The Steam-Powered Sui Dynasty

Overall, it's good, but I want to complain a few words. The protagonist is a blacksmith, traveling through ancient times, thinking not of self-preservation, but of becoming an inventor... And because of a few officials, the eldest brother who has been with him for a year has broken up. It seems that there is a serious disease in his head. Also, if you just want to protect yourself, the right thing is to kill those twenty soldiers and move immediately. You are still waiting for others to attack. Damn it, even the most stupid person can imagine that others will come to take revenge, right? If we want to defend the city, shouldn't we recruit more refugees? Otherwise, why not continue to develop in a safe place? In order to survive and not tremble, when someone attacks for the first time, you don't want to buy more weapons and armor, train more soldiers, and change positions and wait for others to stab you. Wang Shichong has killed so many of you, but you still lick your face and take him in. The family members have no objection at all. I am confused. Also, the people in the village can leave whenever they want. Are they all dumb? When you go out, you won't tell others, do you have a grain yield of 5,000 kilograms per mu? Doesn't the author know what kind of temptation high-yielding food is to those wealthy families and ambitious people? Also, the protagonist didn't go out to buy food. Wang Shichong stayed in the village. Is he blind? Can't you see that the protagonist and the refugees are eating things they haven't seen before? Isn't he curious? Don't you know how to inquire? There are also 5,000 members of Yang Guang's personal army, the Xiaoguo Army. After all, they are the emperor's personal army. They can be said to be very elite in the contemporary era. They can't defeat the protagonist with only 2-3 hundred people. Is this something done by elites? Alas, I still like the subject matter of the novel written by the author, but there are some flaws. I hope it can be improved in the future!

Damn it, if you catch the enemy you won't kill him, but you'll imprison him for the rest of his life. Do you still need to send someone to watch over you? If a lot of people were arrested, is that right? Those who talk about meow will not be killed if they are caught in troubled times.

The author uses his own ideas to describe the protagonist's behavior. Do you think time travelers should have an adaptation stage? Just hunting when you say hunting? Just invite the refugees if you say they are invited? People who often hunt don't prepare arrows? Will the land be divided among the refugees after half a year? And let the food thief go? This is a saint who has traveled through time!

It's okay to write

As soon as I entered the world, I only learned to lick, and I always licked around Zhao Tingting. After a few days of peace and quiet, he started to pick up gangsters again. There is no sense of social safety.

Unclear logical thinking

I can only say that I can barely watch it, and I have a lot of complaints.