Apocalypse + rebirth + pocket dimension + stockpiling supplies + no saintly do-gooding + ruthless decisiveness. The apocalypse arrives, plunging the globe into extreme weather as terrifying mutated beasts seize control of the world. In his previous life, Xu Song was robbed of all his supplies because he was too kindhearted, and ultimately died in the jaws of a mutated beast. Reborn one day before the apocalypse, Xu Song unexpectedly awakens a spatial ability and stockpiles an enormous amount of supplies. In this life, he’ll make everyone who hurt him pay with their lives, and become the one and only king of the apocalypse!
The writing is okay, and it looks good, but I want to complain about two things: 1. The protagonist came back from rebirth, thinking that he had a great advantage at the end of the world. However, it turned out that several powers were higher than the protagonist, and he was stronger than the protagonist. He awakened his powers before the end. Are you going to write about multiple rebirths? This advantage is not even the slightest bit better than that of the protagonist! 2. After all, it was Doomsday that was killed. Are you so trusting in personnel? No test or anything!
Isn't there still a month after you check the time on your phone when you first reborn? How come it's only one day away in the blink of an eye?
The writing is good, keep up the good work