I Made the Female Supporting Character a Passerby

The author's love plot is too immature. It can be seen that the author wants to perfectly integrate the emotional line with the story line. He does not want the heroine to focus solely on falling in love, so he adds a lot of special events. However, the writing is immature and the integration is not perfect, but it is still okay. There is still something interesting to watch. Keep up the good work! Use this as encouragement!

Okay, I like watching it very much, it's quite innovative

Generally speaking, this is a good article. There are no surprises. I just hope there will be a sequel, but it seems impossible.

Although it felt like there were some holes left unfilled (what was the experiment done by the male protagonist's brother), the ending was a bit too fast. But the overall article is worth recommending. Short and precise

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking