy]
I gave you 4 stars because you updated it too slowly. According to this update, this book can be ranked in the top ten among tomb robbers. I only have two requests: don't let it be unfinished and don't be a eunuch.
Not bad, keep up the good work
The author might as well consider a permanent card in the future.'
Five-star support, it is in line with my personal taste. The update is a bit slow. I hope there will be more updates [laughter]